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ok...that sounds nice
Jade wasn't sure if this was the right choice,she could always find some where to stay. I'm a girl ill never be homeless.. she thought. But still she went through with it and they walked to mrs.l's car."umm if bạn don't mind, do bạn think we could stop at my apartment? I need to get some things from there....if bạn don't mind of course." She asked
"No, I don't mind.where do bạn live?" She gave her the directions and about ten minuetes later they pulled into a dark alley,they stopped in front of a door in the side of a small building."this is where bạn live?" She asked
"Yeah..it not much but its home. Well was home.." she opened the door of the car and started to get out,but turned and faced mrs.l "would bạn like to come in?" She asked politley."ok sure."

They walked in and it was nothing like mrs.l expected. When she first met Jade she thought that she would have a decent home. Boy was she wrong... there was a small phòng bếp, nhà bếp that was just big enough for a stove.refridgerator and a small counter hàng đầu, đầu trang with a cabniet below it. Across from the phòng bếp, nhà bếp there was a small carpeted area which she assumed was the living room. There was a small đi văng only big enough for to people and a old rocking chair, there was also a few baby toys scattered on the floor which she guessed were her sisters. They walked down the hall and walked into Jade's room. It was a simple bedroom. It had a twin size bed, a dresser, a small gray radio on a shelf in the corner. Jade opened the closet, and grabbed a smull duffle bag out of it and threw it on the bed.

"Not what bạn expected is it?" She asked while puttinf some clothes in the bag. "Not at all.." she walked across the room and grabbed her phone charger and I pod and threw in the bag " yeah I fiugured so much. Its not the best house around but hey, its still a house and to me it was home." They walked out of the house and back to the car. She threw her bag in the back and closed the door. They started to drive to mrs.l's house when Jade asked " I don't mean to be nosey,but what's going on between bạn and mr.m?" That câu hỏi made her tim, trái tim almost stop. What was she going to say? O yeah about that. Me and him both reallly like each other but haven't been out on a ngày because we both just got divored a tháng hoặc so ago.but I really like him and that's why my marrige ended because I tình yêu another man? Yeah like I'm gonna say that she thought. " Juhh..nothing, nothing at all.." she panciked. " mrs.l... I know tình yêu when I see it, and the spark I see when bạn two look at each other just says it all, bạn like him and he likes you. " she was speechless. "I...uh..we...um." "its ok.you don't have to say anything."

They drove for a few thêm minuetes in silence, until mrs.l asked, "do bạn want to listen to the radio?".she had to do something to break the silence."uh...sure." mrs.l reached over and clicked the POWER button to the radio. A song was just ending and another came on, one of jades favorites, so she sang along.
a chair is still a chair...
Even if there no.ne sitting there
But a chair is not a house
And a house is not a home
When there's no one there
bạn can hold..

she was Mất tích in jades voice. She didn't know that she had that kind of voice.


a room is still a room
Even when its full of glum
Ohh a room is not a house
And a house is not a home
When there's no one there
bạn can hold hold....

She thought as she pulled into her driveway to her home,that she really did have strong feeling for mr.m and this girl. This girl has helped her realize that. tình yêu found its way,it jusst needed some help. They walked in to her house. Jade looked some what scared to walk in, like she was afraid something would happen."its ok,you can come in. Nothings going to happen." She finally walked in the room and mrs.l lead her to the guest bedroom."here's the guest room,you can sleep in here and the bathroom is right across the hall. She left her to change in private and she went to make some food

Then her phone started going off. It đã đưa ý kiến new message from brian.(mr.m)
[I] xin chào jasmine! Do bạn want to go out tomarrow night with me?"
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Tbc. So this chapter sucked but it was the most I could come up with. Later in the story somethings in this chapter will be explained more.kk.hope bạn liked it..
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Hi! I was nghề viết văn a novel a while back, but I got distracted. I have only written the first chapter. I feel as if I need better names for the characters. I believe I'm going to chỉnh sửa the first chapter a lot and bring in some other characters. For the main 2 characters I was thinking I would name them something foreign that has a meaning to do with love, to be a little cutesy. Also, tiêu đề suggestions would help! If bạn choose to follow the link below the female character's description, let me know if bạn have any names for the 2 cheerleaders mentioned.

Edit: For 'Jo'/female I was looking up names...
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Ah, the dreaded cliché! The worst feedback a writer can get is, "Well, it sounds sort of cliché, doesn't it?"

All authors want to be original. If someone even mentions that a writer's work reminds them of someone else's, the writer tenses up. "No, no, no, I'm nothing like him," he says swiftly. "I've never even read him."

"Yeah, but it's kinda like him," the reader persists, believing she is giving a compliment rather than an insult. "He's incredible, bạn should read him!"

