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What do bạn think of this idea?And would bạn read it?(do not copy!!!!!)

Kim is your average 13 năm up until her 14 birthday when she discovers she has extraordinary powers.She wakes up in the middle of the night to find that her eyes have gone a light sparkly màu hồng, hồng colour.Her parents tell her they have powers too.Kim then takes special classes to train her powers were she meets this gut called Kristian.Kristians power is to make people fall in tình yêu with him.Little does Kim knoe her real parents are 'evil' and trying to rid the world of powerless people!Kim falls for Kristian.Kristian asks Kim back to his house where he drugs her.Kim wakes up in her real parents house strapped to a chair!Her own parents are going to kill her for their own daughters powers!!!!!!!
What do bạn think of this idea?And would bạn read it?(do not copy!!!!!)
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I would so read that story sounds good
princesspinkla posted hơn một năm qua
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bạn had me at the sixth line.
dragonrider posted hơn một năm qua
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bạn Mất tích me at the part about tình yêu
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greekgirlA said:
please write it and publish
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cheeeese said:
thats a good story :) whats kim's powers?
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Kims powers are: Controls weather with her moods,plant growth she can kill bạn if she touchs bạn she can control liquids and thats only a few!!!!!I havent thought of anymore!
Cullen-fan posted hơn một năm qua
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what about... can manifest the 4 elements??
1-2vampire posted hơn một năm qua
Elie_star said:
Mmm, I don't know. I'd like to read it... Maybe Kristian will fall in tình yêu with her?
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Dearheart said:
(Sparkly, light-pink eyes?? *facepalm* OMG...)

Sounds to me like bạn have a class 1 Mary Sue in the making. I strongly suggest bạn run your character(s) through this test before bạn go any further.

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It should help bạn get a better idea of where your character's at and which cliches to steer clear from.
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(Sparkly, light-pink eyes?? *facepalm* OMG...) Sounds to me like bạn have a class 1 Mary Sue in the making. I strongly suggest bạn run your character(s) through this test before bạn go any further. http://www.springhole.net/quizzes/marysue.htm It should help bạn get a better idea of where your character's at and which cliches to steer clear from.
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What exactly do bạn want me to do!!!?
Cullen-fan posted hơn một năm qua
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I'm sorry for being rude...it's just that this sounds too much like something you'd find on FanFiction.Net. Like I said, just take a few phút and go through the test. I really think it will help.
Dearheart posted hơn một năm qua
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Chill out. No need to cuss. And dearheart was making A FREAKIN SUGGESTION
Fairstepshaven posted hơn một năm qua
forbiddenLURVE said:
sounds really good!!! if bạn become an tác giả and get it print i'll read it [:
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BiteMeCullen107 said:
nice but bạn should describe it more. i would so read it.
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Cullen-fan posted hơn một năm qua
1-2vampire said:
REALLY GOOOD!! i wanna b an tác giả and am riting a story too!!! im on chptr 11 so im not done yet, my link for the first 2 chapters is,

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PLEASE LOOK AND COMMENT!!!
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booklover101 said:
that is awsome r u going 2 finish it i would tottaly read it!!!
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anakin_fan81 said:
This sound kind of wierd. Maybe bạn should work on the idea a bit and make it less confusing.
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Shepard14 said:
I like the Idea...Although DearHeart? Why is it bạn sem so critical of other ppl's writing? I don't mean to sound antagonistic when i say that....I am just curious....You know...a thought just occured to me....what if người nổi tiếng have profiles on here...hahahah that would be funny
to see their reaction when they see how many những người hâm mộ they have on this website alone..hahahaha
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LOL – Liên minh huyền thoại that was so ngẫu nhiên with the celebrity thing. but that would still be awesome!
BellaCullen96 posted hơn một năm qua
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I KNOW RIGHT! COMPLETLY RANDOM...but i just thought of it and i HAD to share it
Shepard14 posted hơn một năm qua
renesmee13 said:
write thêm will ya?
it was pretty good =)
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samoangirl96 said:
i like the story except the kristian part sorta freaky but other then tat pretty cool story can't wait to read thêm of it
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THE KRISTAN PART IS THE BEST PART!
bananafreak18 posted hơn một năm qua
sickla said:
wow
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writer67 said:
laws of stone of magic rules, do not allow others fall in tình yêu it must be free will, for safety reasons!
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sixtynugget said:
How about while she is attending this magical school she befriends a geeky nerd who can mindread and use telekinieses
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that sounds cool
annalia posted hơn một năm qua
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GOOD IDEA
bananafreak18 posted hơn một năm qua
bananafreak18 said:
WHEN U FINISH IT GIVE ME A HEADS UP CUZ THAT IS A AWESOME STORY!
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tall said:
nic story
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prim17luvr101 said:
My personal opinion is it's kind of boring and not well developed at all.
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Shirohige1939 said:
The story sounds great. I would read it. Sounds very interesting
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Sutelc22 said:
geat nghề viết văn my friend.
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