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f I had to identify the most important step in nghề viết văn an essay, I would probably say it was the organization. Coming up with a thesis is a big part of essay writing, but it doesn’t mean anything if bạn do not have the proper support for it. That is where organization comes into play. If bạn can put your thoughts in the right order, bạn can get people to feel a certain way as they read your work. It’s like taking them on a journey through your mind.

Here are some tips to help bạn effectively organize your essays in the future.

The Pyramid Method
This is my yêu thích way to write essays, and I feel it is the most effective. bạn start bởi barely introducing what bạn are going to talk about, and then bạn build a pyramid of support from there. In the conclusion, bạn make your big, powerful assertion that makes people go “Wait, what just happened? I just got chó cái, bitch slapped bởi brilliance!” This method is great for persuasive essays, but I use it for everything. It just makes sense.

The Inverted Pyramid Method
This is the exact opposite of the method above, where bạn start with a big idea and then support it afterward. I don’t like this because it lacks progression. It doesn’t keep people hooked. It may work well for a web bài viết hoặc a news story, but not a college essay. Nevertheless, some professors tình yêu this method, so bạn just have to test it out and see what they think.

The sandwich, bánh sandwich Method
In this method, bạn start with something big, provide support, and end with something equally big. Basically bạn have a thesis at the beginning that poses a câu hỏi hoặc a problem, and then bạn have a conclusion that các câu trả lời it. I have used this method a few times, and it has worked well. I would recommend using it at least once hoặc two.

General Tips for Essay Organization
In the case of a compare and contrast essay, don’t do one paragraph for one story and then another paragraph for the other story. Try to mix the two together and compare them point bởi point. Each point would be an bài viết all its own.

Try to talk about events in chronological order so your readers can follow them. If bạn jump all through a book hoặc resource, bạn may lose track of your focus and fluidity.

Don’t be afraid to use small paragraphs if bạn have different topics in each of them. It is better to do that than to have a long paragraph that no one wants to read through.

If bạn follow my tips above for your tiếp theo essay in college, bạn should be able to wow the professor and get your point across at the same time. Good luck!
posted by BellaSwan636
Shaun

Three months later, we were apparently "an item".

She had me twisted around her little finger. She could have made me jump in front of a bus, all that was needed was one look from her "love me, bạn know bạn want to" Sô cô la brown eyes.

I paid attention to her every move, her every word.

**************************************************

When I first told her I loved her, I was expecting rejection, but she surprised me. She kissed me, and đã đưa ý kiến she loved me too. The sun revolved around where she stood.

Nothing else mattered.
A little something that I wrote for English class but actually, it was my final and I got 100% on it!! Enjoy!!

The Disappearance of Claire Daniels

I don’t know where my daughter went. One moment, I was holding Claire’s little hand while doing some window shopping but a few giây later, I spotted something at a clothing store window and was into it and wondering if the store have any chance that they have it in my size that I didn’t noticed that I didn’t felt little Claire Daniels’s hand slipping away from mine.

When I wanted to go into the store and see if they got that little black...
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posted by BuffyFaithFan1
HAZED
BuffyFaithfan1

INTRODUCTION...
You have just entered a world. A world like no other! This world is not like TWILIGHT hoặc House Of Night hoặc HARRY POTTER hoặc any other world bạn are thinking of right about now. This world is way different. Where only a good bunch of people in the population live. The world has been divided into six parts: the WaterLands, the EarthLands, the AirLands, the FireLands, the ExtraLands, and the NoOneZone. Only one hundred people make up our world. And only 16.666666 people live inside each part. It sounds pretty depressing, I know, but this is how this world is! The...
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posted by Edward_lover101
Plz do not be afraid to tell me what bạn think! plz commet. I'm nghề viết văn a book and i was woundering what some of bạn think. Please commet!!

Chapter 1

"Anna May get in here right away! Don't make me get the swicht little girl" Hollore mama.
"Comming mama! I was doing my chors." i hollerd back.
I live on a farm with my mother and out two slaves Jim and Nacy.my father ran out on us when my mother found out that when he got drunk that he would comeinto my roo at night and touch me in places that didn't fell right. He told me that if I ever told anyone that he would kill me, i belived him. So it is...
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posted by brooki
Here's the một giây chapter to Small Town!

