Okay this fits to be bài viết worthy. I have this budding idea for a story about a girl named Skye(real named skylar) who discovers that she and her two Những người bạn are Sirens ( a different kind than bạn think). They all have ibdividual powers like Skye can use other peoples power, Hazelle and Gabriel,s powers are conjuring ngọn lửa, chữa cháy and Hazelle can shapeshift objects. Their parents were Những người bạn and there dads, and hazelle and gabriel have one parent while skye has none, she lives with her aunt and she has this Mất tích sister who thinks she is a Siren but is their kinds' enemy. Meanwhile Hazelle and Gabriel are dating but skye and him are close because their moms were Những người bạn and wjen her parents died she lived with them for a while as kids. So eventually they like each other. This story is confusing and jeeds work but its what i have. Tell me should i tweek it hoặc leave it alone. Also give me insight into what to do to fix it. Thanks.

Falling...

Sometimes she’s down bởi the river
hoặc other times bởi her tree
Sometimes she thinks about the things she can never see
But when the rain falls down, she’d cry
There’s no reason why

She’s always walked alone
No one’s ever shared her ride
No one’s ever felt close to her, no one’s ever bởi her side
She’s avoided bởi everyone
And never has any fun

Now darkness is her favourite thing
She thinks there’s no hope
No on ever throws her a rope
When she’s falling…