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this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good hoặc not before I đệ trình it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear tình yêu bạn once were a shining ray.
In my eyes bạn meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about bạn is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your tình yêu is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our tình yêu is coming to its new close.
màu sắc were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would tình yêu to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our tình yêu has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our tình yêu left it took bạn along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying tình yêu was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me tình yêu would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
posted by zanhar1
Really old thing I dug up. Because I was reminded of it.

Elise stood before two paths. Upland trail, read the sign, rickety and made of moss eaten and decaying wood. And Downback Thickets, indicated its sister sign.
What a lonely, bleak place, Elise pondered. She looked skyward. The surrounding trees were rather intrusive, blocking her view of the foggy-quartz sky.
She nudged at a rock with her big toe.
Her big toe?!
“Where are my shoes?” She muttered aloud. When had she Mất tích them? How hadn’t she noticed the mud squishing between her toes? She looked over the ground.
No sign of her Uggs anywhere....
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posted by para-scence
Inspired bởi the song, "Circle" bởi Flyleaf. :)

"His tim, trái tim ripped out to hiển thị me he loved me, but I wouldn't believe him. He did all that he could, I still would not believe him!"




I sat on the school bench, my head in my hands. The whole world was spinning, and I couldn't keep my balance. My tim, trái tim was encased in a thick glass of guilt. Nothing I could ever do would change this...

He had told me he loved me.

But he was my best friend; he couldn't feel that way about me. It just wasn't meant to be...

So I'd pushed it off. I'd laughed, and joked around with him about it. He seemed to go along with...
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posted by edwardsca
    It was a cold winter morning. The wind was a cold, nhanh, swift breeze. I was upstairs in my room turning page bởi page reading.I went down to eat my warm, golden biscuits on the old cracked wooden table. I went to go get the bucket and some water to wash up, the bucket was broken and the water was freezing cold like the rough winter nights. After my refreshing bath I went to go get dressed, I put on my áo sơ mi which was red as my own dear mother's quả anh đào, anh đào sweet lips. I zipped up my váy it was black like the midnight sky, and buckled my black shoes. I was walking down the dirt...
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Well,he walked up to me and he asked me if I wanted to dance.
He looked kind of nice so I đã đưa ý kiến I might take a chance.
When he danced he held me tight
And when he walked me trang chủ that night
All the stars were shining bright
And then he kissed me.

Each time I saw him I couldn't wait to see him again
I wanted to let him know that he was thêm than a friend
I didn't know just what to do
So I whispered " I tình yêu you"
And he đã đưa ý kiến that he loved me too
And then he kissed me.
He kissed me in a way that I've never been kissed before,
he kissed me in a way that I wanna be kissed forever more.

I knew that he was mine so I gave him all the tình yêu that I had
And one ngày he took me trang chủ to meet his mum and his dad
Then he asked me to be his bride
And always be right bởi his side
I felt so happy I almost cried
And then he kissed me.
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added by segafan
The only sound that could be heard in the large hospital of Melbourne was the continuous beeps from the room in which Jamie's daughter lay.

The white walls and the bright yellow lights were too much for Jamie too take and the câu hỏi which he dreaded to ask himself filled his head. First of all why is my precious Stephanie in here? Nothings wrong with her she stayed at Ashley's all weekend. What could have happened? and secondly why hasn't that receptionist stopped staring at me. She hasn't looked away since i sat down.
Jamie looked down at his watch, it was eight in the morning. He had been...
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posted by Cutebutcrazy--
My name is Gennive Mason.
I am 13 years old.
And oh yeah. I'm the last vampirehunter alive.
You pobally think it's so cool. " Oh yeah she's the last vampire hunter alve. bạn must be everyones hero." Wrong. No one and I repeat no one can know about me hoặc ma cà rồng hoặc warer Người sói hoặc shape- shifters hoặc witches. bạn see it goes against code. The sacred code of all night creatures even I have to fallow it hoặc I'm dead. bởi law it says if a vampire hunter tells anyone about the night creatuures they send some one then it's bye-bye hunter. Lovley isn't it. I find it kinda ironic. My job is to find and...
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posted by dragonwriter
I awoke a couple of hours later. I looked around for the old man but he was nowhere ti be found. I got out of the giường and starting walking to the front door to see if he went outside. When I opened the door there was nothing but black. When I turned back around he was standing there.
"Where were bạn going? bạn need your rest so go back and lay down." He went to grab my arm to lead me back to the giường but I pulled away. "My name is Shaun so stop calling me boy old man. I don't need to lay down, I need to go." As I turned back to the door he grabbed my arm. "Go where? bạn have nowhere to go....
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Whether Paid hoặc Not A Writer Writes bởi Gary Goldstein via FilmCourage.com.
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posted by teamphantom
I’ll never forget the ngày I had encountered a ghosts with my best friends. And I will be happy to share that story with you.
It was August 20th exactly one week before the start of middle school. My best friend Alex and I sat outside on the curb and ate our half melted dâu, dâu tây ice cream on a cone. It must’ve been 95 degrees outside because we could feel our sweet dripping off our faces. We didn’t say much because the calefaction made us not want to be social. We sat there in silence and licked our ice cream.
“What do bạn think middle school will be like, Collin?” Alex broke the...
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Source: Brigham Young trường đại học
posted by RainSoul
What do bạn do when the gray waves roll over your head, and your body is too weak to swim ashore. Do bạn panic and scream and try anyway to break the surface of the water? Do bạn silently cry and pray and tell your loved ones bạn tình yêu them one thêm time. hoặc because bạn know it's futile to fight đệ trình to the lulling cold darkness kissing at your eyelids? Do bạn let the salty seawater drain into your lungs and choke to death's waiting arms?

