Hows my story so far?

One Perfect july twilight, I was sitting On a đồi núi, hill with my loyal Black Labrador. I was staring at the Blissfull trái cam, màu da cam Red and purple Sky.
"Buddy?" I asked Worried As he seemed to be sad. "are bạn ok?" i continued. He raised His head with his eyes part open.He whimpered.
He rose up as he looked of waking up from the dead. He trotted away from the hill. I followed. Soon we go onto the porch hoặc my blue and white two story country house. He Skimped onto the porch.
I stepped In the house to call my husband Jack. "Jack?" I asked. "yes Darlin?" "sweet tim, trái tim something is wrong with Buddy" i đã đưa ý kiến with a hint of a desperate tone."whats wrong with him?" he questioned. "he isn't eating, He isnt Happy and playful. He's only tired. Honey im afraid Buddy Is dying." the gleam of the twilight sun tinted through the window. "call the vet" Jack ordered. "ok" My eyebrows frowned worrily. I grabbed the phone. "hey Mr. Jeckavock Something is Wrong with buddy." " Whats happening?" he replied. "he Is depressed and may be dying." I cried. "come now! we have NO Time to waste." "ok sir" i đã đưa ý kiến as i hung up. "Jack!" "we have to go to the vets NOW!" "Emily And Gabriel Are in their rooms, I'll grab the Car and bạn get buddy". I ran outside and Whistled "buddy! Here Boy!" He came trotting up the steps. I Picked him up and carried him to the car. "Your gonna be ok" I whispered to him
In an giờ we got to the town. We raced to the Veternarian Office. "sir Here he is" i đã đưa ý kiến as we saw him when we stepped in. He scooped up buddy out of my arms. We sat in the waiting room. After thirty phút of testing. he came out holding buddy. "Miss Mary Beth, Buddy is..."
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