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posted by alejpatv
    The light of the ngọn lửa, chữa cháy faded as I got further into the forest. I jumped over roots and ducked under branches that threatened to whip my face. I ran as hard as I could. To escape, I had to keep my sister an toàn, két an toàn and fulfill the wish of the village chief. My tears already used and dried, but the pain in my tim, trái tim still wouldn’t leave. An emptiness had taken hold where my safety and secure feelings had once been.
    On the edges of my vision, I saw a flash. I skidded to a stop and looked to where I thought I had seen it. There was a clearing where the full moon shone upon the ruins. They once must have been magnificent, but now they were just a pile of stones.
     I decided in my Nữ hoàng băng giá mind that I should be thêm cautious. The humans had found the village, what if they were in the ruins? Waiting for any elves that might have been looking for a way to escape. I glanced at my hand, I had to protect my sister.
    I turned my pointed ears to any sound I heard, I took each step with the greatest care. The progress was slow, but I forced myself to keep the pace. If I went any faster, I could possibly snap a twig hoặc trip on a root. No, each step made only the slightest sound. Only a highly trained warrior would be able to sense my presence.
    I stopped at the cây line. The ruins of old laid just a few paces ahead, but now there would be no trees to cover me. A soft gentle breeze brushed past me. I felt it brush my hair and rustle my clothes. The village chief. I had to get to the ruins.
    I took a breath and stepped into the clearing. No human jumped out, no trap was sprung. Breathing as quietly as possible, I made my way to the ruins. Crouching as the low to the ground as I could, I sprinted to the ruins. The moons light reflected off the white stones in a soft hue. A small tường surrounded the ruins. But as I got closer, I saw that I could not reach the edge of the wall. Try as I may I could not get over the wall. Feeling frustrated, I decided to look and see if there was an entrance.
Staying close to the wall, I walked its length. The moon inched slowly through the sky and still I did not find an entrance. But I had only looked in the parts of the ruins that were shadowed. Eventually, I found myself at the last of the shadows. The rest of the tường was in plain sight. I already was insecure with walking around without cover, but going out into the moonlight would leave me fully exposed.
I felt my finger grow warmer. Looking down I saw my sister glowing ever so slightly. It seemed to wink at me in the shadows. I smiled ever so slightly, my sister worried about me.
“It’s okay, Shela,” I whispered to her, bringing her up to my face. “Remember? I promised to get bạn out of this.” I watched her light grow dimmer as she calmed down. I kissed her, “I won’t let anyone hurt you.”
Her light went out completely but the warmth stayed. I lowered my hand and looked again at the tường exposed in the moonlight. It no longer seemed so threatening.
Full of resolve, I began my tìm kiếm for the entrance anew. The chief wouldn’t send me here without reason. I still crouched low to the ground, unwilling to expose myself completely. I ran my hand on the wall, in case I could feel something I couldn’t see. But then I saw it.
It was huge. I was surprised that I hadn’t seen it before. Arabesque figures intertwined the structure as stony leaves stretched out to the sun that wasn’t there. The arch seemed so old, but timeless at the same time. I was afraid to touch it. Instead I looked through the arch.
But it was empty. I rubbed my eyes, thinking that maybe that it was a trick of the light. But another glance told me otherwise. There was nothing.
It seemed like I was looking into a pit. There seemed to be no light on the other side. I looked at the arch, I could see it clearly in the light of the moon. But the other side, the one in the strange darkness, just wasn’t there. I shivered at the idea of going through the arch. My sister began to warm once again, sensing my unease.
I rubbed my thumb over her, trying to erase any ill thoughts that she might have had. I thought back to what the village chief had told me. It was then that I noticed the coldness that seemed to grow at my chest. I reached into my chest and found the moonstone.
