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posted by anbonie
“Nice performance!”
“Thank you, butler!”
Servant smile to Pieter and opens the door of red Ferrari. While driving no one used to speak, until Pieter say something to his butler and bodyguard:
“Did bạn hear when my voice trembled? I think that was 14th song.”
“No, Sir…”
“When my father isn’t near, please call me Pieter”
“Yes, Si… I mean Pieter”
They arrived to McChink’s mansion. Servant turned engine off and ran on other site of car to open Pieter’s door, but he was too late. “I’m sorry, Sir…” đã đưa ý kiến butler. Pieter sent him angry look: “I can open the door!...
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Chapter 1
Boredom

Thantos was sitting on his bed, continuously throwing and catching his blue foam ball, with his headphones in his ears and âm nhạc playing too loud and combing his medium length black hair out of his bright abnormally coloured eyes.
    “This is so pointless. I need something better to do,” he said, scratching his extremely pale skin.
    Thantos paused his IPod to hear a scream and girls laughing.
    “What the- what was that about?” He asked himself, getting up from his giường and walking to his door.
    “I’ll...
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posted by DxCFan123
Since I will usually end up leaving fanpop for a tháng hoặc two then come back with a new story, each chapter is going to represent a month. So, let's say, bởi now, Kat and Sadao are really close friends, they do everything together, AND FRICKITY FRACKITY FROOK

Kat's POV
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"No, bạn idiot, your doing the bow-hand all wrong!" I yelled at Sadao, and fixed the positioning of his fingers on the violin bow. "Even I know how to do it correctly, and I just started a tháng ago!" I got out my violin and did all the positions, then counted down. On 2, he asked me, "Can bạn sing it to keep...
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I was sitting in my hotel room minding my own business đọc a book when all of a sudden the glass window doors flew open. The giường room was dimly lit and the sun had completely gone down leaving no sunlight to light the room.

I fell off my giường leaving my giường in between me and the window. I would have gotten up to shut the window doors but that was before a figure entered the opening.

There was enough of a shadow cast over the body that bạn couldn't make out any features. But I could tell that it was a man. He stood with a sturdy pose his legs locked in place, his arms on his hips, his head...
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posted by Triscia95
“Caroline I’ve tried everything to prove my self time after time that I tình yêu you, that I would do anything for you, I’d never let anyone hurt you.” Klaus paused as Caroline stood in the door looking down at the hardwood floor tears rolling down her eyes. “That I would die for you.” He finished. Klaus took one step towards Caroline but as he did she took two steps away.

Klaus’s grieved face turned chua and full of anger. Nothing he did hoặc đã đưa ý kiến made her realize that if she asked anything he would do it with out a một giây thought. She shook her head and raced out the door.

He wasn’t...
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In this series of guides, I'll be hiển thị bạn the best techniques for nghề viết văn your story. These are tried-and-true techniques, and they work.
First up: characters. Every story has characters. We all know that. But what bạn may not realize is that some portions of a character need not be mentioned. Why spend three pages on your character's dimples if they have nothing to do with the plot? In order to keep your readers hooked, bạn have to yourself to things that are involved with the plot.
Before bạn decide on a plot, bạn should get to know each of your characters. After all, you're telling...
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"Aw, it's pretty close." Tyler McCarthy and Shawn Detham were standing side bởi side. Both held a gun in a head, but Shawn also held a machete. My hand flew up to my mouth to try to hold back a scream as I realized that the blade was dripping with blood. What if it was a friend of my hoặc Nick's, what if it was a teacher? I buried my face in Nick's back trying hard not to picture it.

