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posted by sevendeadlysins
Normally, this style just isn't me, but I feel like I needed to release all of my wrath, turning it into sadness, eventually.

So, I'm not an emo poem writer, but I just wanted to đăng lên this piece I literally just wrote.

I am broken
There's no one left to fix me.
All hope is lost
There's so much I will never be.

I am broken
My world has been shattered.
All hope is lost
I am nothing, destroyed and battered.

I am broken
The world around me falls apart.
All hope is lost
There is no chance for a new start.

I am broken
I have been left here on my own.
All hope is lost
There's no one else; I am here alone.

I am broken
The pain is too much for me to bare.
All hope is lost
In the end, the others just don't care.

I was broken
No tears remain in my fearful eyes.
All hope is gone
My world ended with nothing but lies.
What hast thou done unto my heart?
Unto my soul what hast become?
When I met thee at the very start,
I knew I could not tell my mum.

Thy language foul, it bothered me,
But I saw through thy ettiquit.
I had seen thine sincerity.
Our conversations my ngày lit.

What hast thou done unto my heart?
Unto my soul what hast become?
When I met thee at the very start,
I knew I could not tell my mum.

For hours we would sit and talk.
Secretly I admired thee.
My pain I let thee block.
I wanted to know if thou didst too tình yêu me.

What hast thou done unto my heart?
Unto my soul what hast become?
When I met thee...
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posted by brooki
Hi. My name is Epira, but Epi for short,and I'm 15. I go to a school in the rural South Carolina area, with only 14 people in my class. I have a lot of Những người bạn who get themselves into a lot of trouble. Awsome family, and wonderful life. School starts back today, so it will be the first ngày I've seen my Những người bạn in a while!

"Epi!", squealed Kae,who is my bestest of all best friends. We have a lot in common, and tình yêu each other like sisters. She has the coolest family and cutest little sister bạn ever did see, Mackie. She was the only person I constantly talked to over the summer; I went over to...
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posted by Katiegirl
Nightfall was rising rapidly on this wondrous night.
    I found myself dozing into a heavenly sleep. My dreams
    began to indulge my inner thoughts seductively I could
    Feel myself falling into an internal state of mind. A place
    where only my dreams had a recollection of my desires
    of this world. In the outermost parts of my dream I
    could faintly hear the loud thunderous storm
    lurking outside my window. Slightly beyond
    the...
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posted by Katiegirl
        It was a cold, brisk day. Nightfall was upon the horizon. I strolled down the walkway towards a baron park. The park looked as if it has been around many generations. The park benches were rusted in a distinguished color clear to the solid ground. Keeping the park in existence, the sung cây leaves filled the surroundings like a flamboyant cầu vồng decorating the park. So bright, even in nightfall a person could find away through the darken park. Suddenly, beyond the benches, sung trees, a young man stood steady as if withholding his emotions from...
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Chapter Seven

The tiếp theo day, on a Monday morning, it had been very good between Jamie and Michael. For the first time in weeks, Michael had slept fully on the same giường as Jamie, putting his arms around her to keep her warm but sadly, it had ended about two hours ago, around six when Michael got up and got himself ready bởi going to the bathroom and getting himself all clean and nice before leaving the house but he did one thêm thing before he went to the bathroom.

After waking up, he turned to his wife who was sleeping very peacefully with the sheets around her and to tell his wife that he loves...
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posted by Rockster
I'm nghề viết văn two novels, I know what most people think (WHY!) but i've decided to do one hand written and work upon it at school, where one of my teachers is happy to look at and talk to me about the errors that I've done. Whereas the other novel I'm working on the computer which i would like people to read it and discuss whats good and bad about it. Anyway, I've copied and pasted this novel that I've begun from an animal crossing diễn đàn and here it is.


