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Opportunity of a Lifetime chapter 5

After playing a round of pool which I Mất tích terribly in, it was time for bed. 

The tiếp theo morning I had the worst wake up call-slash-prank ever. The guys came into my room with a metal pot and a spoon, making as much noisy as possible. I am pretty sure of that. I just kind of rolled over and pulled my cái gối, gối over my head. 
Hey! Wake up! Leo said. 
I'll be up in few. I mumbled. 
If bạn don't, we're going to throw bạn in the pool! Jake warned. 
They wouldn't do that to me! I thought.  I am so jet lagged. I just needed some thêm sleep. I kept thinking. 
Okay, Jake warned you. Cam said. 
tiếp theo thing I know, I am being thrown over someones shoulder. I didn't fight back.
Rivers had me thrown over his shoulder and was walking really fast towards the pool. I was kinda of scared. I kept thinking wonder if Rivers doesn't throw me far enough into the pool and I hit my head. I just kept thinking. I almost started to panic but then I thought why would I panic? I'm not scared of the water. I know it's a deep pool and that I'll be fine. 
When Rivers walked outside it was super bright. I had my eyes closed and it still seemed way to bright. 
Wake up, Loryn! Rivers said. 
I swear Rivers if bạn throw me into this pool, this will be the longest năm of your life. I threatened. 
Rivers stopped and set me down in the grass. 
That's no fun! Leo đã đưa ý kiến sarcastically. 
Whatever. I đã đưa ý kiến giving him an evil look. 
Okay I'm going surfing. Jake đã đưa ý kiến as he walked past me.  
I went and changed into my bathing suit and went and grabbed my surfboard. The waves were huge to me. I hadn't ever surfed big waves like these. These waves were like 7 foot and I have only surfed in like 3 foot mush. I stood on the bờ biển, bãi biển for a một phút hoặc two and then I paddled out into the line up. It seemed like it took me for forever to paddle out but when I finally made it I was exhausted. When it was my turn to go I paddled and paddled but when the wave finally came, I backed out. I was freaking out over how big the waves were. 
Come on, Loryn. That wave was the best one out of the set! Jake yelled. 
I didn't say anything back. I just paddled back into the line up. I was determined to go on the tiếp theo wave though. 
I saw, what look liked a good wave so I started paddling. I paddled harder and harder until the wave picked me up. I dropped in and pearled. The nose of my board went under water and I fell forwards. It was the scariest thing in my life   I had never pearled on my board before. When I feel forwards I hit the sandy rocky bottom hard. When I finally able to resurface I inhaled a big breath and prepared for the tiếp theo wave that was about to crash on me. When the wave crashed on hàng đầu, đầu trang of me, I hit the rocks hard, then all of the sudden I felt my leash get caught in between two rocks. I couldn't surface. I stayed under what felt a lifetime. I had a buckle on my leash and I couldn't get it to come undone. I knew if I started to panic I would never make it so I tried to calm myself down. I kept feeling the waves just crash down on hàng đầu, đầu trang of me. I just kept thinking if I stop moving than I will have a better air supply so I didn't move. I just floated and let the ocean di chuyển me. Finally I saw someone in front of me. I was getting dizzy like and my vision was blurry so I couldn't tell who it was. My eyes started closing and I couldnt stop them. 

