The Secret giờ - A Poem - nghề viết văn - fanpop

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posted by DietCokeGirl

This is written about the perfect silence only found in the dead of night, and the feelings it inspires.
The tiêu đề comes from the mô tả a friend of mine gave when we were stuck in the middle of nowhere at midnight and I found it sort of beautiful.
Enjoy (I hope) :)

Weighted air and winking stars,
darkness draped, tension wrought.
This night, this hour, is ours.
Silence chimes unspoken thoughts
that choke my mouth.
Silver moonbeams in glittering outline
surround you, and in our youth
this night, this hour, we intertwine.

I'd tình yêu to hear what bạn like hoặc hate.
Thanks for reading.

DietCokeGirl

medouri, Nice-Guy and 9 others like this

Cinders Wow, that was beautifully simplistic. The good kind of simple. The to-the-point kind of simple. You know? Great word choice, you used a lot of descriptive verbs, fantastic! It has a wonderful sacred or holy tone, which I believe is what you were going for. Very interesting. I have no constructive criticism. Bravo.

whitelion great poem, nice job

DietCokeGirl Thank you! You're observation is completely spot-on Cinders, I was definitely trying to convey a feeling of an almost spiritual awe, without drawing on god or religion per se. Also, thank you! :)

karolytea just... beautiful... awesome!!! love it!

sweet_n_silly oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo wow

vans01 The book the dead of night? I think Chris wrote that!!!! Oh by the way i love it

3 Reasons that Why Gravity falls Didn't Actually End !

posted by merna_ac

Gravity falls is an amazing show, And we all cherish it.
note: I have written this bài viết before I read a VIP bài viết bởi ALEX HIRSCH, I will explain it later on this artilce
♦First: we all see in the finale episode of Gravity falls that the only weakness of Bill Cipher is this vòng tròn which All Gravity falls những người hâm mộ know it since the hiển thị had started, and I was excited when ford draw it on the floor, So they collect each other and stand on this vòng tròn and defeat bill.that's the plan, but Unfortunately It didn't complete because Stan refused to stand on it. So the plan didn't complete. the...

Poor Little Gypsy Girl Chapter 1 The Introduction

posted by therealgwyngrim

"Welcome to Paris!", her father, Irobin, said.
The old brown horse pulled the wood caravan into the city. Adeena looked around anxiously and wished she could just see everything at once. Although her family traveled, they had never exactly been to a city- not to settle down in. It occurred to Adeena that this was going to be her new home. She looked around skeptically- there was hardly an inch of nature to be seen. Not one. Just what seemed to be miles upon miles of little wood shops and homes, all side bởi side with the only không gian being the roads and sidewalks. This was strange, the wagon was...

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Battle For The Bunker of cây phong, cây phong, maple Hill:Part 1

posted by Rue24

My name is Carle and I am one of the few immune humans to walk a war torn living dead infested world. Let me take bạn back to before it started 4 years prior to the initial outbreak a couple of millionaires bought an entire đồi núi, hill and fortified it. The middle and upper part of the đồi núi, hill was cleared and a 60 ft. steel enforced concrete tường was put up, the bottom of the đồi núi, hill was encircled with a 30 ft. steel encased concrete wall. Some of the surrounding flatland was also cleared and minimum defenses were put up. Obviously these millionaires knew something we didn’t. This fortress - we locals...

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Daniel Radcliffe: 10 reasons why I respect him so much!

posted by Radcliffemylife

Daniel Radcliffe: Reasons to tình yêu him

Daniel Radcliffe: Reasons to love him

"NOTE: please bình luận if I got anything wrong"

10) He tries his hardest to play the part of Harry Potter and he has never ever stop from living his dream of diễn xuất and he will always be Harry Potter to us!

9) His parents đã đưa ý kiến no to Christopher Columbus's offer for Dan to audition in private for the role of Harry Potter! Until Alan Radcliffe(his father) came in to the bathroom where Dan was, and told him that he got the part. Dan quickly bursted into tears after hearing that he won the part! ( that should deserve AWWWW!)

8) In every school báo cáo it đã đưa ý kiến one hoặc less the same thing which was:...

The Adventures of the Sea ( Chapter 1, Discovering Alanta)

posted by lilly0102

Victoria, a scuba diver, was getting ready to go scuba diving at the Ocean. She always loves to go scuba diving even if it's 10 degrees outside. She has always đã đưa ý kiến the Ocean is too big to see everything on your first trip. Victoria has talked her friend, Ashley, to go with her. Victoria is heading over to Ashley's house to pick her up.

They just arrived to the Ocean, and they are putting on their scuba diving swim suits. "It's time to go in the Ocean," đã đưa ý kiến Victoria. "Okay lets go then," đã đưa ý kiến Ashley. They went and jumped into the Ocean, and they are now swimming deeper into the Ocean. They...