màu sắc danced across its surface without pattern. Cold emitted from the stone but seemed to calm down now that I held it. I looked back at the arch, the moonstone has done this before.
It had happened at a village festival, a band of rogue elves had taken the opportunity to try and destroy the village. The village chief had taken care of them all with just a wave of his hand. No one had seen hoặc heard anything, but where the rogues were once at had become a field of flowers. The moonstone had grown cold at that time, just as it did now.
I looked back into the arch. Knowing full well that I would have to do just the thing that I didn’t want to do. I sighed and took a step toward the arch.
And instead, I fell forward. Pain tore through my shoulder in blinding pain. I threw my foot forward, stopping my fall, and swung around to face my attacker. Someone clapped their hands in a slow beat, mocking me.
“Bravo, bạn actually made it this far,” stepping out of the cover of the trees, my attacker slowly made his way to me. “I had never expected the village chief to throw bạn into the trees.” Moonlight shone on his long, gangly features. Recognition flashed through my mind.
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The ngày bạn Slipped Away: Middle
    I do not know what caused me to do it. I stood with my son in my arms, holding his head to my chest as embers flew and people scurried to put out the ngọn lửa, chữa cháy I caused. I had lit Euphoria’s house on fire. No one needed it anymore, for I was taking Thomas to Yun Gong and Euphoria was… Well, bạn know. I watch embers float bởi and one lands of my pale cheek, burning it ever so slightly. It was only thêm pain to feel. Thomas was     shaking as if he was cold, though the...
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posted by jedigirl
"Caleb? How? What are? Your a dimension jumper?" I ask, finally able to complete a sentence.
"Yeah I am. How are bạn even here? Your not suppose to know yet," He stares at me.
"Same as bạn apparently. Dimension jumping?" I guess.
"Yeah, I got that, but how are bạn even in here. No one jumps in hoặc out of here. bạn have to be brought."
"So I've been told." I say. He looks at me. "And what do bạn mean I'm not suppose to know?" I eye him accusingly. He looks guilty, like he just gave away a secret.
"You weren't supposed to know I can jump until later. Like Two years from now. When bạn found out you...
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posted by jedigirl
I pull up to our house with dad right behind me. He rushes me into the house like we're being followed.
"Don't worry Kodi. We'll fix this," He tells me.
"I don't want this fixed Dad! I want answers. I'm tried of lying to myself. Telling myself that they're just daydreams, when clearly they're not! Don't keep me ignorant anymore. Please," I plead. For years I had been complacent about his silence, but not anymore, because now I have information and I will use it.
"Sweetheart, bạn not knowing is the safest place to be right now. Until bạn have full control."
"Control of what Dad? I can't control...
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         Chapter one: unexpected things
“This is so much fun!” Alia screamed with excitement. Alia was flying over the greenest forest she ever seen! It was bigger than her families’ garden. (Alia’s family had a gigantic garden, and a lot of money to purchase plants) She wisped through the green trees feeling the refreshing air flow through her long brown wavy hair, making it a humongous mess. She saw something, a shadowy figure. “What’s that, who are you” Alia yelled. The small shadowy thing came closer. It didn’t reply. “Hello?”...
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posted by Abyssail
A shapeless void. Interrupted only bởi the occasional shooting star. Every now and then bạn can see colour flare into existence but as soon as bạn notice it, it vanishes and the void returns. Sparks. Vessels. Charges and Impulses. Back and forth and back and forth across the void. Basic, baseless functions repeated to death and beyond. The system is all they know, all they're aware of. Incapable of comprehending the couture of convalescence conveyed about their crafted construction. Barricades exist, of course. Occasionally one of the roads will shut down and the vessels will be stuck in a “traffic...
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This is just the first 2 chapters; I don't know what I'm going to do with it much, but I want to get opinions on what I have so far. Thank you.