"What do bạn think bạn are doing? Are bạn trying to kill me, Anya?" She had picked out one of my least-favorite phim chiếu rạp she knew I did not like at all. But on the other hand, I knew we probably wouldn't be whatching the movie very long. Darrel was having a party at his house in about an hour. Long enough for Anya's parents to think that we were asleep.

"Oh please. It's not really that bad." Anya đã đưa ý kiến while on her way to get the bắp rang bơ, bỏng ngô from her phòng bếp, nhà bếp just around the corner.

"Oh, come on, Anya. Can we please go now? I mean, your parents went to giường over...
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posted by jasperwhlover
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Chapter 3

Now, Serenity on a happier note was learning how to defend herself and about Exorcism she wanted to help Father Bartholomew, even though she was forced bởi the church to conform to the earthly practices like everyone else and to hide her wings, Father Bartholomew encouraged her heavenly attributes, he made wings, of feathers, waxed together, they were perfect, and everyday, he would teach her to fly as she forgot how because of the number of years that she spent conforming to the earth. Father Bartholomew raised Serenity like a daughter, a few years later, when she had...
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posted by khfan12
Thie is something me and my friend are working on.


He returned that evening, feeling even worse. “Where were you?” Mercy met him on the front porch. She looked like she had been crying. Danny looked at her. It felt like a dao, con dao had been shoved through his heart. He winced as he started up the stairs. “I went out.”
“Where?” Mercy’s hand reached for him. He pulled away and started into the house. “Danny...” Mercy’s voice followed him into the front room. “I was so worried. I thought….”
Suddenly, Danny couldn’t stand it any longer. Why did she have to tình yêu him? He turned...
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posted by BiteMeCullen107
As we left the apartment building the sun hit us like a beam of light. I look to the side, I saw Jason putting his hand in the face of the sun like he was going to die from it.
“Are bạn okay?” I asked concerned that it was to much for him. He looked down at me and smiled. “Ya I’m go, I just have to get my sunglasses on. My eyes are just really sensitive to the light.” I nodded waiting patiently for him. He slipped on a pare of black sunglasses. The kind bạn see know a days on người nổi tiếng when the go out. “Nice.” I đã đưa ý kiến with a warming smiled. He looked back down at me and smiled....
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Chapter Four

At ten in the morning, Jamie was helping Mac practice with her bóng đá bởi being the goalie and blocking her oldest daughter‘s every move, kicking the ball into the net at their little backyard of their brownstone, đá nâu house in the section of Georgetown in the city of Washington, DC where both Jamie and Michael went to college there, lived at and raised their three kids at for almost fifteen years.

Two hours before the practice, after having an extended breakfast with their father and mother, Mac and Izzie did their bath-taking, teeth-brushing, toothpaste- spitting, toilet-using, and...
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posted by VampirePrinsess
Memories would drift off like winter fog
They fade like a mist
But I saw bạn in a memory that stayed like the perfect ngày
You brought life into my colorless world
You brought the true meaning of the word 'friend'
He was my best friend
I would always tình yêu him, and it would never, ever be enough
I would be there for him, lend him a shoulder
But the days that I just wasn't enough were the days I dreaded
The days he wasn't himself
He had pride, sometimes to much to the point of war
He was respecful to friends, he was kind and funny
He was everything bạn loved in a friend
But the ngày he left...that...
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posted by BiteMeCullen107
“Somebody turn the lights on, Somebody tell me what’s wrong I’d be lying if I told bạn losing bạn was something I could handle…” I had been driving for about two and a half hours the highways were clear I had the windows all the way done hát along with my I-pod.
In a matter of giây I could see cars slowing down on the highway in Kansas and as the cars started to stop I could see a long line of cars in front of me. I can’t believe this I was finally going to make it to the tiếp theo state before the traffic started happening.
“Whoa” I jumped at the vibrating in my right pants...
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posted by gossip-girl999
A/N: This was just a task I had for homework write a short story less than 2 pages of your choice so I thought I'd post it here see what everyone thought. Thanks for reading. xoxo

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We're not in Kansas anymore

        It's any teenagers dream to up sticks from a dreary country town and di chuyển into the hustle and bustle of the city but for Alyssa that was the dream she wished to come true but it just made her appreciate the saying be careful what bạn wish for even more.
        The rain was falling down on the City....
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I thought it would be a good idea to try and write goodbye
but i was stuck when I realized there were too many lovely things to write about.
and not enough words invented yet to say them aloud.

