Paper And Utensils

This book is a vampire novel. Simple fact is I disliked Twilight so much I decided to write a half-decent vampire novel. So here is chapter 1
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Eve looked back at her wings. They were magnificent, pure white and shining. They stretched out about 20 feet. Grinning, she gave herself a running start and launched into the air. Momentarily just enjoying the rush, she opened her eyes and gasped. Everything looked so small! The river gracefully curved on for miles. Letting out a small giggle Eve dived. Now she could make out a few faces. Her mother, Janet, waved from the thư viện where she worked....

I suppose every writer faces the dilemma of criticism. Sure, some suggestions are instantly convincing hoặc exactly what bạn thought you'd hear. But others create a quandary, like a double-edged sword. Should bạn accept the criticism, make changes in your work hoặc your style, hoặc stick with your own judgment, the one bạn started with? Either way, bạn could be wrong, and it may take years before bạn know the answer. In some cases, there may be highlights in an author's ambition level, hoặc sense of destination, that make the decision particularly challenging.

For instance, in my own case, I wanted...