The Last Myth book four: Never Ending Journy Chapter Two: Saying Goodbye

posted by misscrazel

Senfinelin Forest

Aznr ran down the đồi núi, hill to the edge of the cliff. fallen trees scattered the ground and there was no sign of life. Aznr's hair blew back in the wind and memories of the past filled his head...

*Flashback*

Aznr heard a scream that rang through the forest.
Airellion! he thought, immediately recognizing his voice.
'Aznr! LightWater!' he heard the scream again.
This time he ran through the forest towards him. Aznr burst into the clearing and saw Airellion. He had an Mũi tên xanh in his throat and one in his arm. He was surrounded bởi an army of goblins, all heavily armed.
'Airellion!' called Aznr.
Aznr raised...

the mirror of fate chapter one: the chosen lands

posted by misscrazel

June 17th 100,000,000 BC 12 O'clock at night
Four children are born, quadruplets, the youngest born at the strike of midnight. The first child is named Queverial, the một giây Ceelarion, the third Ierailiasha, and the last one is named Mist. The father decides the last child should have a complex name as the others do but the mother has made up her mind that Mist is the perfect name.
Then she sends them through the mirror of fate to find there destiny. They may never return if they do not find it in time.

January 21st 9,999,990 BC 3:30 P.M.
The children grow up living in the chosen lands behind the...

Chapter one of a story... That doesn't have a name. Yet.

posted by tsmith120

My name is Timothy Roger Cole III. This is thêm hoặc less my story.
Well, mine and about a half dozen others. So for the sake of convenience I'm going to tell this story to bạn from a third person perspective, and not always narrate it from my own point of view - since I wasn't present for some of the important stuff, and it'd be easier to tell bạn what happened than recount the tedious discussions on this stuff that I had to go through to get anything remotely resembling a full picture of the events.
I hope bạn appreciate the things I go through for you. Anyhow, let us begin.

Timothy Roger Cole...

A Land Divided - Chapter 1

posted by StarPotterRings

Hows it going do bạn think?

Our story begins with an elf gliding through the trees. His lean body let him jump from cây to cây as if he were flying.
It was spring, his yêu thích time of the year. The daffodils and forsythia were in bloom, and the trees were once again turning green. He stopped on a particularly large branch and looked up into the clear sky. His dark blue eyes without the memories of the horrors of war, his skin without the scars of the torture it brings. For he was yet young, and all the time he has been alive has been peaceful.
He flew once thêm through the trees. He loved...

Mana and the Pet, Chaper 2

posted by queenpalm

Chapter 2
"Please! Please! Please!" I begged. My parents exchanged glances, then looked back at me.
"You want a lemur, Mana?" Mr. Walker asked.
"Yes! Please! I'll take really good care of her!" I pleaded.
"How much would it cost to take care of it?" Mrs. Walker asked.
"Well, they eat fruit, and not much because they're so small. Plus, this vong linh, vượn cáo was circus trained, so she shouldn't need anything special."
"What about health, and the veterinarians?"
"I'll turn 12 in a week, so I can babysit thêm often. I can use that money to pay for the vet's bill," I said, really having no idea. I just agreed to...

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Nightfall #1(COMPLETE REWRITE) Chapter 9

posted by adamk

CHAPTER NINE:
On the drive back to my apartment, I cannot help but feel something is amiss. What it is, I don’t have a clue. As I continue the drive, I once thêm delve into my past…
CRYSTAL FALLS: 1850
I awaken an giờ later, still in pain from the sun’s rays. I feel Perry’s dried blood on my face, and find myself disgusted at what I have done. I cannot believe the situation I’ve landed myself in. About ten phút later, Perry returns to the cave. From where I do not care, hoặc even want to know. I feel nothing but burning hatred and contempt for him. I still do not know what prevented...

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Nightfall #1:(COMPLETE REWRITE) Chapter Seven

posted by adamk

CHAPTER SEVEN:
I return to my apartment, and turn off the police radio, which is only reporting the incident I was involved with earlier that night. I suddenly feel tired once again, and this shocks me. As I lay back on the couch, I continue thinking of Pike, and my first night of being a vampire.
CRYSTAL FALLS: 1850
I hesitate, and then follow Perry outside. Only moments ago, I found myself full of anger, yet at the same time, worry, although not for my own sake, but for my father’s, who is still asleep in the other room. For some odd reason, I am in pain, not from my wound, which has disappeared...

