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eDward's Lullaby : My Light in The Twilight

posted by AdaLove

bạn are my life sence
before you, my life was
a story without tense
yOU are the sweetest dream,
my nigh't's lullaby,
my only dream.
my only heartbeat
Bels,your sweet gaze
Cuts like a dao, con dao into the haze
I’d let bạn push me, make me frown
coz bạn are the most important thing
Your force of will now made unbound
YOUr Sô cô la eyes,
can take me higher,
bạn are the rason for me
bạn are my light in the twilight
my light love

p.s : xin chào guys!i like very much nghề viết văn but i don't be a good poet!don't be mean with me!i hope bạn like it!

patrisha727, forbiddenLURVE and 4 others like this

AdaLove i h00pe you like that

Edward_Bella234 Thats really sweet!! I like it!!

AdaLove thank you!

Brysis OMG I LOVE this poem, i guess you have a talent!!!!!!!!!! This is so beautiful, I really could imagine Edward singing this to Bella!! Amazing

Elena2597 THIS POEM IS SO COOL! 1 of the best poems i've ever read :)

twilight0girl AwSoMe!

AdaLove thanks!it mean a lot for me coz you know when you reaad positive comments i feel better!i love you all so much!!!!!!!!!!xxxxx!

AdaLove really i am glad you like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Natalia94 YOUr chocolate eyes, can take me higher, you are the rason for me you are my light in the twilight my light love... I love the way it ends!!!! My congrats!!! it's a very good poem!