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Opportunity of a Lifetime chapter 5

After playing a round of pool which I Mất tích terribly in, it was time for bed. 

The tiếp theo morning I had the worst wake up call-slash-prank ever. The guys came into my room with a metal pot and a spoon, making as much noisy as possible. I am pretty sure of that. I just kind of rolled over and pulled my cái gối, gối over my head. 
Hey! Wake up! Leo said. 
I'll be up in few. I mumbled. 
If bạn don't, we're going to throw bạn in the pool! Jake warned. 
They wouldn't do that to me! I thought.  I am so jet lagged. I just needed some thêm sleep. I kept thinking. 
Okay, Jake warned you. Cam said. 
tiếp theo thing I know, I am being thrown over someones shoulder. I didn't fight back.
Rivers had me thrown over his shoulder and was walking really fast towards the pool. I was kinda of scared. I kept thinking wonder if Rivers doesn't throw me far enough into the pool and I hit my head. I just kept thinking. I almost started to panic but then I thought why would I panic? I'm not scared of the water. I know it's a deep pool and that I'll be fine. 
When Rivers walked outside it was super bright. I had my eyes closed and it still seemed way to bright. 
Wake up, Loryn! Rivers said. 
I swear Rivers if bạn throw me into this pool, this will be the longest năm of your life. I threatened. 
Rivers stopped and set me down in the grass. 
That's no fun! Leo đã đưa ý kiến sarcastically. 
Whatever. I đã đưa ý kiến giving him an evil look. 
Okay I'm going surfing. Jake đã đưa ý kiến as he walked past me.  
I went and changed into my bathing suit and went and grabbed my surfboard. The waves were huge to me. I hadn't ever surfed big waves like these. These waves were like 7 foot and I have only surfed in like 3 foot mush. I stood on the bờ biển, bãi biển for a một phút hoặc two and then I paddled out into the line up. It seemed like it took me for forever to paddle out but when I finally made it I was exhausted. When it was my turn to go I paddled and paddled but when the wave finally came, I backed out. I was freaking out over how big the waves were. 
Come on, Loryn. That wave was the best one out of the set! Jake yelled. 
I didn't say anything back. I just paddled back into the line up. I was determined to go on the tiếp theo wave though. 
I saw, what look liked a good wave so I started paddling. I paddled harder and harder until the wave picked me up. I dropped in and pearled. The nose of my board went under water and I fell forwards. It was the scariest thing in my life   I had never pearled on my board before. When I feel forwards I hit the sandy rocky bottom hard. When I finally able to resurface I inhaled a big breath and prepared for the tiếp theo wave that was about to crash on me. When the wave crashed on hàng đầu, đầu trang of me, I hit the rocks hard, then all of the sudden I felt my leash get caught in between two rocks. I couldn't surface. I stayed under what felt a lifetime. I had a buckle on my leash and I couldn't get it to come undone. I knew if I started to panic I would never make it so I tried to calm myself down. I kept feeling the waves just crash down on hàng đầu, đầu trang of me. I just kept thinking if I stop moving than I will have a better air supply so I didn't move. I just floated and let the ocean di chuyển me. Finally I saw someone in front of me. I was getting dizzy like and my vision was blurry so I couldn't tell who it was. My eyes started closing and I couldnt stop them. 

