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posted by mitchie19
5.S l E E P O V E R M O D E

The doorbell rang. “Mariah! The pizza’s here,” Nikki shouted from downstairs.
Nikki Lim is my friend. She’d helped me pass my Chemistry test bởi teaching me how to solve the frikin’ formulas our adviser gave us and that was a relief. I went downstairs. “Here the money,” I handed it to him. “Thank you!” Nikki waved before I locked the door. Why’d we order pizza? It was my idea to have pizza, bánh pizza with Nikki while Aeyla and Norah went to town to celebrate some event down in Houston Street. This is a sleepover. I want to do something fun before I go to Aunt Lourdes’ house and it is happening right now.
“The pizza, bánh pizza guy is so hot,” Nikki giggled and she interrupted my thoughts.
I grabbed 2 cans of cô ca from the fridge while she talks about the “hot” called pizza, bánh pizza guy. “Do bạn agree?” she added smiling.
“Um…I don’t think he’s that hot. I mean he’s fine looking. A bit shorter bạn know,” I shook my head. Nikki leaned on the bàn and tapped her fingers.
“You think? Do bạn think—oh! You’re the one who’s crushing on the Riley guy.
He’s short too for your type,” she teased. I don’t want to talk about him.
Not tonight.
“He’s not short. bạn haven’t seen him yet,” I snapped, about to giggle. Oh come on! Why do I need to giggle? “And, I don’t want to talk about him,” I added. Nikki sat down in the couch. “Wait, is he cute?”
She giggled waiting for a positive answer. I didn’t answer her first. I went to microwave popcorn.
While waiting for an answer, she went upstairs to change into giường clothes.
I sighed. Why does everyone have to talk about Riley? Can they just pause that subject? I shook my head. After the first few phút the room smelled like buttered popcorn. I handed a tray and placed everything needed.
Chocolates, pizza, cokes, bắp rang bơ, bỏng ngô and two glasses of sữa were on the tray.
Nikki jumped down the stairs. “Ooh. Let me help you,” she đã đưa ý kiến getting the bowl of bắp rang bơ, bỏng ngô and the chocolates. “Thanks,” I replied. “This is so good,” she picked one. “Wait, save it for upstairs,” I laughed. Grapes, I thought. I forgot the grapes.
I quickly grabbed the grapes from the trái cây basket and we both went upstairs.


“Which movie do bạn want?” I searched through the shelves. I haven’t changed to my giường clothes yet. I’m still on my jeans. Nikki was chewing on popcorn. “Anything, what do bạn have there?” she added. I tiptoed so I can read the other titles from above. “Bring it On, Dear John, Valentines Day, umm….She’s the Man?” I asked. “She’s the Man? Yes! She’s the Man, I haven’t watched it yet. Play it,” She đã đưa ý kiến as if she one a Golden Award. “Kristie told me that this was her favorite.” The DVD player opened, I placed the DVD inside.
“That’s cool,” I said, sitting on the giường beside her.
The movie began.
During the movie, we laughed together until our lungs burst out. This was fun.
I liked the movie, really. I tình yêu romantic comedy movies. They make my day.
Time passed bởi it was already 11:45 pm. Aeyla and Norah haven’t arrived yet.
They will soon, I think. “Goodnight Mariah,” Nikki đã đưa ý kiến beside me.
“Goodnight too,” I smiled. The light switched off as I turned it.


The moment I woke up this morning, I felt a little nervous. The idea of spending the summer with my Aunt and her kids made me decide not to go. But, I have to.
I agreed already. There was no turning back.
I looked at the time. It was past 8 am. I need to get up.
After a vòi hoa sen and I changed my clothes, there was a knock on the door. It was Norah. “Breakfast is ready,” she smiled at me. She has the sweetest smile.
I laughed. “Thanks, Norah. I’ll be down in a minute,” I said.
She smiled and shut the door.
I brushed my hair, grabbed my stuff and went for the door.
Downstairs I saw Aeyla, Sean and Norah eating eggs. They were talking.
“Good morning everyone,” I sat on my usual chair. “So, you’re off to the Cruz’s now?” Sean asked still chewing. And I heard him mumbled “Excuse me.”
“Yeah I’m a little nervous, though,” I scooped eggs and two hotdogs.
Norah stood up and went to the fridge. She got a pitcher of táo, apple juice.
“Everyone gets nervous, honey,” Norah đã đưa ý kiến pouring nước ép, nước trái cây in our glasses. “Just be yourself,” Aeyla added placing her plate in the sink. “Ready?” Sean asked Aeyla.
“Yeah, wait. I’m just going to grab my bag,” Aeyla went upstairs.
I chewed and drank juice. “Where bạn guys going?” I asked curious. “Art class,” Sean said. I looked at him, puzzled. “She wants to try something new, bạn know girls these days,” he explained. “Ooh,” Me and Norah chorused as if we get it.
Sean replied, “Yep.”
Suddenly Aeyla appeared from upstairs. “Gotta go, good luck Mariah, and tình yêu you” she hugged me. “We’ll come to visit, sometime, ‘kay?” she added.
“Okay, have a an toàn, két an toàn ride,” I đã đưa ý kiến as she went for the door. Then I looked at Norah and hugged her.

