this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good hoặc not before I đệ trình it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear tình yêu bạn once were a shining ray.
In my eyes bạn meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about bạn is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your tình yêu is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our tình yêu is coming to its new close.
màu sắc were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would tình yêu to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our tình yêu has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our tình yêu left it took bạn along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying tình yêu was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me tình yêu would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
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My dear tình yêu bạn once were a shining ray.
In my eyes bạn meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about bạn is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your tình yêu is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our tình yêu is coming to its new close.
màu sắc were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would tình yêu to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our tình yêu has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our tình yêu left it took bạn along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying tình yêu was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me tình yêu would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
Well,he walked up to me and he asked me if I wanted to dance.
He looked kind of nice so I đã đưa ý kiến I might take a chance.
When he danced he held me tight
And when he walked me trang chủ that night
All the stars were shining bright
And then he kissed me.
Each time I saw him I couldn't wait to see him again
I wanted to let him know that he was thêm than a friend
I didn't know just what to do
So I whispered " I tình yêu you"
And he đã đưa ý kiến that he loved me too
And then he kissed me.
He kissed me in a way that I've never been kissed before,
he kissed me in a way that I wanna be kissed forever more.
I knew that he was mine so I gave him all the tình yêu that I had
And one ngày he took me trang chủ to meet his mum and his dad
Then he asked me to be his bride
And always be right bởi his side
I felt so happy I almost cried
And then he kissed me.
He looked kind of nice so I đã đưa ý kiến I might take a chance.
When he danced he held me tight
And when he walked me trang chủ that night
All the stars were shining bright
And then he kissed me.
Each time I saw him I couldn't wait to see him again
I wanted to let him know that he was thêm than a friend
I didn't know just what to do
So I whispered " I tình yêu you"
And he đã đưa ý kiến that he loved me too
And then he kissed me.
He kissed me in a way that I've never been kissed before,
he kissed me in a way that I wanna be kissed forever more.
I knew that he was mine so I gave him all the tình yêu that I had
And one ngày he took me trang chủ to meet his mum and his dad
Then he asked me to be his bride
And always be right bởi his side
I felt so happy I almost cried
And then he kissed me.