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She stepped into the flat sorely, gazing at his stuff. He’s left so soon, without saying he would do so, without mentioning any goodbyes with his deep, sad voice. Everything was the same, nothing has been moved, and nothing has been replaced. He took nothing with him but his endless tears. He took nothing with him but his sadness and misery. He took nothing … but the shattering hearts with its deep wounds.
She did fool him with her sweet words and enchanting look, but she’s never thought that such a smart person like him can’t be fooled with her stupid words. Her words did nothing but led him to his misery, that he no longer cares about living in a small, dirty flat, nor about his study hoặc his even... his life!
What has happened to him? People wondered, but no one will ever know but her… his killer!
Sympathetically she dealt with news of his disappearance without having the slightest feeling of guilt, but when she got into the flat, she felt like the breath has been taken away from her, that she couldn’t help it but threw herself on the wooden chair of his desk. He usually sat in the desk, đọc something hoặc nghề viết văn with that mysterious notebook. She asked him about it thêm than once but he has always refused to tell her what it is. The thought came through her mind suddenly; it was the only way to know why he left, bởi đọc it, it must be his diaries hoặc he wouldn’t refuse to talk about it. Nervously she started to look for it between his sách and novels, until she found it, His diaries. She opened her mouth with amusement, when she noticed that he’s written it like a letter pointed to her. He wrote with the blood of his deep wounds, he wrote with the tears of his eyes in those nights when he could do nothing … but cry.
You’ve never realized how much I loved you, he wrote. You’ve never realizes what misery bạn gave me. bạn never felt as guilty as bạn should be. bạn didn’t think of me as a living human being. I was nothing to bạn but a tool, to drive him crazy, to make the blood rush to his cheeks caused bởi anger. bạn started to play with me, make me di chuyển the way bạn want me to, act the way bạn want me to act, bạn made a fool of me. bạn were driven bởi jealousy that blinded you. bạn couldn’t see my wounds, nor notice my pain. I wish that bạn would say “I tình yêu you” and bạn truly mean it. I wish that you’d look at me the way bạn look at him.
Nobody knows the truth. They think I’m the other guy standing in your way, while was the victim of what happened. I was standing between bạn and him in the battle of yours, representing a protective tường to you, which stopped his swords, while bạn stamp me in my back whenever bạn get furious. I got out of the battle field, completely damaged, totally wounded.

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posted by CullenProperty
"I'd like a room please," Nick tells the front bàn clerk. The old lady give both of us a look over and cái ví, ví tiền her lips then rolls her eyes.
"ID please," she tells us, "both of you," she looks at me.
"Mine's in the car, I'll be right back," I tell Nick, smiling at the lady.
I come back and the lady is defeated, she really didn't think I had one, but I showed her! She gives my drivers license back with a roll of the eyes and watches me as Nick fills out the paperwork.
"What's the license plate, Grace?" he asks.
My mouth drops and my eyes nearly fall out of my head. I turn around so the lady...
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SAD

When I was ten years old and i was playing b-ball and i broke my foot so we waited till the tiếp theo day,my grama tok me cuz my mom and dad had to work,so we went and got the cast.
Then my grama&me went to a store it was right tiếp theo to wal-mart and we walked around then i had to go to the bath room,the store had no bath room,so i told my grama and she still had to pay for her stuff so she đã đưa ý kiến just go,so i walked in my bran-new crutches never used them before.
when i walked in the store i tripped on the stupid wal-mart rugg,i could not get up and i new my grama was not going to be here...
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There once lived a princess named Eleanor. She was a very beautiful and intelligent young girl. Yet, she was unhappy.
Everybody kept telling her, that she had everything she could’ve ever needed hoặc wanted: the beauty, the brains, the fortune and a young, mighty prince to whom she was supposed to get married to. And they were right. In theory, the young princess’ life seemed perfect. But in reality, it was far from it.
The princess felt alone and scared, even when she was surrounded bởi people and was completely safe. And her prince. He didn’t make her happy. But not because he didn’t...
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It was a leaf-fall ngày and Dovewing padded out of the camp with Ivypool, Lionblaze, Cinderheart & Toadstep... She as going on a hunting patrol.
The dark forest battle had just finished and the mèo were trying to get over the tim, trái tim break of Hollyleaf, Ferncloud & Firestar. It was hard especially for Sandstorm, Leafpool and Squirrelflight..
Because Sandstorm was Firestar's mate and his two children werre Leafpool and Squirrelflight.
So it was mainly hard for them and Leafpool had also Mất tích her daughter, so two deaths in one day. Ivypool had killed Hawkfrost and Tigerstar died because...
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posted by iHelloUniverse
Everyone is staring at me, I know from as I look up from my worn-out black converse, hearing them whispering and laughing to their friends. I pull up my Black Veil Brides's bag further up my shoulder, fearing of what I will be đọc on my locker this afternoon. In my tracks, I stop in the line of my locker, seeing insults that make me want to self-harm then and there.

