nghề viết văn Article: Waiting for Mr Right (heartache)

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posted by XhuddyobsessedX

I looked out the window at the man I wanted to be with. He doesn't know my name hoặc that I watch him leave for work everyday. He doesn't even know I live tiếp theo door to him. But, one ngày that will change.
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The tiếp theo ngày I brought myself to go meet the man I had watched from my window for so many years. I wanted to know evetything about him. And most of all, I wanted him to know everything about me. From the một giây I saw him I knew we were ment to be.

I went up to his door and knocked on it. It opened. He looked at me with curiosity.

"Can I help you?"

"Um..yes hi my name's Monica...." Just then a tall slender dark haired women came to the door.

She looked at what I suspected to be her boyfriend hoặc her huband. The man I had been dreaming of and watching for years had someone else on his life. They looked at me.

"Well um..h-hi Monica.."

Tears in my eyes I brought myself to say, "I just wanted to tell bạn that I just moved in and um I w-wanted to say hi."

"Well, hi Monica,I'm Sandra and this is my husband, Ron." The tall slender women answered.

Sandra outstretched her hand...I shook it..

Ron outstretched his hand and I shook it.

Sandra looked at me, "So, Monica would bạn like to come in? It's sort of chilly outside."

I shook my head tears still in my eyes, "N-no thanks I-I've got to be gettting home..but, nice meeting bạn guys."

"Bye!" Both Sandra and Ron answered. They were so insync it frustrated me.

I ran back trang chủ tears rolling down my face. I opened the door to my house and ran in. How could I be so stupid?! Falling for a married man..falling for someone I dont know!?

I laid down on my giường and cried ..for days...I'm not sure how many I, I Mất tích count after 4..I no longer watch Ron leave..I don't even look at his house. It hurts too much. I know one ngày I'll find that man that makes me go weak at the knees. That makes me happy. But for now,
I'll just have to live my life in pain and sorrow.

The End

SO, how did i do!?! Please Review!! I'm only 13 so, give me props!!! PEACE!!! THANKS FOR READ!!!
-XhuddyobsessedX
...♥

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posted by para-scence

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