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hi guys just being really Công chúa tóc xù here coz i dont usually do this but would u plz read a poem i wrote? it was inspired bởi twilight saga :)

my friend Twilight_lover encoraged me 2 put my poem up here! plz tell me wot u really think i want to b told the truth coz i tình yêu nghề viết văn and i want to improve it thx :

tình yêu is the closest thing we have to magic
But It can be hurtful and painful too
it lies in those whos hearts are cold
it glows in those who are true.

bạn can find it in the least expected places,
It can kill to let tình yêu go
It can comfort those who are in need of help
It can fight and take over woe

tình yêu is something that never dies,
It stays in the hearts of the gone,
tình yêu is a candle that never goes out,
No one knows where its from

tình yêu is the glue that holds us together,
It is the thing that makes us smile
Without knowing, we rely on love
thêm then anyone would know

It can kill those who turn against it,
It can take over those who don’t
It can bring tears and laughter and cries of pain
But die is what it wont

People hurt for those that leave
tình yêu finds the one who another needs
They need the ones they can’t live without
It can cause hearts to bleed


Sometimes tình yêu burns
To an extent that we can’t bear
tình yêu is an emotion,
something we can to share

Maybe bạn don’t tình yêu the one who loves you,
But even if your tim, trái tim is full of hate
tình yêu comes first before anything
It burns on after fate

tình yêu can bring back life to those
Who have Mất tích meaning and hope
So I belive tình yêu is good,
It warms the ones grey and cold who havn’t the strength to cope

tình yêu is goodbye, but also a welcome
A bird that flies there, free
tình yêu is something bạn can’t buy,
Whatever the price may be.

To watch a face twist up in pain,
tình yêu is how bạn sooth
tình yêu is calm but also wild,
âm nhạc that makes bạn move

Peaceful is what tình yêu is,
a flutter in the air
tình yêu is sometimes peaceful
tình yêu isn’t fair

A palm on an island,
a petal on a rose
tình yêu never stops growing
we don’t know how big tình yêu grows.


tình yêu is the closest thing we have to magic
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sorry guys couldnt fit the rest in it was 2 long but the ending sentence was the first verse of the poem :) thx for đọc it
Elzybells posted hơn một năm qua
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thanx i luv this poem girl this rock.
blacke posted hơn một năm qua
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wow great poem better than some pro work can i add u as a friend?
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ABDCFan- said:
This poem is awesomeeee! (:
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thx!! that means alot
Elzybells posted hơn một năm qua
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o and btw ur reveiw is awesomeeee! aswell ;) LOL – Liên minh huyền thoại
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Hellohoudini said:
Beautiful and moving! Dont be afraid to post more..
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thanks that is really really nice it means loads to me thank u xx
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countrygirl2008 said:
wow that was very touching . bạn have a natural talent.!
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:::::DDDD LOL – Liên minh huyền thoại thank u thank u!!!! thats really nice it means alot
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ScottishChic said:
THAT WAS AN IMMENSE POEM!!!!!!!!
how'd u get so good at nghề viết văn them??? *jealous*

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wow thx that really nice :)
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twifan2010 said:
WOW, AMAZING! Could u give me some tips on how u can write poems like that, cause I really like nghề viết văn n would like to do some more! :)
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thx ye i will x :)
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loverofedward said:
xin chào there ur poem is really awesome u knw .I guess u must b in luv too dats y u wrote dis poem.U did include dat suggestions r welcome so i just felt dat ur line "love isnt fair" is incorrect as i think luv is always fair hoặc maybe u cld xplain wat did u meant bởi it.
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kk thx and btw im not in love!!! LOL – Liên minh huyền thoại thx tho
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