This is it, I thought. My scooter went to a stop on the gate of the subdivision.
I read, McKinley Hills.
“Cruz residence,” I said. The security guard gave me a visitor pass.
“Turn on the tiếp theo street, then bạn will turn right, then left, when bạn see a house with việt quất, blueberry trees on both side, you’re there.” the security guard pointed. I nodded and answered thank you.
This is such a quiet place. Quiet, but beautiful. I never seen so beautiful.
Most of the houses here are mansions. I turned my head left to right, admiring the place. There are parks and oh! Look a pavilion, how nice. Like the ones bạn see in A Lọ lem Story were Chad and Hilary danced, I giggled recalling that scene. Call me crazy but, I never seen a place like this, promise.
On the corner of the street, an old lady stood there, cutting grass. She suddenly waved at me, like we knew each other. I smiled and honk.
I made a left. I saw the twin trees the security guard was saying. I opened my mouth. “Oh. My. God,” I pronounced each word. “You’ve got to be kidding me,” I went down. I think we got the wrong house last weekend the one we had a graduation after party? Nope. “This is the one,” I answered my own question.
The house’s structure has a big gate not taller than the trees, thêm like on the level of its trunk, two big red brick walls on both sides covered in vines.
Then on the middle, inside the gate, a đài phun nước stood there.
Suddenly the gate opened bởi itself. I revved my scooter and went inside.
I didn’t expect this kind of structure. This is going to be an unforgettable summer, I think.
BUMBLESTRIPE PTV
Bumblestripe padded into his den and looked around for Dovewing, then he remembered she was out hunting around for us. All of his instincts told him to go and find her and hunt with her. Be her warmth on the leaf-fall night.
Then he got up and did so, he raced all around the territory looking for Dovewing but there was no sign.
Then he looked up at the moon and remembered she might be at the island. He raced over to the island and stepped onto the branch.
He looked up at the moon and saw the Great Oak. There were two mèo at the hàng đầu, đầu trang of the Great Oak. They were sharing tongues...
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posted by Liz4Avril
One morning on Goth Lane, Janet Leyman woke up, she did her usual routine. She got dressed took a shower, and put on her makeup. But meanwhile... she didn't know what was waiting.
Her tiếp theo door neighbor, is a vampire. She went over to her neighbors house, Antoniette. Then while she knocked someone opened the door, a tall skinny lady with pale skin and dark hair. "Who are you?" Asked Janet. "I'm Avoca, Antonitte's sister. Why are bạn here?!!?" đã đưa ý kiến the stranger in a negative cold voice. "I, I just wanted to see Antoniette." đã đưa ý kiến Janet. "She's over this way follow me." đã đưa ý kiến Avoca, motioning Janet...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Two

Olivia Meyers hopped in her used brown truck. Today was the ngày she was going to prove everyone wrong. She wore her purple dây dress with a thick, black thắt lưng, vành đai around her waist. She also had some fishnet stockings and black boots that almost reached to her ankles. Her mom had left this outfit out on her giường this morning. Olivia felt wrong for not wearing it but it made her feel too exposed so she wore a gray áo khoác also. Her strawberry-blonde hair was extra curly today then usual. It was also extra thick.

She cranked the car four time for it to finally start running. It was her dad's...
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As I awoke the tiếp theo morning Mother was already hard at work makeing breakfest and cleaning the house even though it was already spotless, "Mother are bạn alright?" I asked comeing from upstairs still kinda dizzy from last night's ordeal, "Yes dear just doing some cleaning." Mother replied as she started to clean the bookshelf, "Mother it seem's something has spooked you." I đã đưa ý kiến siting down at the bàn "It's nothing Max!" she replied with fear in her voice I looked at her with great concern, *Barking* "What is it boy?" I đã đưa ý kiến with a worried tone as I reached to pet him but something was wrong,...
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posted by MerlinLemon
1
~ Beginning ~


