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Opportunity of a Lifetime chapter 5

After playing a round of pool which I Mất tích terribly in, it was time for bed. 

The tiếp theo morning I had the worst wake up call-slash-prank ever. The guys came into my room with a metal pot and a spoon, making as much noisy as possible. I am pretty sure of that. I just kind of rolled over and pulled my cái gối, gối over my head. 
Hey! Wake up! Leo said. 
I'll be up in few. I mumbled. 
If bạn don't, we're going to throw bạn in the pool! Jake warned. 
They wouldn't do that to me! I thought.  I am so jet lagged. I just needed some thêm sleep. I kept thinking. 
Okay, Jake warned you. Cam said. 
tiếp theo thing I know, I am being thrown over someones shoulder. I didn't fight back.
Rivers had me thrown over his shoulder and was walking really fast towards the pool. I was kinda of scared. I kept thinking wonder if Rivers doesn't throw me far enough into the pool and I hit my head. I just kept thinking. I almost started to panic but then I thought why would I panic? I'm not scared of the water. I know it's a deep pool and that I'll be fine. 
When Rivers walked outside it was super bright. I had my eyes closed and it still seemed way to bright. 
Wake up, Loryn! Rivers said. 
I swear Rivers if bạn throw me into this pool, this will be the longest năm of your life. I threatened. 
Rivers stopped and set me down in the grass. 
That's no fun! Leo đã đưa ý kiến sarcastically. 
Whatever. I đã đưa ý kiến giving him an evil look. 
Okay I'm going surfing. Jake đã đưa ý kiến as he walked past me.  
I went and changed into my bathing suit and went and grabbed my surfboard. The waves were huge to me. I hadn't ever surfed big waves like these. These waves were like 7 foot and I have only surfed in like 3 foot mush. I stood on the bờ biển, bãi biển for a một phút hoặc two and then I paddled out into the line up. It seemed like it took me for forever to paddle out but when I finally made it I was exhausted. When it was my turn to go I paddled and paddled but when the wave finally came, I backed out. I was freaking out over how big the waves were. 
Come on, Loryn. That wave was the best one out of the set! Jake yelled. 
I didn't say anything back. I just paddled back into the line up. I was determined to go on the tiếp theo wave though. 
I saw, what look liked a good wave so I started paddling. I paddled harder and harder until the wave picked me up. I dropped in and pearled. The nose of my board went under water and I fell forwards. It was the scariest thing in my life   I had never pearled on my board before. When I feel forwards I hit the sandy rocky bottom hard. When I finally able to resurface I inhaled a big breath and prepared for the tiếp theo wave that was about to crash on me. When the wave crashed on hàng đầu, đầu trang of me, I hit the rocks hard, then all of the sudden I felt my leash get caught in between two rocks. I couldn't surface. I stayed under what felt a lifetime. I had a buckle on my leash and I couldn't get it to come undone. I knew if I started to panic I would never make it so I tried to calm myself down. I kept feeling the waves just crash down on hàng đầu, đầu trang of me. I just kept thinking if I stop moving than I will have a better air supply so I didn't move. I just floated and let the ocean di chuyển me. Finally I saw someone in front of me. I was getting dizzy like and my vision was blurry so I couldn't tell who it was. My eyes started closing and I couldnt stop them. 

Jake's POV 

When I saw Loryn nose dive into the water I had a feeling in my gut that something was going to be terribly wrong. As soon as she surfaced I felt some relief but when she had to go back under because of the waves I  had a feeling that she wasn't going to come back up. I yelled at the girls to go get Bec and Gary and then me and guys went searching for Loryn. When I saw her surfboard sticking up in the air I knew she was hung up in the rocks and couldn't get out. I was worried. Loryn had been underwater for a little bit now. I was scared that she wasn't going to... I couldn't finish the sentence in my head. One thought like that can mess bạn up. 
When I got to Loryn she wasn't moving. She was just staring into không gian hoặc something. She had no emotion on her face and t scared me a lot because Loryn has shown emotion a lot here. She was always smiling and laughing. Her smile was so adorable.  I tried to undo Loryn's leash but I couldn't so I uncoupled my dao, con dao from my pocket and cute the leash off. bởi now Loryn had blacked out from the lack of oxygen. I towed her to shore. Gary and Bec were both standing on the bờ biển, bãi biển and Bec was on the phone I'm guessing calling an ambulance. When Gary saw me pulling Loryn in her came swimming up. Gary and I were both towing her to bờ biển now. When we got to bờ biển I started CPR right away. My dad was a lifeguard down at Bondi bờ biển, bãi biển so I knew CPR and advance some advanced medical stuff that he had taught me. 
Breathe Loryn. I đã đưa ý kiến as I was giving her CPR. 
Come on! I yelled. 
Right then Loryn opened her eyes and coughed up water. 
Thankfully I only had to do CPR twice to get her to start breathing again.  
Bec and Gary came riding up in mule/golf car thing with the EMT's. They put an oxygen mask on Loryn and were asking her simple question. Then they lauded her on a backboard picked her up and put her on the back of the con la and rode to the ambulance. That was the last time I had seen her until now..... 