"Tyler . . . Shawn, what the hell are bạn guys doing." Both of them had grown up with Nick; they use to play together in there neighborhood. They had, at one point, all been inseparable, but high school hit and like...
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posted by GryffindorGirl2
Jasmine's POV

The freezing darkness pressed down on me,Harry,and Dudley.
"S-stop it bạn two.Now.It-it's not funny." Dudley stammered.
"We're not doing anything Dudley!" I shouted over the wind.
"I swear,if bạn don't stop it,I-I'll hit y-you." Dudley đã đưa ý kiến again.
"Shut up Du-.." Harry began.
WHAM!
The sound of Dudley's fist connecting with Harry's jaw sounded beside me.
"Ow! God Dudley!" Harry shouted.
Before I had time to react,my feet were kicked out from underneath me and I fell to the ground,slamming my already hurt head on the ground.My spine seemed to jolt out of place,then back in,making me moan...
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posted by GryffindorGirl2
Jasmine's POV

Harry and I walked to the park.The hot,dry,humid summer air blowing at out backs.My hair wipped around me,hitting my face and getting in my eyes.No sooner had I moved it away,that the wind blew it back.My sweat áo sơ mi fell around my shoulders,but I pulled it back up.The wind continued to blow,and as I listened,fell into a rythem.The sound of Harry and mine footsteps falling on the quiet đường phố, street sounded like clapping.I raised my arms to the sky and began spinning in circles as I walked.I began to sing,my voice blending with the wind and our footsteps.
"What doesn't kill bạn makes...
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posted by shenelopefan
Dañada

Estoy quebrada. Lo que soy es lo que necesitas. Mi corazón se rompió mucho tiempo atrás, pero no me importó. En ti deposité toda mi esperanza. En ti proyecté, todo lo que odiaba de mí misma y traté de curarte.

Estoy dañada. ¿Qué no lo ves? A tu sola disposición estoy ¿No es así? ¿No ha sido siempre así?

Pero tú también estás dañado. Quizás más que yo. Yo quiero arreglarte, cuidarte, hacerte ver lo importante que eres y lo valioso que tú no ves en ti mismo. Quiero que veas lo mismo que yo veo en ti. Quiero que sepas lo importante que eres para mí.

Soy un desastre....
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posted by shenelopefan
Lo que nunca podrá ser

"Tu… entiendes mi silencio

Sólo tú… conoces mis secretos

Sólo tú… comprendes cada gesto

Sólo tú…"

Apareces tú, la Oreja de van Gogh

Me voy a morir. Arrastro mi cuerpo, adormecido por el dolor en los pasillos de este horrible hospital. La sangre brota de mi cuerpo mientras presiono la herida cerca de mi estómago, dándome fuerzas para seguir. Yo sé que no merezco lo que ocurrió, pero también sé que es completamente mi culpa. Dicen que cuando uno está agonizando, ve pasar su vida frente a sus ojos, que los mejores momentos son recordados. Eso me está ocurriendo...
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posted by Dhampires
I was back at the covent and in Mai's office waiting for her to give me my pay."Like always bạn gets the job done in no time.I'll have to start giving bạn a raise my dear.After all I can't afford to lose bạn can a I?"She prasied me as she went into her an toàn, két an toàn retrieving a small sack of vàng coins.I smiled and đã đưa ý kiến "No need to rasie my pay,I make enough and I'll never leave so long as bạn keep feeding me information like bạn promised." she sighed and turned with the vàng and a package of papers "Of course that's the purpose on why your here." I eyed the papers then shifted my gaze toward her."Yes...
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posted by PotterLambert93
His name was Charlie Brown. We first got him in the fall of 1999. He was cute cocker người nịnh hót, spaniel with the color of brown and had dark eyes. For 13 years, he was a part of our family. We played with him, took him for walks, gave all the tình yêu we had and so much more. He was also a ruff dog as well. Whenever people would come over he would bark at them, thinking that he was trying to protect us from danger. He would also bark at other people's chó when we took him for walks and, he was very capable of biting badly. Despite all of that, we still loved him, and he loved us.