Me and my best friend, Leo, both work at the same dumb pizza, bánh pizza cửa hàng mostly every night of the week, we both get paid the same amount and work the same number of hours. The only difference – I do the deliveries.
I ride this crappy little flat-tyred around the neighbourhood – which, bởi the way, is so small I memorised it bởi the age of seven – delivering pizza, bánh pizza after pizza. Sometimes I wonder how such a small town can order so many pizzas. I deliver about twenty each Thursday night… to the same houses. Still, they know me so well the tips are considerably higher.
But moving...
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HEY! SORRY I HAVEN’T đã đăng ANYTHING IN SO LONG, IT’S BEEN LIKE A năm SINCE MY LAST POST. I DON’T REALLY HAVE ANY EXCUSES BUT DON’T WORRY I’M BACK NOW! ANYWAY THIS WILL BE THE LAST CHAPTER IN THE MY TRUE tình yêu SERIES- I’M SO SAD! ALTHOUGH I tình yêu IT VERY MUCH AND HAVE REALLY ENJOYED nghề viết văn IT, I FEEL THAT I HAVE EXHAUSTED NESSIE’S STORY NOW. BUT I WILL BE nghề viết văn ANOTHER, TWILIGHT RELATED SERIES WHETHER IT WILL BE ABOUT NESSIE hoặc NOT, I DON’T KNOW. ANYWAY THANKS FOR STICKING WITH ME FOR SO LONG AND I KNOW THIS HAS BEEN A VERY LONG MESSAGE BUT IF ANY OF bạn ARE GOOD AT ART OR...
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posted by jacob_lover5253
Nick looked around. "Hmmm. How 'bout we play the Wii. I bet I can bet you." I smiled. "You're on!" We played bowling and he beat me. We played golf and I beat him. My mom came in. "Karleigh, come here for a minute." "Coming." I yelled. "Nick, just keep playing. bạn can take my turns if bạn need to." "Mmhmm." I walked into the kitchen. "I'm taking bạn and your sisters to the movies. We are going to see Toys Story 3!" "Yay." I đã đưa ý kiến lamely. I walked away. "What was that all about?" Nick asked. "My mom wants to take me and the girls to go see Toys Story 3. I-" Nick interrupted. "I wanna go see...
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Chapter One
Ashelyn (Ash):

    The first thought I had waking up in the morning was, today’s finally the ngày I’ve been waiting for all my life.
Pushing away my thoughts, I rolled over on my bed, and wiped the sweat off my brow. Pushing aside the velvet curtain that covered the hole in the tường that was my window, I squinted in the early morning light.
    It was mid-September, and the heat was something awful. Even now, not even eight hours into the day, I could see the sun beating down on the ground. Dirt from the paths swirled in the air, making it...
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posted by emmett
Lonely Girl

So peaceful in sleep she lies
Brown hair spilled across her pillow
I can picture her beautiful eyes
Looking into her dreams…

She looks like she’s not listening
But really she’s deep in thought
Remembering forgotten memories
When she lived life as she ought

Stolen kisses in the night
Laughing with her friends
Little did she know back then
This is where it all would end

Her tim, trái tim is filled with regret
Always looking back
She wishes she would just forget
And find happiness once thêm

I don’t think she’ll ever forget you
But for now there’s joy on her face
She keeps reminding herself
It’s not a race, to be the first to find your place

Now as the sun goes down
She’ll say a prayer
Wishing perhaps for you
But really, life’s not that fair
There’s nothing this Lonely Girl can do
posted by BellaSwan636
Serena

There isn't a lot left to say. I guess happy endings can happen, but the struggle to get there isn't always that straightforward.

It wasn't that easy. And I wouldn't wish it was. Because that made it worth it.

I glance down at my hand for the umpteenth time that day. The small circular stone set on a silver band.

I'm twenty six...so that's seven years. Seven years since...

I never have and never will regret any of that.

"Serena, are bạn even listening to me?!" Kayla shrieks from the other side of the dressing room door. "Come on! You've been in there, what, fifteen phút now?"

She graduated...
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posted by BellaSwan636
Ashleigh

We got to go the hospital. A nice lady wearing white stuff gave us lollipops, and we got to play teaparties. There was another girl there, and she was five. I wanna be five. But I'm turning four in, um, I think mommy đã đưa ý kiến a month? I dunno. But bạn have to be four before bạn can be five, I think. Why can't I just skip it?

Anyways, now there is a big girl living in the guest room. She says her name is Kayla. She has shiny goldish hair. Like Jamie's mom, but with brownish stripes in it. It's long. Like if she sits down, she almost sits on it. My hair is only halfway as long.

My mommy gets...
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Chapter two: Secret Lab
The doors of the elevator swung open. The three walked in slowly curious on what was in that room.”This place is really dusty” Kylie said. She got her special clean handkerchief and dusted off an area in the dirty room. Under the clump of dirt she dusted off, was a big bright blue button. The button đã đưa ý kiến “Lab generator”. “What’s that?” asked Alia. “Well, only one way to find out” Daniel said. He pushed the button and the room began shaking. “Whats-up-with-you-and-pushing-buttons” asked kylie as she began shaking with the room.
The room stopped shaking....
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posted by karah1999
 Willow May Rains. 15 Yrs Old!:)
Willow May Rains. 15 Yrs Old!:)
Tik Tok on the clock,but the party don't stop!!Tik Tok!"

