nghề viết văn Article: chapter10:the escape

posted by joe-edwardfan

I KNOW ITS SHORT BUT I WASNT IN THE MOOD TO WRITE AND IF I WROTE thêm I AM SURE I WOULD WRECK IT!
SO ENJOY AND I WILL POST THE NXT CHAP SOON CAUSE MY EXAMS ARE OVER FINALLY!
Chapter 10: the escape bellas pov
Previously on Chapter 8:(chap 9 was Edwards pov)
I looked at Damien he was sitting on his knees a beautiful black box with the most beautiful ring in it.oh no god no I don’t want to marry him!
-Bella will u please marry me?
-no
I đã đưa ý kiến coldly Damien got angry maybe this was hard for him to hear the truth I mean he didn’t most of the time he just made me do anything he wanted, making me his imaginary Bella he was in tình yêu and daydreamed marrying someday….
Suddenly Damien got up and slapped me in the face I flew to the cây and hit it probably living a dent on it my clothes covered with blood but my body healed in seconds
-what the hell is your problem?
He asked his face all red
I called all the elements and charged them at him, Damien flew a couple miles away so I took advantage of his absence and ran away.
Chapter 10:
I was running as fast as I could but I knew it wasn’t enough and Damien could catch me at any một giây so I changed my direction and headed to the schools parking lot to get my bag and some money and drive to the airport. After a few giây i go there and flashed through my car and drove away.
Edwards pov:
I was wondering what Bella was doing now ALONE in the jungle with Damien and picturing every way I could kill him
-edward….
Alice đã đưa ý kiến but blacked out, having a vision I saw her vision with her and my dead tim, trái tim broke
Vision(alices pov):
Damien was dragging Bella (the same direction we saw him drag Bella earlier and disappeared)Bella was angry but he ignored her and continued dragging her then he stopped and and faced Bella a sweet/evil smile on his face then he sat on his knees and brought a beautiful black box out of his pocket and opened it a beautiful ring shine out of the box
-Bella will bạn please marry me?
End of vision and back to Edwards pov
What Bella is going to marry that mutt!
-what did bạn see Alice ?
Emmett đã đưa ý kiến while eyeing me
-Damien proposing to Bella
-what? Seriously? What did she say?was she happy?
Emmett asked eager and I growled under my breath
Oh sorry edward Emmett thought and looked back at Alice
-I don’t know what she đã đưa ý kiến but she definitely wasn’t happy…
-so lets go and see what's happening?
Jasper suggested
-no!
Rosalie half shouted
-I mean let give them some privacy….
Then she caught her reflection on angelas glasses and started admiring herself again
-look!
Jasper and Emmett đã đưa ý kiến at the same time and gesturing their fingers towards bellas car then I saw, it Bella was running in an inhuman speed even faster than me! her body was covered in blood that made me very very angry for no reason then she got in her car and drove out of sight in a seconds.
-what was that all about?
Rosalie asked her thoughts around Bella and her happy ending with Damien..ugh! it made me sick!
-I don’t know
Alice đã đưa ý kiến and looked at me I just shook my head
-lets go and see then!
Emmett đã đưa ý kiến exited and grabbed my hand and dragged me out of the school
-wait for us!
Jasper and Alice đã đưa ý kiến they were busy persuading Rosalie to come
-ok
Emmett đã đưa ý kiến evily and walked faster.

vampiregirl16 i thought that it was really good b/c i wanted to see edwards reaction

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