The Guardian of Zamari chapter 1

posted by ITF

A shadowy figure silently brushed the silken curtains aside as she slipped through the open window and stepped into the dark chamber. Passing a small bàn and a bed, the cáo, fox quickly headed towards a cabinet that stood against the far wall.
Beaded necklaces hung above a oval mirror that was set in the center. Her eyes rested on a miniature strongbox half hidden behind the mirror.
Paying no heed to the deafening clatter coming from the oblivious guest downstairs, she skillfully picked the tiny lock and raised the lid. It was hard to tell what was what in the darkness, so she emptied it into...

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Annabelle (warning... this story is very depressing, does not end happy) (also very intense)

posted by CatiePotter

My name is Annabelle. I am sixteen and I am beaten.

I lived with my dad and mom in that trailor park on the edge of town between the bar and the strip of stores everyone avoids. We lived happily until my mom, Mary, died in that car crash five years ago. My dad became depressed, drinking alcohol and gambling. He was soon unemployed, so to keep the trailor I had to drop out of school. He is now a deep alcoholic and gambles with his buddies every other day.

Whenever we run out of spirits he hits me. He keeps hitting me until I go to the bar nearby and get more. This happens every two days bởi his...

Chapter 1 of My New Story (I Dont Have a Name Yet...)

posted by PonygirlCurtis7

My breath came out in a white, Nữ hoàng băng giá đám mây before me and smelled heavily of my mint gum. My footsteps’ sounds were wet on the sidewalk. It had rained just before I left the bookstore and, just bởi my luck, someone lấy trộm, đánh cắp my car (boy, was my dad going to have a cow when he hears that…), so I had to walk all the way trang chủ in the wet night, all bởi myself. I prayed silently that I would be able to find my way because I was new in town and barely knew where everything was. I had to use a crappy GPS to find the bookstore. I was just lucky I found it.
The town was Cassidy....

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Keep Breathing, Just Keep Breathing

posted by brandonaz

Hiya! First stab at adding something I wrote to the nghề viết văn spot. This is a cliche little story inspired bởi the Mayday Parade song "One Man Drinking Games." các bình luận would mean the world. (:

And bạn swore bạn saw me laughing, and I swore I saw bạn smile
And the time we've spent together was meant to last us quite a while
As I take this piece of bạn with me I'll carry to my grave
Knowing that for someone you're an Angel sent to save

He touched the tip of his index finger to each of the freckles that dotted her arm. He drew patterns, connecting the delicate dots into hearts and bướm and lopsided...

Super-natural chapter 1 Nowhere to hide.

posted by fiestagirl12345

Scarlet's P.O.V

I woke up feeling the rough but smooth texture of my worn down bed. I looked around tiredly yawning getting up to change I got my things and headed out. The village was mostly quiet rarely its loud. Our village was very poor. I went in the woods we were banned from going in their. I went in anyways I went alone I had no buddies at all. I was in woods shooting some arrows It was like 98 degrees out I was sweating. Their was a ant on my arm I tapped and hit my hand and shacked it when water swooshed up. I curiously tried again I moved my arm up and the water rose up. I smiled in...

manga Review:The Art of Vampire Knight

posted by ZekiYuro

Vampire Knight is one of Viz's top-selling series, and it's not hard to see why: While it's not for everyone, the tình yêu triangle, Supernatural romance, and hint of forbidden tình yêu are like catnip for some readers. The Art of Vampire Knight, released earlier this tháng bởi Viz, is a beautifully produced art book that will be pure heaven to Vampire Knight junkies (but probably a bit boring for everyone else).
The book collects the full-color art that manga-ka Matsuri Hino created for the chapter openings in LaLa magazine and the tankoubon covers. Some have been published as part of the English-language...

Hehehe.... another poem.....

posted by AuthorForPooh

This is for all the kids who are bullied bởi words. My teachers always say be bleacher people. Lift others up. I hope this poem gives that message to others.

bạn yell at me
mean words.
They
pierce my heart.
I say its ok.
I di chuyển on.
But the words
still have power.
They still hurt
me.
My friends
tell me
its a big deal,
and that I
need to tell
a teacher.
But I say im fine.
Im really not.
I want to
believe
that im fine,
I want to
believe that
it was
nothing.
But it was
something.
Words always
have power.
Enough power to
strike me
down,
hoặc lift
me up.
Why must
bạn hurt
me?

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Broken Solitude (A very short story)

posted by Zero_Delta

I stood on the edge of the field, my sword raised to shield my eyes from the falling sun. "I'ts beautiful," I thought, staring out at the curve of the hills and the waving of the cỏ and trees, the grays and browns of winter, with the slightest hint of spring green.
I notice a movement off to my left and my sword drops to my side. It is the hàng đầu, đầu trang of a xe đẩy, giỏ hàng coming into view as it crested the hill. I sigh and walk back to the woods, knowing what would come next. The driver rings a signal chuông, bell viciously, clearly wanting me to stop. "Leave me alone." I mumble, I knew I should have stayed in the...