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Forbidden tình yêu (Epilogue)

posted by DxCFan123

Third Person POV
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Sadao walked up to God and asked him if he was eligible to be in Heaven. God just simply nodded his head. Sadao walked through the large golden gates and found himself walking through his town he lived in when he was alive. He found his way to his house, and swung open the door. Everything was how it was before. He started crying, remembering the memories he had with Kat here. He heard crying coming from his room, so he opened the door and saw a blonde girl curled up in the corner of his room, sobbing.

"K-K-Kat?" he managed to stutter out. The blonde looked...

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Forbidden tình yêu (CHAP. 6)

posted by DxCFan123

This chapter and the tiếp theo will be very quick, for I am probably going to quit Fanpop, there's not enough things for me to do here.
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MONTH 12, 3 WEEKS UNTIL SADAO IS TO DIE
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Kat's POV
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Before I went to sleep, I checked my soul book. It read

SADAO MEIWAKU
AGE: 17
TIME OF DEATH: DECEMBER 28TH, 1:10 P.M.
TO BE KILLED BY: KURO NEKO
CAUSE OF DEATH: HIT bởi A BUS

Tears filled my eyes. I was to kill my tình yêu in 3 weeks. I was going to murder him, and there was nothing I could do about it. It was against the shinigami rules...

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Forbidden tình yêu (CHAP. 5)

posted by DxCFan123

tháng 10

Kat's POV
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"I think they're dating..." some girl đã đưa ý kiến to her friend as we passed them, holding hands. We didn't care what they said, and all of it was true. We were dating, we were in tình yêu with eachother. We kissed eachother in public, we held hands, we told eachother we loved them every 5 minutes. I didn't like to wonder what would happened when Will found out about this, hoặc what I would do when his time came.

AFTER SCHOOL
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"Love you, Sadao." I told him.
"Love you, too, babe."
We kissed eachother, and thought of what to do, considering it was Friday. "We could go out to eat again!" I suggested. "Just somewhere except for that sushi place, I'm getting tired of that place." So, we decided to go to a pizza, bánh pizza place a couple blocks down.

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Excuse the shortness of this chapter.

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Forbidden tình yêu (CHAP. 3)

posted by DxCFan123

HOKAI, so I kindaaa lied last chapter. I'll probably forget about this story in full, so I just decided to fast forward. Now, the story takes place 6 months after they met.

Sadao's POV
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I walked to the mailbox and opened it. Most of it was thuyền mành, rác rưởi, rác mail, but I noticed that one letter was strange. It was sent to Kat, but there was no return address, no name, no nothing. I shrugged it off and went back inside, taking a sip of my hot cocoa, and tried to open Kat's door, but it was locked. I realized that she wasn't awake yet, but it was only 15 phút 'til school started....

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-In the Blink of An Eye- (Chapter One)

posted by Isabella121797

View from Isabella's room...

-Chapter One-

In the blink of a eye, a life can be turned around and upside down. This is something I had found out just mere giây before. When my parents told me I'd be packing up everything I knew and be moving. My name is Isabella Moore and things were just getting started.

It was a cool Thursday night, and my parents had just layed down the biggest news of my life on me.
I was moving out of MY city. Chicago was all I'd ever known and all I'd come to love. My friends, my hopes and dreams, they were all supposed to come true here!... Why was this happening?

A million other thoughts blazed...

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Past and Present (A Tribute to the Potterhead Generation)

posted by dragonsmemory

It's been so long. So long since those opening words were penned in that coffeeshop. So long since we drew scars on our foreheads. So long since we waited for Hogwarts letters. So long since we declared ourselves Potterheads.
Potterhead isn't just a title, it's a way of life. It's twirling sticks and casting spells. It's drinking butterbeer and quả bí ngô, bí ngô juice. It's riding brooms and playing Quidditch. It's living the stories we love.
It's hope and love. Eternal glory and surviving ngày to day. It's the truth of the world. And, perhaps most of all, it's memories.
Potterheads come in different forms,...

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Chapter 1 of ''How there became a Mirai Android 21''

posted by Android_21

Watch out guys for 21!