Jake's POV 

When I saw Loryn nose dive into the water I had a feeling in my gut that something was going to be terribly wrong. As soon as she surfaced I felt some relief but when she had to go back under because of the waves I  had a feeling that she wasn't going to come back up. I yelled at the girls to go get Bec and Gary and then me and guys went searching for Loryn. When I saw her surfboard sticking up in the air I knew she was hung up in the rocks and couldn't get out. I was worried. Loryn had been underwater for a little bit now. I was scared that she wasn't going to... I couldn't finish the sentence in my head. One thought like that can mess bạn up. 
When I got to Loryn she wasn't moving. She was just staring into không gian hoặc something. She had no emotion on her face and t scared me a lot because Loryn has shown emotion a lot here. She was always smiling and laughing. Her smile was so adorable.  I tried to undo Loryn's leash but I couldn't so I uncoupled my dao, con dao from my pocket and cute the leash off. bởi now Loryn had blacked out from the lack of oxygen. I towed her to shore. Gary and Bec were both standing on the bờ biển, bãi biển and Bec was on the phone I'm guessing calling an ambulance. When Gary saw me pulling Loryn in her came swimming up. Gary and I were both towing her to bờ biển now. When we got to bờ biển I started CPR right away. My dad was a lifeguard down at Bondi bờ biển, bãi biển so I knew CPR and advance some advanced medical stuff that he had taught me. 
Breathe Loryn. I đã đưa ý kiến as I was giving her CPR. 
Come on! I yelled. 
Right then Loryn opened her eyes and coughed up water. 
Thankfully I only had to do CPR twice to get her to start breathing again.  
Bec and Gary came riding up in mule/golf car thing with the EMT's. They put an oxygen mask on Loryn and were asking her simple question. Then they lauded her on a backboard picked her up and put her on the back of the con la and rode to the ambulance. That was the last time I had seen her until now..... 



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posted by surfergal
Samantha 17 


Edward took me upstairs and layed me down on my giường and then called Carlisle. Rose and Emmett were bởi side the instant I came through the door. 
Why am I spinning? I asked in confusion.
Samantha your not. Stay awake for me. Edward demanded. 
I stayed awake as long as I could. Everyone was surprised bởi that because I stayed awake long enough for Carlisle to get home, give me medicine and take x-rays of my shoulder.

When I woke up, I was in my room and the sun was shining through my window. My shoulder was wrapped in an ace bandage and wasn't hurting to bad. I got up and stumbled a...
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Samantha 9

It was kind of an awkward silence for a little bit sitting there with John but he ended up breaking it was was a good thing. 
How are you? He ask. 
Okay, I guess. I told him. 
You want to talk about it? He replied. 
My brother doesn't remember me at all. He just remembers everything else but me. I told him. 
I'm sorry. I know that has to be tough. He said. 
Yeah. Are bạn moving here hoặc just visiting? I ask. 
Moving here. He replied. 
Cool. How old are you? I ask. 
16. He said. 
Sorry, for all the các câu hỏi I was just curious. I told him. 
No problem. How old are you? He ask. 
16....
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Samantha 35

Ashton and I left the house as we đã đưa ý kiến our goodbyes to everyone.
Ashton, where are we going? I asked.
Ashton answered the câu hỏi once he had opened my door to his black  
Range Rover.
It's a surprise! He told me.
Ashton drove for a giờ which I'm guessing we went pretty far because  
the speedometer đã đưa ý kiến 80 miles per giờ the whole way. Ashton pulled up  
to a fancy resturant. A valet boy opened my door for me while Ashton  
was handing his car key to the other valet boy. They were both pretty  
cute but Ashton looked amazing in his tux. As we walked inside the  
resturant Ashton held...
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Loryn's POV 

I had been in the hospital for a couple of hours that i knew of. I just remember waking up here in the hospital. I knew I was in Australia for the Solar Blue Surf contest but I didn't know why I was in the hospital but I shortly found out what happened when Bec walked into my room. 
Hey Loryn. How are bạn feeling? Bec asked. 
Fine, I guess. I đã đưa ý kiến shrugging my shoulder. 
I winced in pain. My shoulder was hurting, my ribs were hurting and then my ankle was hurting some but not to much. 
Bec, what happened? Why am I in here? I asked. 
Well, Loryn bạn were surfing and your pearled,...
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Opportunity of a LifeTime Chapter 3 