Around a few years ago, he...
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"Hello my name is hoa nhài P. Love,"she đã đưa ý kiến slowly while looking to the ground."Hello Jasmine," đã đưa ý kiến the other people looking at her.Jasmine stops to look at everyone as if she was going to scream and hide.She takes three deep breathes.And says," I am her because when I was four years old I saw my mother and father die bởi a crazed man.His face still haunts me in my sleep that's why I don't sleep no more.I spent my whole childhood in an ophanadge with no Những người bạn nor no enemies because no one noticed me.Not even my family who know about me and didn't...
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posted by PrincessHotEmo
Introduction
I was kidnapped bởi a horrible demon.It kill everyone I knew so no one would try to rescue my me.It rapes me everytime it can.Its busy killing people that di chuyển in the house im in the basement..
well under the basement theres a cave.I'm not goingto joke the demon is pretty hot but still.He brings me little thực phẩm to keep me "fit".He loves me he says,but he lies.I lie awake thinking of how to escape.I'm scared let proud at myself for no reason.My Life is hell most of the time.When your life is terrible bạn never think your good bạn think your worthless.You feel fake,never like a real person.
 The Demon
The Demon
So Analisa and I walked slowly through her village. I looked around as we walked and everyone looked very happy and cheerful. I was very confused. "Shouldn't they be sad?" I asked. "NOT happy-go-lucky?" Analisa chuckled and replied. " There is no need to be sad. For we have food, shelter, and each other." I felt very bad. Just a few hours cách đây I had yelled at my mom for getting mad at me and ran outside. I started to cry again. I sat in the ngọc lục bảo green grass,we had walked into a field,
Analisa asked "What is wrong?" I replied "I want to go home" Analisa đã đưa ý kiến "That would be easier if I knew where bạn lived. Anyways, we need bạn here. bạn cannot leave. I'm very sorry." That didn't help me at all. I layed down on the soft cỏ and cryed my eyes out.
posted by Kimi4312
Chapter 3: Here It Goes Again.
Roxana woke up one night to hear a loud howl outside her window, she slided herself out of giường with her covers wrapped around her, she walked toward the window and saw a somewhat a large white chó sói, sói outside, watching her then it turned its head to hear other Người sói howling, the white chó sói, sói runs off to follow the howl, Roxana felt like she knew that chó sói, sói for a long time, Roxana walked back to her giường and lies down, but she couldn't sleep, she kept tossing and turning but she couldn't sleep, she sat up, grab her wallet and pull out a bức ảnh of a beautiful, pale-skinned,...
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posted by noahnstar1616
-The tiếp theo Day-
I peeked from behind the left corner of the school and saw Cameron carrying Mercury's book towards the school entrance. Perfect. I turned to Zoey and Francine, who were right behind me. "I'm ready. How do I look ?" I had on the outfit Francine picked out for me and the makeup Zoey put on me yesterday. My hair was in a french braid, courtesy of Zoey's mom.

"Beautiful", đã đưa ý kiến Francine.

"I'm jealous", đã đưa ý kiến Zoey.

"Thanks." I turned back to look at Cameron, who had probably forgot something because he was walking back to his car. "Wish me luck." I rushed towards Cameron. "Hey."

"Hey." He...
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posted by GummyBears_11
As screwed up as my life was, I always found joy in singing. I sang everyday, no matter what happened. hát helped me remember a better time. A time when 'he' wasn't around. A time when my mother WAS around. A time when I wasn't alone.

Chapter 1- Ring Around The Rosies

I jerked awake. I was covered in cold sweat, and I still had flashbacks of the nightmare stuck in my head.

"No! Mother, please, don't go!"

There was no use in falling asleep again. It was already 6:40, and soon enough, my stepfather would barge in my room, yelling at me to get up, calling me names, threatening to beat me....
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Hi những người hâm mộ of Writing! I bet we all experienced Writer's Block before, heck, all writers must have. It's frustrating isn't it? So I devised 5 steps to get rid of it and get rid of it fast. If it doesn't work, devise your own plan, but here's mine.
P.S. If bạn don't know what Writer's Block is hoặc if bạn haven't experienced it yet, I'm not giving an explanation so find out what it's like first!

Step 1: Don't Panic
-Panicking hoặc fussing over your running out of inspiration will just make things worse and definitly lead straight to mind blank mode. So just relax and do something else other than writing....
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