Or do bạn float to the surface and wait for the storm to pass and sunlight to pierce your shivering mass of a body?.. bạn choose wisely.. bạn wake up in a...
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posted by xoxpoisonxox
This is a Monolouge I wrote a little while cách đây for drama class. We had to write a dramatic one. So this monologue is about a girl who is talking to her therapist about a gần đây event with her friend.

Tell me what bạn think!

My mother says bạn can help me - Help me make sense of it. I don't beilive in therapists - But I guess ill .....0give it a try..

You know, Some say suicide is the most selfish act one person can make.. I used to think this too. But now it doesn't make sense to me how the most selfless, kind , person I know - knew- could be labled as selfish..

How long have I known her? Well...
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Here are the definitions of the words.Read and guess what they are before đọc the right các câu trả lời I write below.

1.It's a person who works in a restaurant,takes the thực phẩm from the phòng bếp, nhà bếp to the tables.
2.It's a place where bạn go when bạn want to buy something.It's a very big cửa hàng where bạn can buy anything.
3.It's a thing which bạn use to talk.It's a kind of machine,it's very small and nearly everybody has one nowadays.
4.It's an adjective.It's the opposite of fat,but means thin and acttractive.
5.It's an adjective again.It's how bạn feel when bạn have a lot of things to do but bạn don't have...
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posted by breebree446
 To think, most of my character names come from a thrift store baby book!
To think, most of my character names come from a thrift store baby book!
Baby Name Books!

My #1 resource is the baby name book I bought from a thrift store. It's a lifesaver! Not only does it have over 5,000 names but origins, boy and girl names, and alternate spelling. But, if bạn can't get a hold of a baby name book there's always...

Name Websites!

Just as good and pretty much the same thing. They have access to millions of names online! One website I find really useful;

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link - Thanks ellie_bellie135^^

Symbolic Names!

Often, writers give thier characters a name that has a certain meaning. For instance, one of my characters is named Roni. Which is short for Veronica....
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posted by Spotty_Vision21
I shouldn’t have shot the dog. I definitely shouldn’t have shot the dog. Even if he did chew upon my prized drumsticks, and feast upon my freshly-baked brownies. The little white-and-brown terror, Mickey, belonged to my neighbor. My neighbor, an 87-year-old chain-smoker named Mary, rarely left the confines of her living room. She sat, ngày in and ngày out, as her precious mutts wreaked havoc about the neighborhood.
You can see it! My house, the little beasts have chewed upon everything their gnashing, tiny, sharp little teeth could find. I did my best to keep them out, but the little bastards...
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posted by fanfangirlfan
As I try to think of something, anything to say to him now, I recall the first time I saw Sam outside of school.
It was about a năm ago. Tyler was at my house playing with Jen. It was late and they both needed to be put to bed. Their tiredness only resulted in them fighting. I eventually put them on time-outs until Tyler’s uncle showed up. hoặc I thought it would be his uncle. It turned out to be Sam. I opened the door when he knocked and was a little thrown to see him. I recognized him from school, but only as the quiet boy I’d never talked to. His hair was wet as if he’d just showered...
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