I took a deep breath and walked downstairs to the phòng bếp, nhà bếp were Bec had called me to come and meet everyone. I was nervous. I was so nervous that I thought my legs were going to give out from beneath me. I help onto the railing tight just incase my legs decided to abandon me. 
Guys this Loryn. I will presume that bạn will all he nice to her and hiển thị her around. bạn all are thêm familiar with Blue Water than she is. Bec said. 
We will give her the grand tour!  Two of the boys đã đưa ý kiến at the same time. 
Well good. I have got tins of paperwork to finish up so...
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Opportunity of a Lifetime  
Chapter 1

My name is Loryn and I am from the states. I won the Solar Blue contest. I get to spend an entire năm on the vàng Coast and train and surf everyday! Ekkkk!! I'm so excited!! Solar Blue usually only pick the ones that have one their contest in Australia but I sent in a tape saying why I wanted to get in, what it would mean and a video hiển thị my surfing skills. I know I'm not that good but I really want to get and see how much I can improve. 
But here is the draw back. I am going to he away from my family for an entire year! I haven't even been a week without...
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Once I woke up it was dark outside. I turned over to look at the clock and it đã đưa ý kiến 2:30am. Ugh, this is not what I wanted. I turned back over to see if I could go to sleep. It didn't work 10 phút later I was walking down the stairs. I saw Nathen sitting on the đi văng watching tv. I didn't know what to do so I went and sat down on the other end of the đi văng bởi Emmet.
Why is this human not asleep? Emmet looked at me laughing.
I don't I just woke up suddenly and couldn't go back to sleep. I told him.
We went back to watching tv.
Well this human is getting bored. I đã đưa ý kiến standing up. Alice will...
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I had, had enough staring of into không gian wondering what Nathen looked like hoặc if he was going to be okay. Everything was running through my mind so fast and so intence I was getting a headache. I walked upstairs and into Carlisle office.
Carlisle can I please see Nathen? I ask.
Addi, are bạn sure? He ask.
I'm sure I can't stop thinking about what he looks like and if if he is going to be alright. I told him.
Okay come this way. Carlisle said.
We walked out of the office and into the big long hallway. Emmet was beside me I guessed that Carlisle wanted him up here for my support. Carlisle open...
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We ended up shopping for most of the ngày and I was so tried once we got back to our house. Emmet and Rosalie came over to me and Nathen's house to help set somethings up like the cribs. Rosalie and Alice help me pick out the em bé bedding. Once everything was set up and we had picked out the bedding Alice, Jasper, Rosalie and Emmet left. Nathen and I could finally relax and be with each other. We both ended up falling asleep on the couch.
Days went bởi and I was getting closer to my due ngày and that brought thêm nerves.We had decided to name the boy Oakley Cade Fanning and for the girl we...
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When I finished my homework it was around 11pm. I was tired but I was understood it unlike usual. I went to sleep and I woke up in the middle of the night really thirsty and sickish feeling. I went and got a glass of water and then Carlisle walked down the stairs and I asked him if he would take my temperature. He đã đưa ý kiến yes and for me to go sit
on the đi văng while he went to get his bag. When he returned he took my temperature and đã đưa ý kiến that I had a slight fever and then I just had to
run to the bathroom. I had never puked so much in my life. When I was done I just layed there in the floor. I...
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Samantha 14

Once I đã đưa ý kiến my goodbyes to everyone, we were out the door and on the highway. I drove for a three hours untill, I got really sleppy and Emmett took over. I layed down in the back ghế, chỗ ngồi and covered up with my blanket that I had packed with my pillow. I took those two things on every trip. When I woke up the sun was rising and we were Emmett was still driving. 
How ya hold up? I asked laughing to myself. 
Samantha, I don't get tired. bạn know that. He said. 
I know I felt like laughing. I told them. Where are we? I asked. 
California. Rose said. 
Are we near some waves? I asked. 
No,...
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Samantha 12 