Jake's POV 

When I saw Loryn nose dive into the water I had a feeling in my gut that something was going to be terribly wrong. As soon as she surfaced I felt some relief but when she had to go back under because of the waves I  had a feeling that she wasn't going to come back up. I yelled at the girls to go get Bec and Gary and then me and guys went searching for Loryn. When I saw her surfboard sticking up in the air I knew she was hung up in the rocks and couldn't get out. I was worried. Loryn had been underwater for a little bit now. I was scared that she wasn't going to... I couldn't finish the sentence in my head. One thought like that can mess bạn up. 
When I got to Loryn she wasn't moving. She was just staring into không gian hoặc something. She had no emotion on her face and t scared me a lot because Loryn has shown emotion a lot here. She was always smiling and laughing. Her smile was so adorable.  I tried to undo Loryn's leash but I couldn't so I uncoupled my dao, con dao from my pocket and cute the leash off. bởi now Loryn had blacked out from the lack of oxygen. I towed her to shore. Gary and Bec were both standing on the bờ biển, bãi biển and Bec was on the phone I'm guessing calling an ambulance. When Gary saw me pulling Loryn in her came swimming up. Gary and I were both towing her to bờ biển now. When we got to bờ biển I started CPR right away. My dad was a lifeguard down at Bondi bờ biển, bãi biển so I knew CPR and advance some advanced medical stuff that he had taught me. 
Breathe Loryn. I đã đưa ý kiến as I was giving her CPR. 
Come on! I yelled. 
Right then Loryn opened her eyes and coughed up water. 
Thankfully I only had to do CPR twice to get her to start breathing again.  
Bec and Gary came riding up in mule/golf car thing with the EMT's. They put an oxygen mask on Loryn and were asking her simple question. Then they lauded her on a backboard picked her up and put her on the back of the con la and rode to the ambulance. That was the last time I had seen her until now..... 



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posted by surfergal
Before I could say anything Nathen spoke up first.
Addi, I tình yêu bạn with all my tim, trái tim amd I want to be with bạn for forever. Nathen said.
I started crying when he was speaking.
I know bạn don't want to get married this young but please, Will bạn mary me later in life? He ask.
I couldn't even say yes I was so happy, so I nodded my head. He slid the ring on my finger and then he gave me a big hug, bạn know the kind where they sweep bạn off your feet. It was perfect, I had my family with me and I had a fiance. The family went back to the hotel and me and Nathen stayed out on the bờ biển, bãi biển for awhile....
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Samantha 5

When I woke up that morning, the sun was just begining to come up. Oakley walked into my room right as I was getting out of bed. 
Good your up! Let's to surfing. Oakley told me. 
Cool. Be done in a minute. I said. 
Okay. He đã đưa ý kiến and closed my door. 
I put on my bathsuit then my rashguard and I pulled on anpair of bluejean shorts. I walked down stairs and Oakley was setting eggs and biscuts in the table. 
How long have bạn been up?  I ask. 
45 minutes. He said. 
Oh. I went to the cabnit and pulled out a couple of water bottles tofill up with water and them I put them in the freezer...
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posted by surfergal
xin chào Guys,
Thanks for đọc my story. I'm sorry haven't đã đăng anything in a while. I was fixing to đăng lên the 5 chapter when I accidentally deleted the whole chapter! I had a lot writen and I'm pretty much mad at myself right now. So I'm sorry but there probably wont be another Samantha story till Sunday. Again I'm sorry for the delay!!
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posted by surfergal
That night me and Nathen talked all night, and not once did it vượt qua, cross my mind again that Nathen from what I understood had imprinted on me. It did vượt qua, cross my mind that Nathen never told me where he lived in La Push. It was sorta weird at first but then I totally thought about how he was always coming here, never had to be anywhere, he didn't have anywhere to live.
Once I finally thought about it I had to ask him if I was right but I didn't know how to come about it. I didn't want to be all weird hoặc acuse him of something he wasn't. So I went to Carlisle, hoặc I had that planned. That morning I had...
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When I woke up, Nathen was still bởi my side except this time his head was lying back on the chair. Everyone was still in the same posistion as they were when I woke up the last time except Edward and Bella were there. I was thinking to myself, I wonder if Nathen has even left and Then I looked at Edward and he shook his head no. Poor thing he must be exuasted everyone must be. This is what I was saying before how everyone had to worry about me. I was sad that this happened to me but I was glad that no one else would have to go through it, I mean like I could take the pain but someone else might...
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When I woke up I was lying in a hospital. Alice and jasper were sitting on a loveseat holding hands and Emmet was sitting in a chair and Rose was sitting in his lap and Esme was standing bởi the window with Carlisle. Nathen was sitting in a chair right beside my giường holding my hand with his head down like he was asleep. Everyone looked bữa ăn tối, bữa tối, bữa tiệc ly worried and then all of the sudden everything hit at once all the flashbacks of what happen a coue if days ago. Carlisle came over to my giường and ask;
Hey Addi, everything is gonna be okay. He said.
It feels like a truck hit me in my side. I told him.
Do...
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posted by surfergal
That morning I woke up and Nathen had left me a note saying:

Dear Addi,
Jacob is making us do some patrols. I'll meet bạn at school.
Love,
Nathen.
I thought it was so sweet. I looked over at my clock and it đã đưa ý kiến that it was 7 oclcok. I was running late again. I found some clothes and then pulled my hair into a ponytail, knowing that it would have to come done when I put on my helmet. I put on some mascarra and then headed downstairs to get something to drink. Edward had me a glass of sweet trà on the counter when I walked into the kitchen. Once I told everyone bye I walked into the nhà để xe and...
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rode for two thêm hours before stopping to get gas for my bike. I drove up into a gas station and pulled off my helmet, and shook out my hair. I found a credit card from Carlisle and Esme and a cell phone Alice had provided me with. I called Alice.
Hey, Alice. I said.
Hey Addi. Alice said.
I'm sorry, I couldn't take it any thêm and I didn't know what to do. I said.
I know, I saw it coming. There is a credit card in your your áo khoác with cellphone and your ipod. I figured bạn could use some âm nhạc for the drive. She said.
Thanks so much and I'm sorry. I told her again.
Its ok, she said.
Well...
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posted by surfergal
Sam's story chapter 3 

Nick and I talked for a little bit on the bờ biển, bãi biển and then he kissed me. 
I'm sorry Nick, but I don't know bạn really well. I told him. 
Oh, come on bạn know me enough to make out. He said. 
No, I don't. I said. 
He just pulled my face closer and started kissing me. 
Nick! Stop. I said. 
He continued trying to Kiss me and then he push me back and I fell backwards, I was now lying on the sand with Nick kissig me thêm than ever. I tried pushing him off but he was too strong for me. I yelled stop again and that's when I heard Oakley's voice. 
Oakley pulled Nick off of me and...
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I layed on the deck for about ten phút until I couldn't take it anymore, I had to see the beach. I got down bởi myself from the ladder. I went and put on a t-shirt and shorts and called Oakley to see if he would answer his phone. He did. I was lucky. 
Hey Oak. Can bạn come pick me up and take me to the beach? I ask him. 
Yeah sure. I'll be there soon. He said. 
Cool thanks. Bye. I said. 
I went and told mom and dad that Oakley was taking me to the beach. Dad told me not to get my cast wet and not to get any sand down in it. I đã đưa ý kiến I wouldn't and I figured that would be hard to do but I didn't...
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It seemed forever sinse we had left the house and I was scared to death. It got cold really faast and it was beginning to thunder storm. We were walking now, well I wasn't Emmet was told apperently that I needed to be carried. I so didn't want to be carried, Emmet was kinda of cold to tell bạn the truth.
Emmet, can I walk. I ask.
No, bạn will leave your scent on where bạn are walking. Emmet had told me.
Oh, can I have jacket? I'm sorta freezing. I said.
Yeah,Emmet đã đưa ý kiến while Rose handed him another sweartshirt for me.
Nathen came out of the woods from infront of us and ask:
Do bạn want me to...
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Rose and I talked for the longest and then Alice came in and Alice đã đưa ý kiến that the guy I had met on the bờ biển, bãi biển was going to be at school tomorrow. I got so nervous, I hardly knew this guy and I was liking him already. We picked my outfit out and then Rose told me how she was going to do my make-up and hair for tomorrow. I then had a thought about how it was goi g to look I de I took off my helmet. We thought the best ways to fix it and if it would mess up in anyway. If it did end up looking like help st hair call Rose and she would come down in a hurry to fix it. I was excited there were hardly...
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posted by surfergal
I surfed for 3 thêm hours and then I got out and went back to the hotel and took a shower.
Thanks Alice and Jasper that was great. I told them.
No problem, I'm glad bạn had fun. Jasper said.
Soon we were packing back up so we could head back to Forks. It was great going on spontanous trips. I sleep the whole way back, luckely I got to the đi văng before Alice hoặc Jasper could but I think Alice saw that I wanted the couch. When I woke up we were landing, which ment I needed to look alive hoặc at least look lik I hadn't sleept the whole 2 hours that it takes to gret back. I came back with an extra...
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posted by surfergal
The jet that they flew on to Cali.
I stayed at Max's house for a couple of weeks, I went trang chủ every so often. Max could pick stuff up now sinse his shoulders were heald now.. I was finally able to sleep in my own bed, instead of being on an air mattress. School was starting within three days and I had nothing to take. When I did get into the door of my house Alice came straight to me and ask:
Hey, Addi Do bạn want to go school shopping? Alice ask me.
Yeah totally. Let me go up stairs and take a vòi hoa sen though frist. I đã đưa ý kiến
Okay, great. Alice said.
I loved going shopping Alice, she pick out...
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This story almost goes with my last one, Another Story but it is different. Addi and Nathen moved from Forks, Washington to Coconut grove Florida to keep Samantha and Oakley (their kids) an toàn, két an toàn from vampires.  