Hang yourself
You're a fag
Overdose on pills
Worthless
Suicidal freak

My eyes locked on the notes. The words mocking me as they make me read them over and over until someone spoke, "Like our notes?" Laughter burst out as I turned...
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posted by Cries_Bloodlova
Part one
love
Laughter filled the air as I ate the last reminders of bánh mỳ, bánh mì with the tình yêu of my life. Iza Reffile. We sat outside on the corner away from most people like the way we always did. It was moments like this that I wish would last forever. But they don’t. Iza was a very shy the girl who never đã đưa ý kiến a word to anybody not even me. I remember the night that we met. a cold rain fell. I was walking from the bakery. it was late at night. Most people where in there beds asleep. When I start to here yelling.
The yelling was vicious and loud. Then a little girl about four years younger then...
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I sat alone.

No one came up to me, none asked if anything was wrong.

I sat alone.

In the corner, where everyone saw but no one noticed.

I sat alone.

I had no friends, I was not ‘cool’ enough for them.

I sat alone.

No one knew my mother had just died from cancer, no one cared.

I sat alone.

Surrounded bởi my thoughts, but no people. bởi my words, but no friends.

I sat alone.

Until a girl came and sat bởi me.

I sat with a girl.

She turned to me and smiled warmly, “Hello.”

I sat with a friend.
posted by hgfan5602
Every weekend, I sleep late, like every normal teenager. Problem is, my annoying little brother wakes up at like what? 6:30 every morning? Yeah. And he dumps a bucket of water filled with ice in it on my face if I don't wake up at 6:30. What a nuisance. Otherwise, if I go hangout with my Những người bạn before he gets up. he says, "Mrs. Mellark! Going out with your boyfriend?" Yeah, I like Peeta, as a matter of fact, if bạn didn't know before. Personal opinion, you'll live with it. What a strange little kid. No idea where he learned what a boyfriend was, but fine. The major thing that makes me mad...
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posted by shenelopefan
Carta de un corazón roto

"El nombre de la persona a la que dedico este escrito,

Es un nombre que no me permito decir cuando estoy sola"

¿Tienes idea de lo que es, verte cada día, y en tus ojos no encontrar lo que yo sí te daría? ¿Tienes acaso alguna idea de lo que es no haberte superado? Por más que lo he intentado, aún no haberte olvidado. ¿Sabes lo que es hacer rimas con tu nombre y no encontrar palabras, no encontrar acordes? Quisiera yo contarte, todo esto que escribo, pero ya es demasiado tarde, ya te has ido, amor mío. Los años se me pasan, sin que tú estés conmigo. Aunque quería...
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posted by hotfudgebrownie
Heys guys, this story is made bởi me (hotfudgebrownie) and llrulez!! :D:D hope bạn like it.

