So I wrote this song for my girlfriend and I'll give it to her on our 2 months anniversary.. so please tell me what bạn think of it

Our Love

bạn have a smile that takes me to another world
It leaves me speechless, without saying a word
bạn have flawless eyes, they're like a gift from Lord

I can't live without you
Cuz you're my heartbeat
If bạn wanna set tiếp theo to me
There's a wide open seat
If bạn wanna take it
Just come and make it
ALRIGHT

(Chorus):
This is our tình yêu at 13
We're living our lifes while we're teens
Probably bạn don't know that bạn mean
The whole world to me

and if I had a ngôi sao for everytime bạn made me smile
I would be holding the night sky in my hand
We'll just forget our tears, and walk that mile

I can't sing without
Cuz you're my melody
I can't survive without you
Cuz you're my remedy
Don't leave me alone
Cuz it won't be
ALRIGHT

(Chorus):
This is our tình yêu at 13
We're living our lifes while we're teens
Probably bạn don't know that bạn mean
The whole world to me

(Bridge):
When bạn need me I'll be there
Just to hiển thị how much I care
When bạn cry I'll wipe your tear
When bạn scream I'll fight your fears

(Chorus):
This is our tình yêu at 13
We're living our lifes while we're teens
Probably bạn don't know that bạn mean
The whole world to me