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posted by surfergal
The following morning Alice woke me up for school. I was putting on perfume when cody knocked on my door.
"Come in". I said.
Hey, bạn Ready ? He ask
Yeah,hold on I have to brush my teeth I told him.
Ok. He đã đưa ý kiến as he went towards my giường to sit down. Once I was done brushing my teeth, Cody grabbed my bag and put me on his back and toted me down the stairs. My cruches were downstairs because Carlisle didn't want me to go up and down them. Cody help me out to his car, my was totalled sadly. When we got to school cody walked me to class except he didnt leave my side when we got there. It was still...
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We didn't talk much on the way to school. When we drove up to school before we got out of the car I ask. Is there something wrong Michae?? No. he said. ok. I said. I could tell he was lying. Michael walked me to my first class like always and then I watched him walk to his class. Once he was out of site, I went and called Alice.
Hey, Alice I said.
Hey Addi, why are bạn not in class? She ask.
i had to ask bạn something. I đã đưa ý kiến
Okay, well ask away. she said.
Is there something wrong hoặc anything because me and Michael didnt talk mcuh at all this morning? i said.
No. thers nothing wrong. Alice...
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When i woke up in the morning Michael was lying tiếp theo to me. We were lying on the đi văng in the sorta same spot. We were spooning and nothing happen I swear! I just layed there watching him sleep until I noticed what time it was which it was around 530am. Why is the sane world would I be up on a Sunday morning at 530am. I got up very carefully and went upstairs and grabbed another blanket.Alice was in my room when I walked in, I made a loud gasp for anyone to hear, but no one came. Alice, I đã đưa ý kiến bạn scared me to death! Oh Sorry she said. Why didnt bạn wake me up, why did yall leave us on the...
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When I woke up, I had the happiest feeling. The kind where something great is about to happen. I went on the computer and i checked the surf báo cáo and saw that it was going to be great today! I was so excited, I ran down stairs and jasper says,Addi bạn are to excited! I know and then I ask, Are bạn helping with this excitement? No, thats all bạn he said.I laughed and đã đưa ý kiến well surfing does it to ya, and right then Michael whats do what to ya. My tim, trái tim ya hear it? I ask. Yeah its going 90 mph. he said. I know its great cause it means there is great surfing today!! I went and grabbed my board...
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I turned around to see bạn had caught me, I was expecting Cody tob there but he wasnt. I told him Thanks. no prob he đã đưa ý kiến Im Michael. Well thanks Michael, Im addi. Can I help bạn to class? Michael ask. Yeah that would be great. I said. He ask, So what is a beautiful girl doing in Forks, I take it your new to this whole ice and snow problem we have? Yeah, Im new. Yeah we didnt get a lot of snow of ice where i lived. I said. So bạn lived "down south" then? he said. Yeah I live in Florida. Thats cool. he said. so why are bạn in Forks? he ask? My sorta brother is in the Coast Guard and he got transfered...
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posted by surfergal
When I woke up it was so early that the sun hadn't come up yet. I tried to go back to sleep but I couldn't so I walked downstairs to find the tv on and Emmet and Rosalie in front of it and edward, bella and renesme at their house and Carlisle and Esme in the phòng bếp, nhà bếp and then Alice and Jasper were on the tình yêu ghế, chỗ ngồi watching tv as well. I went and sat on the floor until Emmet đã đưa ý kiến what are bạn doing up at 3am? I đã đưa ý kiến its 3am?! I cant go back to sleep I said. carlisle came in and ask if he could x-ray my knee and I đã đưa ý kiến sure I don't have anything to do right now. I went to put on shorts, then I...
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When I got into the car, emmet scared the crap out of me he was sitting in the backseat. I đã đưa ý kiến " here Emmet bạn drive". "no Max will notice if someone is sitting in the front passenger ghế, chỗ ngồi addi" Emmet said. Okay fine I said. When we got far enough away we switched seats to where emmet was driving. I started crying I couldn't control it. Awe Addi, please dont cry on me He said. Do bạn think I'm crying on cause i want to? I ask but continued before he could answer. I can't control this Emmet, I can't stop feeling like crap. I just, I don't know anymore. Addi its ok, he said. I'm sorry I shouldnt...
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I waited a whole week with out figuring out it wasn’t the flew, because I hadn’t got one text from him hoặc anything. It was the weekend and I was bored so I ask Jacob if he would drive me to Cody’s house he đã đưa ý kiến yeah. When we pulled up to his house, no one was trang chủ so I told Jacob that I wanted to wait for him.I waited an giờ and a half before I saw cody walking in the distance. I got out of the car and đã đưa ý kiến Cody! Whats up? I noticed that he had gotten really buff and tall since the last time I had seen him.
He đã đưa ý kiến "go away".
Not till bạn tell me what going on I said. Why wont bạn answer...
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The tiếp theo morning was school and as usual I got up showered which is very hard with a broken knee bởi the way. I put on some shorts cause none of my pants would go over my cast and then I put on a sweat shirt. Max cam and got me to take me to school. We talked the whole way there.
I told him sorry for falling off his porch and squishing his hoa bed.
He đã đưa ý kiến it was fine and that I didn't have to
apologize anymore.
I arrived at school and saw Cody before I got out
if the car.
I ask Max if he thought that Cody was good looking.
Max đã đưa ý kiến it's not about the looks it's about what's inside that counts....
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I remembered that Edward could read minds so as I was running I was screaming Edward! Help! Soon I was in so much I couldn't stand running anymore so I slowed down as I was still screaming at Edward. I was breathing so heavy that it hurt my ribs to breathe. If Edward couldn't hear me through his mind maybe he could actually hear me so I screamed his name. Soon the guy that was following me was right in front of me with his hand over my mouth saying don't scream you'll
scare the động vật away. I moved back cause I needed to breathe through my mouth.
I asked the boy who he was.
He told me his...
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When I walked in the room Edward asked “if I would like to have a đàn piano lesson”?
I đã đưa ý kiến “I would tình yêu too”.
We walked over to the đàn piano and we sat down on the bench and he pulled out súng thần công, pháo in D Major I was so happy I loved this song. We sat at the đàn piano for nearly an giờ and bởi that time I was playing the first 4 measures. I was so excited!
I told him “thanks”.
We will go over thêm tomorrow. Edward told me. Emmet was making fun if me because as I got up off the bench I stretched my back and hurt my ribs.
I ask “Emmet why every time I do something”?
“because bạn make everything...
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Later that evening one of there sons and daughters dropped bởi my room to meet me. They introduce themselves as Jasper Hale and Alice Cullen. They were so cute they held hands I quickly new that the loved each other and I didn't think that was weird cause they weren't related.