Chapter 1: The Frowning Mirror

The heat swarmed around me, wrapping me with comfort and content. I knew that this feeling that conflicted with...
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posted by BiteMeCullen107
“Ouch!” last night I was out to long and bởi the time I came trang chủ I was exhausted so I just slept on my mattress that laid on the floor.
    I woke to the waves crashing onto the bờ biển and the sun light touching my eyes. Not realizing I was on the edge of my bed, I stretched and landed on the cold floor to my two room apartment.
    I got off the floor grabbing my silk áo choàng tắm that was sitting on hàng đầu, đầu trang of the box tiếp theo to my mattress. I walked over to my living room windows and opened the shades up to reveal a beautiful ocean. The sky was clear all for...
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posted by dragonrider
"So Starr what is going on?" my mom asks me when Elliot and I sit on the đi văng "And who is this?" she motions to Elliot
"I'm Elliot from 2009. I'm excited to be here Mrs Makenzie I tình yêu your daughter," he says
My mom raises her eyebrows "Oh wow already? Starr please explain,"
I sigh "I chose the wrong job mom. Oh sure I chose the job where it sounds the most interesting but little did I know I was working for the bad guys,"
My dad walks in with bắp rang bơ, bỏng ngô and sits down "Please start at the beginning Starr I want to hear everything," he says
I sigh "Okay so bạn guys know I was in 2009 right?"
...
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posted by dragonrider
"Oh my god Starr! Oh I didn't mean to surprise you! Well I did but I didn't know bạn would faint! Oh wake up Starr!" Elliot's voice rang out
I feel him shaking me. I can't bring myself to open my eyes to see him.
"Well I guess I have to be like that prince in sleeping beauty and Kiss bạn awake," his voice rang out again. I feel pressure on my body
My eyes shoot open just in time before Elliot kisses me. I push him off.
"Get the hell of off me bạn idiot!" I yell standing up. I brush myself. I rub the back of my head that is stinging in pain. I feel wet stuff come off my head. I look at it...
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posted by dragonrider
I storm out of the classroom quickly and plop myself at the couple of feet away from the class room.
I shouldn't let my temper get the best of me. I almost exposed myself to those fools. It's a good thing that I đã đưa ý kiến probably in those sentences. I should be careful on what I say in there.
I hear a footstep and look up to see one of the most annoying human being on the planet Elliot. I glare and put my head down.
Elliot sits down across from me. His pale hands reach for my hands.
"Hey Starr what are doing out here?" he asks in his nosey way
I look up and stare and his pimple covered pale white...
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posted by dragonrider
My name is Starr Makenzie and I'm from the future. Don't laugh at me! It's true. I was born on May 8th 2099. I am currently 16 years old but I am in 2009 right now. I read in my book that 2009 was an interesting năm for politics and for the economy. I wanted to come here for a couple of reasons but I can't tell bạn why.
"Starr Makenzie!" My math teacher Mr. Howards yells at me "Pay attention!"
I look up from doodling and see everybody staring at me. They are all just jealous that I'm the only one getting an A+. I'm actually a really smart person but I don't pay attention in class anymore because...
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posted by dragonrider
Alex froze up as his hunter came near him with his bag. Alex started crying again but silently. His thoughts were raging out of control Should I tell him? Nah then he'll just kill me and my family Alex looked up in time to get slapped again.
"Tell me where your family is Alex! hoặc else," Alex's hunter roared raising his hand again
Alex started to shake bad.
"N..No I will not Dude just kill me now so at least I can be in a happy place," he đã đưa ý kiến looking down his tears dripping onto the hard wooden floor
The hunter laughed a big belly laugh. Alex looked up in time to get slapped again. Alex glared...
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Dear Diary,
Yeah It's me again. I made one mistake and it's eating me inside.
Before bạn ask me "Lily did bạn at least try to escape?" I'm going to tell bạn that I did. On the first day. It's like he knew I would. I had just gotten shot bởi that cá đuối, ray and I was feeling Sulky and then Jerald đã đưa ý kiến something that really ticked me off.
"So yeah your room is down the hall from where we are now"
I glared at him His stupid red hair and eyes were just pulsing out at me like I'm his prize
"You planned this didn't you? How? Well I'll never know but just know this I hate you. bạn killed the only living family...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
I Wake up. I see nothing but my pale white ceiling, I want to stay here, but then I hear my name. I rush up and go to the door but then I look down and see what I am wearing nothing but my under wear and a white singlet. I get my dressing áo choàng and put my arms through the sleeves. I walk down the stairs and see my sister, her face is filled with anger I suddenly regret coming down. I stop walking once I reach the bottom of the stairs she walks up to me and smiled. I am confused until I realise that Georgia is here. Georgia is the goddess of music, hundreds of years cách đây she was the outcast, her...
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posted by XhuddyobsessedX
I looked out the window at the man I wanted to be with. He doesn't know my name hoặc that I watch him leave for work everyday. He doesn't even know I live tiếp theo door to him. But, one ngày that will change.
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The tiếp theo ngày I brought myself to go meet the man I had watched from my window for so many years. I wanted to know evetything about him. And most of all, I wanted him to know everything about me. From the một giây I saw him I knew we were ment to be.