"How much longer?" Rena whined, her head on her desk. Her voice was just a raspy whisper, quiet enough to not draw the attention of Frau Abendroth, our study hall supervisor and Rena's German teacher. I looked at my cellphone.

"Three thêm minutes," I whispered.

"Kill me," she muttered.

"Halt deine verdammte Mündung," Frau Abendroth grumbled from her desk, not taking her eyes away from the magazine she was reading. Rena looked up and glared at her. I held...
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posted by gerybarzaka
Hello! This is my first post on this page, but I wanted to share a short story I wrote. I hope bạn like it!


They say that when bạn hit the bottom there is nowhere to go but up. I didn’t believe that. I was standing on solid rock and no one could convince me that it gets better. My dream of becoming a writer was shattered into little pieces. My tim, trái tim with it. I Mất tích everything. I could barely make enough money to eat, let alone pay my rent. There was no passion in my life. My grandfather had left me everything he had and I wasted it. All of it. I was living in a lousy one room apartment. All...
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posted by E-Scope90
Okay, this is my oversized story. I just really hope bạn enjoy. I originally đã đăng this last year, but for some reason, it got deleted. So I'm re-posting it. Enjoy.

The Streets of Manhattan
9:36 AM
I was running away. Running away from it all. I just couldn't stand it anymore. All the abuse, the fights....I couldn't take it.

I was literally running away from these guys. They were trying to rape me. They were chasing me with actual knives. I knew I wasn't going to survive. I was running in heels...I wasn't going to live. I wasn't going to live!

"Get away from me, bạn ra-"
I tripped onto the streets....
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posted by misscrazel
If I put: **** it means they đã đưa ý kiến a cuss word I don't feel comfortable writing.




Brianna was running through the woods, branches whipping her face. She glanced behind her. A young woman with long black hair was pursuing her. She shot an Mũi tên xanh at the woman but she dodged and it flew right passed her. The woman grabbed her hair and pulled her closer.

"You can't get away can bạn Blondie?" she asked. her breath stank of cá and blood.

Brianna struggled to get away.

"Your a tough one aren't you?" she asked, "Well I'll spare your mother if bạn stop it."

"I don't believe you," đã đưa ý kiến Brianna.

"Well than,"...
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posted by JellyPopper
WARNING MAY BE INNAPROPRIATE FOR KIDS UNDER 10 don't worry not real :P Chance Manner was a college student who was sent to an asylum for attempting to bite a mans leg off after using basalts without anyone knowing he took them. He has only tried once to grow big finger nails and slit his own neck open. So they put him in a thêm extreme room where someone has recently escaped. there was a rip on the side of the tường of foam, he found it and there was a hole that let underground then back up to the outside world. He made it outside and the world just got a whole lot thêm dangerous. His first...
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It’s the color of you
bạn always wore it
It’s the color we shared
As we hid form them

With it we showed our true selves,
Though no one cared
Our trái cam, màu da cam book bags
Saved us from some pain

We protected each other
But it wasn’t enough
We were like two trái cam, màu da cam crayons
When everyone else was green

Then bạn left me alone,
All I had was our color orange
As they hit me
I took peace in knowing
bạn were in the trái cam, màu da cam field in the sky
bạn always đã đưa ý kiến was there.

The trái cam, màu da cam of the sun set
Is your smile
Even though bạn left too soon

Orange…

Now it’s my color
My way of remembering you
Now I am the lone trái cam, màu da cam in the rainbow
Without bạn here


I protect my own
Though I wish bạn were here

Now trái cam, màu da cam is my color
A color for bạn bravery
A color for my survival

trái cam, màu da cam will forever be our color
Even though death took bạn away

Forever trái cam, màu da cam for you,
Sweet Cassidy.
posted by StarWarrior
CHAPTER ONE
    “I’ve got it!” Shade squeaked.
    “Hurry!” ngọc lục bảo barked, trying to keep up with him.
    “Corner it there, quick!” Kitmira barked.
    Shade turned the rabbit toward the thick thorn bushes. It was getting tired. Shade pounced; he landed perfectly on its back.
    “Bite it!” Neko commanded.
    Emerald lunged phía trước, chuyển tiếp and sunk her teeth into its neck.
    “Good catch!” Mamma called.
    “Did we hunt...
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posted by LaDispute
She was obsessed with the idea that tragedy is beauty and death is immortality.

He would watch her when she opened her mouth in class, watch the way she flashed smiles when she spoke. He swore to commit the crinkles at the corners of her eyes to memory, the freckled valleys lit up bởi her eyes.

He soon found that he could be the cause of those valleys, a Creator building up his own world from the base of her narrow satisfaction. She soon found that his convictions in tandem with hers had the power to endlessly pursue the edge of the universe in its expansion.

And when they first kissed that cold...
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posted by darkling_menace
(I have thought of a bunch of characters over the years, but since I suck at making stories for them to be in, I can only make the character itself with a bit of back story. Today is going to be the first ngày that I'll be posting these characters on here, since this is the nghề viết văn club, and I don't want my mind to be cluttered with character ideas. This character came to me when I was rethinking an idea for an old character.)