The thing is-- it should be a compliment when a reader compares your work to...
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posted by Insight357
This is a story; my story. I am Damien Cole Demidov. My grandparents are full-blooded Russian. I am twenty-one years old, and I’ve been locked up in an asylum for four years.
    I have black hair about four inches from my shoulders. I am vampire pale. I have crystal blue eyes. I’m 5’9’’.
    I have met many a person in my time. Maybe you’ll meet some of the throughout the story.
    Anywho, I live in the U.S. now, shipped over with my mom when I was twelve. I live in New York City at the moment. My mom is back in Russia with my father, and grandparents.
    Now, let’s see what’s in store for us.
posted by EmzLovesCheryl
Life.


Life is what bạn make it, a recipe that could either end in disaster, hoặc turn out great.

Some people get an advantage, they start off with better ingredients. But at the end of the day, the person that worked the hardest, gets the best result, no matter how they started.

Never think that bạn can't beat that person who has every ingredient ready-made, because they happen to have that start in life. If bạn are dedicated to what bạn do, then there's nothing to stop bạn getting to that same stage. hoặc above that stage. bạn just have to be determined, talented at what it is bạn want to do, and...
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posted by kayleebabee
As the Bentley pulled into the huge nhà để xe jane smiled to herself gently. I felt Edward stiffen tiếp theo to me.
"What is it?" I mouthed I felt my eyebrows pul together in mystification, as he shook his head it must have been bad then what she was thinking.
"Move it I don't have all ngày and neither do your family." She cackled like a witch on halloween.
I fought back a snarl- that was out of line and Jane seemed the type who would use your family against bạn in a fight.
"She was thinking about the tortures they had put Esme and Carlisle through. They let them get- bạn remember how thirsty bạn were before...
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posted by mars15
I hate when bạn walk away from me
because I'm always scared that bạn won't be come back
I hate every time i see you
because i always melt like ice scream on sun
I hate every time when I'm not seeing you
because i always think where are you
I hate that you're always in my head
because i can't think about anything else but you
I hate when bạn don't talk with me
because i always think that i did something wrong
I hate that i always try to impress you
but it's like bạn don't see that
I hate every time bạn touch me instinctively
because bạn always make me want to hold you,to Kiss you
I hate every time bạn talk...
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posted by FalliNgSparks
Here I spread the màu sắc of my life

They sound like a tune of fife


They always closed me in a dark room

I put on my headphones, enjoyed & played the boom


It's so boring to just see the sky

Today I decided I'll go and fly


Eveyones mind is full of depressions

But mine is full of imaginations


I changed the dark night into shining sequins

And the heap into beautiful fragrance


I don't want bạn to make my hair a mess

Cause I'm wearing the tiara to be a princess


My passion, my obsession, my desire

Don't interfere in between hoặc I'll blow bạn up with flames of fire
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posted by e2mma2weasle3
If You're nghề viết văn Fiction

1.Figure out what bạn want to write about hoặc what type of book bạn want to write. For some people, ideas come naturally, but for others, it's a difficult step. If you’re having trouble, figure out what kind of sách bạn like. Do bạn read a lot of Stephen King? Write a horror book. Have bạn been hooked on Eoin Colfer ever since the một giây grade? Write a story about elves and technology. If bạn try to write a book that bạn would enjoy reading, nghề viết văn it will be thêm fun and easy.

2. Know the elements of a good novel.

-The setting. The setting of a story is its time...
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posted by twilight-rocks9
sorry it's so long let me know if bạn like it



We’re finally out of the house and coughing I looked at my ivory skin marked with ashes I looked at jose same thing. “jose do bạn have the money and your clothes?” I ask “yes do bạn have the thực phẩm and your clothes?” my little brother asked I can explain the bags we wanted to run away because our parents were splitting up.“Of course oh my goodness look at Domingos’ house” I say. It is also on ngọn lửa, chữa cháy we see one person stumble out “jose we need to see who that is.” I say. He already was running to see who it is. “Thank goodness we...
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posted by coriann
Chap 1
They say the woods had magical powers, hoặc that there were creatures possessing the woods that caused strange things to happen in the neighboring town. But myths may be able to fool the 19th century, maybe even the 20th century, but the 21st century? You’ve got to be kidding me. With the kind of first class technology that can map out entire areas through every nook and cranny, and that can create a program that can entangle the entire world in its web. The 21st century was 1st class, un-gullible and not easily fooled, too wrapped up in our own little bubble of a world that we created...
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posted by dragonwriter
I wake up. It's early in the morning. A cool wind blows bởi my face whispering sounds i don't understand. I look up at the sky and notice that it is a light blue color and it makes me feel that there is no problems in the world. Looking around i get a different story.

Blood everywhere. Bodies over bodies and not a living soul in sight. Who could have done this? My head starts to spin and my vision is going blurry. A creature appears from the wind that was flying bởi my head earlier.

This creature starts walking torwards me speaking in a language that I have never heard before. I go to reach for my gun and find a giant hole in my right leg. It continues to get closer and closer and is staring at me as if to be a hunter and I am it's prey.

Knowing that this is the end I look up at the sky. Beginning to close my eyes the last of my sights are focused ont he Blue Skys.