I went up to his door and knocked on it. It opened. He looked at me with curiosity.

"Can I help you?"

"Um..yes...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
I walked over there my very first thoughts were Thor. But it wasn’t. I walked over there and saw Ethan I opened the window. He pushed his way passed me without saying a word; he lay on my giường and started to breathe slowly. “What the...” I đã đưa ý kiến looking at him but he didn’t even look back at me he just stayed there. I walked over and sat on the bed. “Well” I said. “Shh, I have a major headache” he đã đưa ý kiến rubbing his temples. I smacked him on his chest and for a một giây I let it lie there and then he looked at me. “So what happened?” he đã đưa ý kiến smiling a smug smile. “What do you...
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posted by xXDreamWriterXx
This is the rough draft of the first chapter of "Beyond a Dream" It's a book that I'm currently nghề viết văn but it would nice to get some feedback about it. Its long but hope bạn like it!

Chapter 1

“What! We’re moving?!”

Aria stares at her father, Thomas, with disbelief and utter horror. Thomas sat in his yêu thích seat; a maroon armrest chair with soft kind of fabric that made it hard not to touch. His shoulder length silver layered hair and black framed glasses that went over his gray eyes made him look like the plain glasses business man that he was. Aria stood in the middle of their living...
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posted by AnxiousSoul
Asperger's Syndrome is a mild form of autism with a bit of learning disability. It is the same as social anxiety. People with this kind have difficulty learning academics, socializing with other people, and forming friendships.

What does it feel like to have this? You'll be sensitive to loud sounds, lack of interest in to many things, difficulty understanding sarcasm and jokes, you'll feel lonely and alone, bạn see the world differently to other people, and the most overwhelming is bạn feel different in the world. It is also a lifelong condition and can't be cured. But help is a guide of their life. bạn will realize that those people have thêm intelligence and will grow up successfully in their life. And also they have a great tim, trái tim of understanding on people's problems. They will also be kind and patient from what we are.

See the outside, and know deep the inside. There's no nothing than a reason behind.

It's better to be UNIQUE!
posted by hgfan5602
Why does life seem to be getting thêm and thêm confusing? People always told me, "You will understand once bạn grow up." Now, I do not agree in any way with those people. Breakups, your friend dumping you, getting in trouble, those are all things that happen basically everyday today. Before, when I was a little girl, people always fussed over me, took care of me, were Những người bạn with me forever, it seemed. What happened? Why is this happening to me? I want to ask that. But no one seems to know the answer. Especially when we see fights out, we know that fog is drifting into our minds. I don't like this at all. I want the fog to lift. But it doesn't seem to be happening...not today, hoặc ever. Everything seems to be staying the way it is right now: confusing, awkward, new to us. I really hope that one ngày something will change. But...for now, the future isn't bright. Not in any way I see it.
posted by hgfan5602
Freedom stood tall,
Bravely waving in the air,
Hoping all could be reminded
Of his courage

Freedom stood
In the midst of war,
Never before standing so bravely still
Even during hard times

Fighting England, his enemy
He stood, wearing
His Red, White, and Blue apparel
Freedom stood tall, waiting for an end to slavery
Waiting for a start for freedom

Freedom stood...
To remind his people to stand up for their rights
And Freedom broke away from his shackles
Freedom broke away from his worst enemy