I knew know that no one wanted to put up with. I was friendly to everyone and they all knew that I was trying my hardest to focus on school and not surfing. It wasn't working though. I was so fustrated at school somedays that I would just go and sit on the bờ biển, bãi biển and cry. I started school 2 days cách đây and naturally I hated it. I went to school on the La Push reservation and that made it easier to have friends, well I didn't have many at all. Jacob was to old to go to school along with his pack and then there were some youngers guys that were nice but they didn't like the fact that...
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Once Nathen came back down from Carlisle seeing how well he was healing we headed back to our house. I was happy again. Those 3 and a half days I didn't smile hoặc laugh the whole time it was too hard of a situation for me. I never knew that something could bring me down so hard. When Nathen had Mất tích his memory, I didn't have any hope at all that he was going to get it back. I was so sad, well that doesn't even describe the emotions I went through the whole time, but now everything was back to normal and I was thêm than thrilled. Nathen and I were sitting on the đi văng well i was lying down while...
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Samantha 7

Mom and Dad came back in to Oakley's room. I let them have their chairs back and I went and sat in a different chair in the corner of the room so I could lean my head on the wall. I sat there and just stared at Oakley and soon her had visitors like; Garrett and of course the doctors and then a couple of lifeguards that we knew. Matt dropped bởi to see him and o wast fully paying attention to everyone in the room but when I heard my name I listened in on the convo. They were saying how I wasn't doing anything but school I was missing out on. I tuned them back out again and focused my...
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We surfed for a couple of hours and then went back to the house. The following morning Oakley and I went and spent our last ngày of our summer surfing and fishing. We were exhausted after a full ngày of surfing and some fishing. I went trang chủ ate supper, took a vòi hoa sen and fell asleep on my bed. I couldn't believe that school would start tomorrow. 
Oakley came into my room really early that morning to wake me up for some before school surfing. I quickly jumped out of my giường and grabbed clothes and everything I would need at school. I threw everything into my Land Rover along with my surfboard and...
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Once we got off of the plane we got into a car and drove to a small airport. I don't even know if it would be classified as an airport. I saw the plane that we would be flying in. It was a small plane, although it was bobbing up and down I couldn't quite figure it out. I turned toward Nathen and I was about to ask why but he seemed to know my câu hỏi already.
It's a float plane, Addi don't be scared. Nathen told me.
Oh, okay. I đã đưa ý kiến looking up at him smiling.
Nathen leaned down to Kiss me and then we started for the plane. We met our pilot and his name was Chritstophere. Okay so maybe now...
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Nathen's POV

Once Carlisle called Alice and told us about Addi being in a wreck, were all getting in cars and heading to the hospital. I was so worried about her. Carlisle hadn't gave us any detail about how bad she was, but I figured sinse he called and told us I thought it was going to be bad. Once we got to the hospital and Carlisle got her stable he came out and spoke to us. He đã đưa ý kiến that she was in a coma and that he didn't know when she would wake up and she was doing good right now.
Once Addi finally woke up I went in to see her. I knew she was fine but seeing her all helpless just made...
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I wasn't hurt to bad. I had 9 stitches in my head a couple of bruised ribs one broken rib a broken hand and let's not forget my memory loss. I was moved from the Intensive Care Unit to my own room within three days. Nathen stayed with me everynight I told him to go trang chủ and get some sleep but he refused to leave me. Once I had finally been able to sleep I woke up 3 hours later it was really late into the night and I just watched Nathen sleeping and thought how lucky I was to have such a great family and a great fiancé. I started crying when just thinking about it. Over the past months life...
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That night Nathen and I had made plans to go to the bờ biển, bãi biển that mroning before making the drive back up to forks. Once I woke up I put on my bathingsuit and then I took off my ring so I wouldn't loose it. It finally hit me I was actually engage. We drove to the bờ biển, bãi biển and we got there and started surfing immediately. We surfed for about two hours and then we had to make a tough desion on having to leave and go back to the hotel. Once we got back we went upstairs and took showers and then we finished getting ready and sent all of our stuff down to the car. It was a long drive back to the house...
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