Chapter #1
My life. My life isn’t ordinary. it’s too complicated .it all started when…Wait! I almost forgot. Im eliza steel.everyone knows me as liz.im 16 and very athletic . I know a little bit of karate from a few classes I had taken when I was little.. I have a little sister,Dani,who is just 11 but a little too smart for her age.my best friend stasha is extremely intelligent. She won a national award but forget about that .more important ,my story.but before bạn read any further stop and think....
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posted by r260897
Zean, the famous ngôi sao of âm nhạc world came back with his Zeal (his guitar) and his famous UKK band after a live performance. He sat in front of a big mirror removing his make up. His ears were active with the chatter of his mates who were busy in talking about another band. He turned back with a big a smile as if he wanted to say something but he didn’t. he saw a small boy running and then he stood up and ran behind him he ran and ran and ran until he found himself surrounded bởi white light and some noise in which he could hear “so bạn are Zean…. Haaahaaaaa look at him his….” Zean,,...
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posted by Luna-Lacrimosa
Built For Sin
Darkness poured into the hybrid's room, filling the room with great depression. Rain drops made little trails down the window, almost like tears, down the cool glass surface of the window. Luna still needed to các câu trả lời to her questions. Why was she here? What does she need to do? Why did her tim, trái tim finally feel warm after what Hades told her about Leon's feelings?! The các câu trả lời never showed up to her, no matter what she thought hoặc did.
A big bewilderment sigh danced in the cool quiet air of the depressed dark room. Luna crashed her head into her hands and grabbed a hold of her hair...
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posted by candlegirlsmile
In a foggy night ,
On a foggy ngày ,
Following the light ,
Running far away .

There was a little car ,
Driven bởi two children ,
Made out of plastic and gum ,
With a fake license number .

And the car was the product
Of one’s imagination,
It was the guide through the forest
Of his life’s interpretation.

And the forest was dark
And hunted bởi Người sói ,
Full of tears and pain
And of smiles went to vain.

And this kid was an orphan,
Slowly rushing through life ,
Searching for his mother ,
Waiting to be held tight.

He is Mất tích and scared ,
Yet unstoppable ,
Cause all his life he’s spent
Walking through that forest.

We ain’t all lucky and rich
hoặc have families.
The truth is we only have ourselves,
To make our own journies.

This orphan’s an example
For those who don’t know ,
That that forest is the rode
We all have to go on .
posted by breebree446
 1st Person = I, we, me, us, my, mine, our, ours. 2nd Person = you, your, yours. 3rd Person = he, she, it, they, him, her, it, them, his, her, hers, it, their, theirs.
1st Person = I, we, me, us, my, mine, our, ours. 2nd Person = you, your, yours. 3rd Person = he, she, it, they, him, her, it, them, his, her, hers, it, their, theirs.
First Person

First person nghề viết văn is when the characters is speaking directly toward another person(You). bạn use words like "I", "Mine", "We", "Us." The character is telling the story to bạn themselves.

Second Person

Third person is the exact opposite. Instead of the character talking to you, the narrator is talking about the character. Your main words are "You", and "Your."

Third Person

Third person is almost similar to một giây person. The narrator is talking to you, but instead they use words like "He", "She", "It", and "They." Third person sách often have the most detail.

For thêm detailed descriptions, go to: link
posted by mari_giovani
This is a short story, based on a song. The song's kinda spoilerish so i'm gonna put its link at the end.
Ps: i just finished this so it probably has some typing and pontuaction mistakes...I'll review and chỉnh sửa later! :)

There he was once again, holding his knees in his arms, on the corner of that đi văng that he often tries to forget, and across from him, his terapist sat, cleaning her glasses with a tissue as she had his file on her lap, tried to, for the yet unknown, last time, understand and help him.
"So how are bạn today, Jason? I'm glad to see that you're looking for the help that bạn need."...
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Can bạn hear me (OST-Beethoven Virus)

Even though it hurts but a little, tears form
My tim, trái tim screams out
If I pass in front of you, beside you
You were my whole world
I want only you
But I can't breathe when I'm in front of you

As if bạn weren't my destiny
As if this was just a fleeting moment
Next to you, who just let me go so easily
I go closer to bạn step bởi step
Although I cannot di chuyển at all

You make me restless, bạn make me cry
Like a fool, like a child
I want to just laugh it off instead

The closer I get to you
Although I get thêm scared
I guess I cannot stop this love

Why is it just my tình yêu that is late...
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