Darcel was once the leader of a tribe of ancient humans in what is now known as modern England, he was a sorcerer who used his magic as an advantage over everyone else,...
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posted by terra_rocker
Chapter one –
Unlike the last few months the last three days had broken out of the tedious routine my days had grown tired and used to. My ngày took the same route as every other one that was until I had to hiển thị the new girl… Briara, where her locker was. Briara was cheerful and happy, dressed in an array of exotic bright colours that not only made me want to vomit but shield my eyes, her outfit an extreme contrast to my alternate altered clothing. My plain black vest top, freshly ripped into a V-neck with added buttons and a tie, matched only with skinny jeans in a dark grey. My dress style...
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Thế vận hội Olympic năm 2012 sẽ tổ chức tại Luân Đôn nước Anh từ ngày 27/7 đến ngày 12/8
Theo danh sách yêu cầu nghệ sĩ sẽ biểu diễn phần khai mạc được tổ chức trên mạng gồm có
1.Hurts
2.Jin Akanishi
3.Within Temptation
4.Alfie Boe
5.Alex Sparrow
6.Blue
7.Morning Musume
8.Anastacia
9.X Japan
10.Jang Geun Suk
11.Coldplay
12.Rain
13.U-KISS
14.Il Volo
15.Jane Zhang
16.Paul McCartney
17.Beyonce
18.L'Arc-en-Ciel
19.Lena Katina
20.Megurine Luka
21.f(x)
22.Infinite
23.Jedward
24.Ho-kago trà Time
25.Jolin Tsai
26.Sonohra
27.T-ara
28.Thalia
29.Nelly Furtado
30.Tiziano Ferro
31.Rihanna...
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posted by fiestagirl12345
Kaylie's P.O.V

i was running in the woods hoping they wouldnt catch me. the scientist who were trying to test me. cause i was super natural. i didnt know i was. until they had me tied down. i dont know what happened i lit it on ngọn lửa, chữa cháy then drowned the guys. i was shocked my self. i was runnig trying to climb the trees. i found the perfect one. i ran and climbed it to the top. they were shooting lazers i was doging them. they were supposed to numb bạn then knock bạn out. they finnally gave up and walked off. they droped some weapons. i smile and get them all. i keep runnig ti'll i heard the most...
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posted by stellamusa101
Caitlin is a 17-year old girl who likes socialising. She is very fun but doesn't know her family secret, her family was servants to the king of the ngọn lửa, chữa cháy Kingdom,Hudson, 17 years ago. But Caitlin has her very own secret she doesn't know..

Caitlin is turning on her phone to chat with Nina. Just as her phone turned on, an incoming call from Nina appeared. Caitlin press green button. "Caitlin! Caitlin! Here this, Dean, your crush, has a crush on you!!" shouted Nina as Caitlin turned on dial. "Now I know why people call bạn the joke master," sighs Caitlin.

"I am serious talk! He told me not to...
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posted by para-scence
"Ready, Jack?" Cat asked again. I sighed impatiently and nodded.

"Yeah! Just do it already!" She'd never done this before. Normally I would've done this myself, but I was too high right now, and despite that, I was still smart enough to know I shouldn't do this to myself right now.

"Okay..." Cat spoke warily. She got ready.

"Don't close your eyes!" I warned. She whined for a bit, then took a deep breath.

"Okay. Ready? One... Two... Three---" Cat shoved the needle through the side of my right nostril. I winced a bit. Cat freaked out thêm than I did. "Oh my gosh! Are bạn okay?!" I took the needle...
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Michael ran from the black, shadowy figure that was standing in the street. It began chasing after him, and he began to freak out. I can't freak out hoặc it'll catch me, and I can't let that happen! he thought. Even so, he felt himself tiring as he cleared his neighbor's hedges and bolted for the alleyway between the Soda cửa hàng and the 10 Cents Store.
The antique store across the đường phố, street from him had it's doors open with it's lights off. Michael sprinted into the store and careened to a stop. He turned around, slammed the door shut, and ran haphazardly up the stairs to look for a hiding spot....
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