I covered my ears so I wouldn't hear the rest of that horrible song.People must be tone deaf to actually like it.

I watch as my sister went to turn off her alarm clock.That's when I remembered. Today we were going to see that horrible band in buổi hòa nhạc because my bestfriend got tickets.My sister likes them too.The band name is Snakebite.I think they are a horrible band that are wanna be screamo/rock popstars.They suck ass.

Let me introduce myself.

I'm Willow May Rains,your regular fifteen năm old girl.I tình yêu screamo and rock bands.Real screamo/rock...
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posted by Rae-Ash
Do bạn know what it's like
To be in this world alone?
To be so different
That no one understands?

As we wish upon the stars
For the very first time
We stand there
Like time is ours
In a world
That's speeding by

Do bạn know what it's like
To be in this world alone?
To be so different
That no one understands?

So here we stand
In the wake of our dreams
Hoping and wishing
For a day
That they can come true
Hoping for a world
Where I can fit

Do bạn know what it's like
To be in this world alone?
To be so different
That no one understands?

Now I sit here all alone
In a world where I just don't fit
I sit here alone
Never knowing...
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After Skipper and Katherine told the story to Kowalski and Rico, they went to theirs beds. But when penguins went inside to their HQ, they noticed Private wasn't in his bunk. The TV was turned on.
"Hello peng-you-ins" đã đưa ý kiến a familiar voice. Penguins lookes at the TV.
"Blowhole!" đã đưa ý kiến Skipper in angry.
"I kidnaped someone, do bạn who?" asked Blowhole and he laughed evilly.
"Private..."said Skipper "If bạn hurt him I'll kill bạn Blowhole!"
"Oh, I'm scared" đã đưa ý kiến Blowhole and laughed again "If bạn want save him, bạn must come here, alone, without your team"
"I'll came"
"But Skipper..." đã đưa ý kiến Kowalski.
"You...
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Chapter 2
Three Months Earlier

There was not much bright where I was. Just dull, cheap lamp-light. Ya know? The cheap light that bulbs give off. Not until I stepped out into the golden hue of this evening’s sunset could I get a good picture with my eyes. I had been in a bar with my Những người bạn or, as it’s usually called, my gang. It wasn’t a real rough bar, the one I had been in. there were a couple fights every so often, but not much. Gavin, the owner, was good about that. He didn’t want the fuzz hiển thị up all the time, so when he wanted a fight to stop, it stopped. He could persuade almost...
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the first part: www.fanpop.com/spots/true-writers/articles/171410/titl...ter

SECOND CHAPTER
Paul Dock was bent with the nose that pratically touch the floor. He studying the crime scene, as usual. He isn't convinced that the assassin is Elvira Gorrige. It would be too obvius. He doesn't find nothing intresting on the stage, so he goes behind of that.
-Can i help bạn sir, are bạn sick?- asks a female voice, seeing the detective with the nose on the floor.
-Oh, no thank bạn i'm good, i'm detective Dock, i was looking for something here.- các câu trả lời Dock with a smile on his face
-may i ask bạn some question...
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posted by ZekiYuro
If you've learnt British English and you're travelling in the States,or if you've learnt American English and you're travelling in Britain,you'll notice some differences.An obvious difference is the accent,but most travellers find that they don't have too many problems with this.There are some grammatical differences,but they shoudn't make it difficult to understand people,or to communicate.That leaves differences in vocabulary,which can cause misunderstandings.Sometimes the difference is only the spelling,for example,in British English 'center','colour',and 'travelled',and in American English 'centre','color',and 'traveled'.But sometimes the word is completely different in British and American English,and it's good idea to be prepared.
using correct grammar will make a difference between appearing professional and educated hoặc uneducated and ignorant. Many people make common grammatical errors when they write and when they speak. Use these steps to avoid the most common errors and sound intelligent and well informed

Tips:

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Make sure that verb tenses match. If the subject is present tense, then the verb must be as well. The same principle applies to past tense subjects and verbs.

2


Think about whether the subject is single hoặc plural. Words like don't, aren't, were, are and were belong with plural subjects. For example, "It don't...
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posted by DarkGirl23
The ngày my sister died, was the ngày I, myself, died as well.

She may not have knew it, but she was my hero.
I guess, however, all big sisters were kind of like that.

I remember seeing it, the body, the blood, the note she left in her own form of representation.
It was written, all across the wall, the note she left behind was in her own blood.

Hatred.
What a word, so different from hated; just a different form.
Which one am I? I should be described as both.
I hate you, and I know bạn hate me too. Everyone does.
Here are my final words to you:
Pain is welcoming
Crawling down my arm so slow
Blood that leaks...
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