By:Android_21 How there became a Mirai Android 21
Chapter I:The Androids Attack!!!
____________________Android 21's P.O.V.________________________
It was just like any normal day,except that I was made of metal
and an Android.I had cybernetics placed in my body when I
was 20 bởi Dr.Gero,a crazy lunitic with issues.He did the same
to my brother and sister only I'm stronger and have special
abilities.I heard 17 laugh,18 sigh,and I just rolled my
eyes."Really bro.?Did bạn have to kill him when I đã đưa ý kiến I would
spare his life?" I asked, and he just shrugged and laughed.18
sighed again,and...

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Screams of the Hunted Ch.2

posted by DarkGirl23

The first time I went on a hunt, was the first time I really saw death in any sort of being’s eyes.
I don’t know who I am, what I am. I mean, I couldn’t possibly be considered part of the Hunters. Yet, their blood runs through my veins. They may own an incapability of understanding the true emotions of life, for we have been Genetically-Altered Experiments planned all the way back in 2012. Our bodies and our emotions have become that of a true fighter, a warrior of destruction itself in a world of Nature’s grace that becomes altered in the palms of our Humanoid Species.
We can defeat...

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La última tentación de Poe

posted by shenelopefan

Dañada

Estoy quebrada. Lo que soy es lo que necesitas. Mi corazón se rompió mucho tiempo atrás, pero no me importó. En ti deposité toda mi esperanza. En ti proyecté, todo lo que odiaba de mí misma y traté de curarte.

Estoy dañada. ¿Qué no lo ves? A tu sola disposición estoy ¿No es así? ¿No ha sido siempre así?

Pero tú también estás dañado. Quizás más que yo. Yo quiero arreglarte, cuidarte, hacerte ver lo importante que eres y lo valioso que tú no ves en ti mismo. Quiero que veas lo mismo que yo veo en ti. Quiero que sepas lo importante que eres para mí.

Soy un desastre....

The Stolen ~ Chapter 5

posted by Kimi4312

Chapter 5: A Bleeding Heart.
After Roxana and Selina kissed, they ended up kissing in Roxana's bed, Selina gotten on hàng đầu, đầu trang of Roxana and kissed her lips down to her neck then back up to Roxana's lips "I won't leave bạn again, I promise" Roxana said, and Selina looked into Roxana's eyes "I'am sorry for how I treated you" Selina đã đưa ý kiến and saw Roxana's necklace, she rips the chuỗi hạt, chuỗi hạt cườm off and kisses Roxana, the tiếp theo morning Selina woke up to Roxana watching her, "Are bạn alright?" Selina asked Roxana "Yeah just a nightmare" Roxana said, feeling guitly how she acted with Abe the trước đó night, Selina...

The Sinners' Saint (a short story and contest entry)

posted by Aisuanime

Zoeiz took a subtle relaxed deep breathe. And held it just for a moment.

Christ, bởi highest heaven adored…

The cold blistering air nipped at her exposed cheeks and the tip of her petite nose. A perfect atmosphere for the winters most important day, Christmas.

It was only 7:55 in the morning. Children throughout the modest town would be up bởi now, pouncing on their drowsy parents, eagerly anticipating on opening the wrapped gifts and stuffed bags.

She breathed out, the vaporous air revealing her breath.

Christ, the everlasting Lord…

Naturally, fresh flakes of snow began to fall from the...

My Dream2

posted by coriann

The house lights were on bright. It was a lonely brick house, brownish cream and had a red galvenise roof. there was a square arch around the front door. It was big and had a light and a bench on the side. I walked up the one step to the open door. The boy had already run inside. Contrary to the arch, the inside of the house was black and dim and full of decor and dim lights. I should have noticed from looking at the glass louvers.
I saw a Muslim lady in trái cam, màu da cam on the phone. She was fair (light brown) and thick. The trái cam, màu da cam sari was high up over her knees. "Mam, Mam"
She was laughing, but she...

A Little Too Curious (part 10)

posted by noahnstar1616

-The tiếp theo Day-
I woke up. The sun was shining in my eyes. I called my nurse and asked if she could close the blinds. She did. I grabbed my giường remote and pressed the button that allows new to sit up. Once that is done, I notice a bàn with a tray of eggs, baco, and trái cam, màu da cam nước ép, nước trái cây on it. I reach for the tray and put it on my lap. I begin to eat. Not bad, but not good either. I grab the ti vi remote and turn on the television. I decide to watch Looney Tunes. Then my Grandma walked in.

"Good morning, sweetie." She was carrying a ziploc bag with a bagel inside. "Don't eat that stuff." Shm grabbed...