and i know there are a number of things wrong with this,
but i really don't want to fix it right now.
i don't feel like doing anything but sitting upside down

but trust me, when it comes down
to having the choice of being right..
hoặc protecting you, I'll be wrong every single time.
Because it's just who I am...
Chapter Two

When Jamie got to the hạt dẻ oak door of Michael’s den, she put her fist on the surface and knocked on it while asking her husband, “Michael, are bạn there?” There was a một phút of silence that came after that and after waiting for a response, still in the den, Michael asked the person who was asking him that câu hỏi about him being there, “Yeah, I’m in here. Who’s it?”

Facing the door, Jamie đã đưa ý kiến back to him, “It’s me, Jamie.” After telling him that, Jamie heard some groaning behind the door and right away, she knew that Michael had might be annoyed at her because...
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Keep in mind I have no idea what chapter this will be but I got this idea yesterday so I wrote it last night. Actually I had two ideas of how my two main characters would kiss. I'll write and put up a different version of their first Kiss some time soon. I actually had tears in my eyes when I wrote this

I storm outside of the house and plop myself down on the sofa outside. I feel my eyes tear. It's so unfair. My tears overflow my eyes.
"Hey Starr what's wrong?" A voice asks behind me. I look behind me and see Elliot
"Oh xin chào Elliot. Nothing is wrong," I say wiping my eyes
Elliot sits down next...
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posted by jasperwhlover
Chapter 2

The priest was reciting a prayer, stuttering heavily, Serenity realized that he was scared and replied, “Fear not for I am Serenity the Angel of peace, I know not why my wings resemble the midnight blue that dawns when the sun goes to rest, I know not my purpose on this earth for my father the Lord, God did not verse me of this strange happening”. The priest believed Serenity and taught Serenity human activities, the priest, father Bartholomew, raised Serenity as his own. Now, father Bartholomew, being an exorcist sent many demons and evil artifices of the devil back to hell,...
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posted by jasperwhlover
Wishful Thinking

Introduction: I thought it was a sweet beginning, a chance to start anew, no looking back, nor turning. What I’ve found here, has me in its grasp, it’s captured me in its spell. But like every sweet beginning we never know how the story ends.


Hi, I’m Alicia Alice Davidson, but bạn can call me Alice. I’m from a family of five, and I go to the best High School in the country, I’m confident and I follow my instincts I’m a fighter mentally and physically. It started off as the same boring, disappointing ngày I was used to, at my school, it’s an all girl school bạn see....
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posted by jasperwhlover
Wishful Thinking

Introduction: I thought it was a sweet beginning, a chance to start anew, no looking back, nor turning. What I’ve found here, has me in its grasp, it’s captured me in its spell. But like every sweet beginning we never know how the story ends.


Hi, I’m Alicia Alice Davidson, but bạn can call me Alice. I’m from a family of five, and I go to the best High School in the country, I’m confident and I follow my instincts I’m a fighter mentally and physically. It started off as the same boring, disappointing ngày I was used to, at my school, it’s an all girl school bạn see....
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Chapter One

Expecting Michael to tiếp theo to her, Jamie moved around to her husband’s side of the giường and wanting to see him sleeping tiếp theo to her the first thing she sees in the morning, Jamie opened up her eyes and founded no one there.

Jamie sighed when she saw that, knowing where her husband of seven years was sleeping right now. Since he returned from Iraq a few months ago, Michael Thomas had become a different man. A man who never saw the bright side of things and never wanted to look at people in the eyes.

For the past four months, their three children, Mackenzie, Isabella, and Jake had been...
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posted by TDIlover226
~one of them, how could I be one of them! I'm completly human, they're, they're just ugly freaks!.

Eddie just sat there in the dark room, alone. He wasn't sure if he should try to escape, hoặc stay to see exsactly what "one of them" ment. "I can't stay here, with those freaks, they'll probably kill me, they're ugly mutated freaks and I'm getting out of here!" đã đưa ý kiến Eddie. "Ugly freaks huh" đã đưa ý kiến Annie stepping out of the darkness of the room, "yeah, wwe get that alot from people like you". "Well, mabey if bạn would just tell people what's going on, mabey-". "You don't get it, do you, bạn are one...
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