The tiếp theo morning well it was thêm like the afternoon but when I woke up Jordan and Max were in the room. I was happy to see them cause I
missed them. I told them that I was getting to stay with the Cullen’s for a little bit they seemed pretty happy too.

They had to leave pretty soon cause they had a curfew during the...
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When I got to the hospital I gave them all of my information but I didn't tell them that I was in the coast guard cause I new that they
would call Senior Chief and tell him that I'm in the hospital and that would lead to being kicked out. So I got x-rays and they told me nothing serious happened that it was just cracked so they could bandage my ribs up tight to keep it from hurting as bad.


When I got back to the base it was time to get up so we got in giường diễn xuất like we had been asleep for a couple of hours. That was the hardest ngày ever we had to swim do sit-ups and run. I'm not suppose to...
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As the weeks went on one Sergeant didn't like me I could tell he was always making me work harder. His name was Sergeant Ray. He was weird.
Me and Max formed a brother sister kind of relation ship through the weeks and I told him about the way Sergeant cá đuối, ray was toward me.
Max đã đưa ý kiến “that be wouldn’t let him harm me in any way”.
That night Senior Chief Randal came and woke us up around 3 am to teach us about hypothermia. We had to get in a cold pool full of ice in none other 5 degree weather. In 15 phút we felt the full effect of it. I could barely walk. Once we got out Sergeant cá đuối, ray wanted...
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