Winter Wonderland

posted by POPclogger216

I had originally planned doing this for A Choice, with the song sort of depicting what happened, but I decided not to. So, picture this as any couple/ people bạn want, whether they’re form the story, your own, hoặc whoever. Merry Christmas!

I do not own the song, nor (most likely) the plot.

~*~

Two friends; nothing more, nothing less. One, who had never had snow in her giáng sinh memories before, and the other, who had lived with white Christmases most of his life. This is a story of friendship, laughter, a hint of love, and a few memories being made.

~*~

Sleigh bells ring, are bạn listening?
In the...

A Werewolf Criminal - Chapter 1

posted by Kimi4312

- Chapter 1: He's A Stray (Raven's POV) -
For only 20 years, 20 long years sucked for me, when I was only 23 years old, I became a vampire, why? well ask Jacob, my moron and chó cái, bitch of a boyfriend I wish I can strangle, me and Jacob were at a party from his friends, he was being a little prick like always even if people are around he would blame me for it, I was just looking at a couple of beautiful hoa hồng until Jacob grabbed my arm, "Why bạn always looking like a stupid tramp? at least hiển thị some respect for once" he đã đưa ý kiến and jerked my arm away, I ran to the bathroom, I just wish I can go but he's...

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Darkness

posted by darkwave

I had a dream that was not at all a dream

The splendid sun was extinguished, and the stars

Roamed the dark eternal space,

No rays hoặc script, and the icy earth

Revolved and blind negrejante the moonless air;

It came and went in the morning - came and brought no day;

And men forgot their passions in the horror

This desolation, and the hearts cooled

A selfish prayer implored light:

And they lived around the fire, and the thrones,

The palaces of crowned kings, the huts,

Addresses, finally, the genre that was,

In flames gave light; Cities is consumed

And the men gathered at the homes igneous

To look once again...

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Dont Be Afraid

posted by darkwave

Life, he believes, is not a dream
As black as the wise men say they are.
Often a gray morning
Foreshadows a pleasant afternoon and soalhenta.

Sometimes there are dark clouds
But it is only on certain days;
If rain makes the hoa hồng bloom
Why mourn and not smile?

Quickly, happily
The soalhentas hours of life go by
Thankfully, excitedly
Enjoy them as they go flying.

And sometimes when Death appears
And the best that bạn have gone?
And when the pain deepens
And hope it sinks won?

Oh, even then, there is hope of rebirth
Unconquerable, never die.
Happy with his golden wing
Strong enough to make us feel good
Boldly, afraid of nothing
Face the Judgement ngày coming.
For gloriously, victoriously
Courage can overcome despair.

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The untold reality ( part 1)

posted by r260897

( Hi I am here with another story. In this where ever is ‘I’ please consider yourself there )
Mei was busy with her laptop, Tia and Rocket were sitting in a corner D’jok and Thank were enjoying funny performance of Micro Ice. Ahito was sleeping and I was sitting in one corner waiting for Sinned. There was a loud sound coming from another room. Arch was scolding Sinned for his deeds he did in match. When he came he was a bit angry but when I went there he looked with his caring eyes and đã đưa ý kiến “hey l’ll sis I’ll come to take you. Till then live here coz my life is kinda unsettled…”...

Vandals and Crooks

posted by Ragefulchimp

Vandals and crooks
an aging man, caught like a cá on a hook
Getting reeled in, he's easy prey
Eyes sag, creating bags, pupils widen, creating paralysis

Confusion and fear
An ailing man, with cá hooks everywhere
The biggest catch today
Pavement runs red, creating pain, flesh torn, creating animals

Torment and Horror
An aching man, aches no more
The cá hook rips away
Smiles widen, creating youth, blood drips, creating paralysis
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Satan Visits Jesus

posted by Ragefulchimp

As hell started to freeze over, satan had his servants throw thêm wood in the deep, dark, crumbling pits of heck. The slaves of eternity agreed with haste, because if they didnt follow orders, Satan would do horrible things. The Creator of evil was diễn xuất especially evil that day, because he knew what was coming up, Christmas. His yêu thích holiday was on the horizon, and he was still at a loss as to what to buy jesus. He already had wings, and this really cool rubiks cube that was electronic, plus his dad was all powerful, which was pretty neat. He had a couple of ideas...