My name is Samantha, I'm 16 years old and I live in a small town called Coconut Grove, Florida. My family and I moved here from Forks, Washington when we were just little kids. Meaning my twin brother and I. My twin's name is Oakley, he has really dark skin like my dad and blonde hair like my mom. My dad tells me that I look just like my mom, blond hair and blue eyes. My hair is natural...
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posted by surfergal
When I got to the hospital Carlisle met the xe cứu thương people people and me at the entrance andax went a different way than me. . Carlisle e-rayed my my shoulder. He ended up telling me that I had torn a ligament ing shoulder. Carlisle told me that he could call someone at trang chủ to come and pick me up but I told him no thanks that I was going to stick around and see if Max was okay. I ended up finding Max in his own room with an I.V hooked into him and oxygen mask on him. His shoulder was all wrapped up in a ace bandage and had an ice pack on it.
Oh Max, I'm so sorry. I said.
For what? He ask....
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posted by surfergal
When I woke up, I turned over and looked at my clock and it đã đưa ý kiến it was 6 am. I couldn't believe i woke up at six! I decided to get out of bed, I went over to my computer and checked the surf as I usually did. I saw that the waves are going to be great so I put on my bathingsuit and sweat pants and then a sweat áo sơ mi on. I grabbed my wetsuit out of the colset and went downstairs and ate breakfast. Alice was in the phòng bếp, nhà bếp when I walked down.
Hey Addi, Whatcha doing up this early? she ask.
Oh, just the usual surfing all day. I told her.
I ate and then left for the nhà để xe got my bike and board...
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posted by surfergal
Once I got up stairs and into my room I checked the surf báo cáo and it đã đưa ý kiến it was flat. Great what am I gonna do now. I can't stop thinking about Cody he kent so much to me and he was always there for and always protected me from everything from other vamps hoặc just tripping and falling. He was always there to catch me and now he wasn't and I didn't know what to do. I went back to my giường and just lyed there thinking of Cody. I couldn't help it, we had been together ever sinse we meet. I guess the pull the tình yêu I felt toward him was only me. I feel asleep crying again. I hated when that would...
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I woke up and got out of giường and I stretched, I learned that swimming will make bạn sore. I jumped into the vòi hoa sen and when I got out I didn't really feel like dressing up so I pulled on my oh so awesome sweat pants and a long sleeve t-shirt. I had to drive my motorcycle to school because once I got out of school I had to go to swim and do dryland. Dryland are where we workout on dry land for a little buit doing,push-ups and running. IT all helps with swimming and that was something I loved.

Weeks passed and Cody and I were close and I was doing great in swim until one night when I was in the...
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posted by surfergal
The tiếp theo morning when I woke up I had a note on my cái gối, gối tiếp theo to me. It read:

Dear Addi,
I didn't want to wake you, but I will meet bạn at school. tình yêu you.
Cody

I got up after đọc the note and went to take a vòi hoa sen did the whole getting ready for school thing, a.k.a the usual teen girl morning routine. I got on my motorcycle and drove to school. The weather was finally getting warmer as in th 65 degree range. Once I got to school I saw Cody leaning againsted his car, his car. He looked so hot. He walked over to my bike and helped me off of it, which was so sweet of him.
"Thanks". I said....
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