Once upon a....you know what, forget this cliche starter!
1. Start Off With Someone Saying Something!
This would be what my annoying language art teacher called a "Grabber." Get the readers attention bởi introducing a character through dialouge. For example;
"Hey Caleb, do bạn need a ride?" Caleb morgan turned to see his friend Chikara Wang cruising beside him in his car. Chikara was really the only one of his Những người bạn who knew how to drive. He himself was stuck walking.
"Sure, why not?" He climbed into the passenger side beside him.
2. The Good 'Ol mô tả Scene!
Every now and then, we come across the decription scene. A paragraph of "It was a bright and sunny morning. Birds were chirping in the sky." While it's not my yêu thích way to go, some people manage to make it work. Try describing the town hoặc where the story takes place, hoặc the building your characters are currently in. School? Thier house? The bowling alley?
3. The "Code Red" Alert!
Try to get the reader's attention bởi saying something urgent. For example, in Maximum Ride, the main chacter, Max, starts off bởi saying your lives are in danger if bạn don't read her book. The book is about a group of children who were genetic experiments. So if your trying to breach to a teen/pre-teen audience, it really hits close to home. I wanted to include the opening on this bài viết but I couldn't find it. Poo! Many times, these "Code Reds" could be used as prolouges.
4. The Action Scene!
The action scene. It's a part of the story where something really big is happening. Usually a battle hoặc major drama. Take the first chapter of Maximum Ride for instance!
The funny thing about facing imminent death is that it really snaps everything else into perspective. Take right now, for instance.
Run! Come on, run! bạn know bạn can do it.
I gulped deep lungfuls of air. My brain was on hyperdrive; I was racing for my life. My one goal was to escape. Nothing else mattered.
My arms being scratched to ribbons bởi a briar I’d run through? No biggie.
My bare feet hitting every sharp rock, rough root, pointed stick? Not a problem.
My lungs aching for air? I could deal.
As long as I could put as much distance as possible between me and the Erasers.
Yeah, Erasers. Mutants: half-men, half-wolves, usually armed, always bloodthirsty. Right now they were after me.
See? That snaps everything into perspective.
Run. You’re faster than they are. bạn can outrun anyone.
The Dream Sequence!
Now, picture that same scene above and picture the next. Max sitting upright in her bed. It was all a dream. The dream sequence is commonly used in today's media. bạn see it all the time in ti vi and movies. It could also be used to start off the một giây chapter!
5. Introduce The Character!
Another way to start off, introduce your characters. This way the reader will get a first hand experience of what your characters are like, and maybe gain a little thêm information about them.
Do your Own Thing!
It's always important to do your own thing, no matter what other people think. Your story. Your mind. Your imagination. Nothing in my silly little bài viết should tell bạn how to write correctly. It's merely here to give bạn ideas. There's no right hoặc wrong way to write a story.
With this last little word of encouragement...I bid bạn farwell. Happy writing:)
Another poem bởi me. This one came out kinda lame,but I'll let the rating be the judge (assuming there will be any).
That Girl
Have bạn seen that girl,
That goes around here and there?
Nobody knows where she’s going,
Is she even going somewhere?
Pretty face, pretty hair,
Nobody knows her name,
She seems sad, what a coincidence,
I’ve been feeling the same.
She seems lost,
Doesn’t even know where she’s from,
I’m a nice guy so I invite her,
To stay in my home.
She seats in the couch,
My, is she pretty?
I wonder what I can say,
To comfort that girl , so dreamy.
Sarah,
She tells me it’s her name,
She feels sad,
Funny,
Because I’ve been feeling the same
That Girl
Have bạn seen that girl,
That goes around here and there?
Nobody knows where she’s going,
Is she even going somewhere?
Pretty face, pretty hair,
Nobody knows her name,
She seems sad, what a coincidence,
I’ve been feeling the same.
She seems lost,
Doesn’t even know where she’s from,
I’m a nice guy so I invite her,
To stay in my home.
She seats in the couch,
My, is she pretty?
I wonder what I can say,
To comfort that girl , so dreamy.
Sarah,
She tells me it’s her name,
She feels sad,
Funny,
Because I’ve been feeling the same
Photo by Steve McAlister
Hope I manage to get your juices flowing!
I wrote this yesterday when me and my boyfriend had a big fight and it's a fight that may go on for a long time. I know I am young to write something like this but, I guess it helps. Plus If bạn don't like it just tell me, ok?
The Power of Words
bạn and I had this big long fight,
It felt like the storm during the night.
It was verry sad and cold,
My Những người bạn had to like bạn a lot
and bạn felt like I forgot,
forgot about you.
But I had a prodject due.
bạn think you're mr. I'm so cool
but bạn used to act like a ghool.
Not to the people bạn love,
to the sensetive people like a dove.
How we spoke with eachother,
made bạn feel much better.
But the fight we had,
bạn đã đưa ý kiến was nothing but it was bad.
See ya pal we're ova,
take the cell bạn gave me and do me a fava.
Just don't ever,
Never...
Talk to me again!
The Power of Words
bạn and I had this big long fight,
It felt like the storm during the night.
It was verry sad and cold,
My Những người bạn had to like bạn a lot
and bạn felt like I forgot,
forgot about you.
But I had a prodject due.
bạn think you're mr. I'm so cool
but bạn used to act like a ghool.
Not to the people bạn love,
to the sensetive people like a dove.
How we spoke with eachother,
made bạn feel much better.
But the fight we had,
bạn đã đưa ý kiến was nothing but it was bad.
See ya pal we're ova,
take the cell bạn gave me and do me a fava.
Just don't ever,
Never...
Talk to me again!
