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posted by TakTheFox
Yeah here’s another one of those articles. So before I start this, I wanted to say that I’m sorry to CyberEchidna for upsetting him with the “Accidental Kiss rp Problem”. It was not my intention to upset him. However I still stand bởi what I đã đưa ý kiến in the article, and if bạn cannot accept that I’m sorry. I’m saying this here, mainly because I wanted to resolve that, but also because this bài viết may name/reference some people in the past that I have had issues with when doing cross-overs, and otherwise.

So before this gets started, to anyone I reference, I’m sorry if this offends you, and I don’t mean to make bạn feel bad, but these are problems I’d like to have fixed. It is not in any way me trying to reflect badly on you.

Anyway…

So I’ve done at least… TEN different cross-overs in one fan-fic hoặc another, and sadly it hasn’t been a very good track-record so far. Usually what happens is that me hoặc someone else will suggest a cross-over, we’ll agree, then the person will write the article, hoặc I will.

Here’s a danh sách of the problems that happen during this.

WHEN THEY WRITE IT
1.    Usually when I have a character in a fan-fiction, they ask for some personality, and such, but mostly just the name and pic. From there they will just write what they want/or THINK my characters are like, then post it and tell me when it’s finished.
Problem: Just about every time I’ve seen this happen it ends up with them not using my characters in the right way at all. There have been times when Rin, who is extremely chipper and random, acts hot-headed and oblivious, and has đã đưa ý kiến things like “Dear” hoặc referencing people bởi their last name. And that’s just a nit-pick. The worse thing is that they’ll be DOING things that defy their character. Such as Rynk randomly flying away on a magic carpet (or something along those lines). Let me tell ya now, Rynk might be Persian, but she doesn’t fly off on ngẫu nhiên magic carpets. Another example was when Rin was asked a câu hỏi of where a certain medicine might be found, and denying someone the information. I did not have imput in that decision.
2.    This does not happen anymore (and I am so thankful for that), but there was a time when I was not even asked if I wanted my characters in the cross-over. I would find out maybe even weeks after the bài viết was posted, and in short it was not very true to the character.
Problem: Let me answer this with an example, (and once again I am not trying to pick on the person who did this, but I am sorry that bạn might see this and be offended.) Once I sent a ngẫu nhiên E-mail to a friend asking “Hey what are bạn planning to happen in your tiếp theo fan-fiction?”, and he answered with that he was planning to have my character be tricked into thinking that he had to kill my friend’s character after just meeting the people who “tricked” him. I ended up having to take quite a while to convince my friend NOT to do that, hoặc do something related, and in the end completely I ended up nghề viết văn the fan-fic cross-over myself, which to tell the truth I enjoyed, and got no complains about, but if I had not asked about it then, a cross-over where my character gets tricked into doing something bad would be online, and people would see it.
Now I’d like to point out once again that this problem does not happen with this person anymore, and we’ve been past this type of issue for a long time now. The point though is that this not happen with other people in the future.

WHEN I WRITE IT
1.    Not enough info. When I write a cross-over personally (and I can only recall three off the hàng đầu, đầu trang of my head that I’ve actually done successfully, including the one stated in the trước đó paragraph), the person I’m trying to get the information from is usually going “You can do whatever with it”, so that’s what I do. And well it doesn’t go well. NOW, there HAVE been times where I’ve been được trao the info and utterly destroyed the Fan-fic (*coughConflictsArcanecough*) terribly, so I’m not saying I’ve been that great at it myself, but it makes it really hard for me to make characters act like they normally would accurately without information.

CO-OP-WRITING
1.    HARD. Literally the only bad thing about co-op-writing. When I try to do a co-op it almost always ends badly, with the thing not even getting written. (And I wish I was lying, but it really isn’t because I’M not trying. I know that that sounds prideful, but I seriously can’t remember the last time I didn’t do my part.) Whether it be because of being offline for too long, forgetting to check messages, lack of interest, lack of information to give, lack of ideas (good hoặc bad) to use, etc. almost every time it does get written.

So how can this be fixed?

Well MY suggestions… (and note these are just MINE. Others may have better ideas. I don’t know.)

1.    GET LOTS OF INFO. Doesn’t matter how much it is, hoặc how long it’ll take, bạn want to make a cross-over the point is making it a GOOD one. Have the people fill out the following form.
Name:
Age:
Appearance (AND image):
Location:
Other Location Information:
Allies:
Close Friends:
Enemies:
Abilities:
Skills (do not confuse with abilities):
Interests/Hobbies:
Likes/Dislikes:
Lines the character would say (if any):
Accent:
Nationality:
Personality:

And probably thêm after that. THEN if bạn want thêm detail, then once bạn come to a part bạn aren’t sure how they’d react to, send them a message asking how they would want their character to act.
2.    Roleplay write. This is basically where bạn make the plot out of a roleplay bạn do. bạn start off with the main introduction, then introduce the characters, then roleplay a while, go to the tiếp theo scene, thảo luận on what to chỉnh sửa and what to keep, then turn it into an article. bạn can do this bởi doing the normal roleplay format…
A: I like Dancing *hit bởi train*
B: *stops Train* Doctor Octoganopus! BLAA! *shoots train*
hoặc the writer’s style roleplay…
“I like Dancing” A đã đưa ý kiến before struck bởi a train.
B stopped the train bởi yelling “Doctor Octoganopus! BLAA!” and blasting it with a laser from his mouth.
Personally I find the Writer’s Style roleplay to be a better choice as it helps bạn make the little hints like “Little did he know” that you’d not be able to in a normal roleplay (Mangre, bạn are missed.). Also I personally find it to be thêm fun, and quicker, as bạn don’t have to change the story from roleplay to bài viết (and on that note, to those who use the roleplay format to make articles, I have to say I REALLY don’t like that format. Not that I’m calling bạn bad writers because of it, but it’s much harder to read for me at least.).
3.    Base it on a roleplay bạn already did. Take a roleplay bạn had with some person, and write the bài viết based on that, with whatever tweaks you’d have made here and there. And of course GET PERMISSION. This is the easiest approach, as bạn neither have to go back and forth with the person, hoặc ask them for various info (for the most part at least), with the only downside being turning the roleplay into an article. But even then that CAN help with the “Little did he know” effect.
4.    And as always, when you’ve finished the article, check with the person to see if it’s okay with them. My suggestion would be to do this after each chapter is finished for short stories, and each scene for long stories. That way if they want something changed near the beginning bạn do not have to change the whole plot because of it (or at least the nghề viết văn part).

An example I’ll danh sách is what I’d consider the best cross-over series I’ve ever been a part of so far, and it is of course MOBIUS ACADEMY.
The method used in this series involves me and Gracethefox typing up the story’s plot-summary, then (usually) me nghề viết văn it, and sending it to her for approval, before posting it. Now lately however we have been doing it so Grace does the nghề viết văn too (which she’s great at if I might add). And when he run into scenes where the paths of nghề viết văn intertwine, we take the roleplay approach, and write in Writer’s Style roleplaying. We mark the scenes we’ll be using, and mark the parts where they are in the story, then put them together, check it, and finally post it. Thankfully we have not had to make edits to the story because of oversights yet, and I doubt we will with how well it is going. If bạn plan on making a cross-over series I suggest this approach. It has yet to fail me hoặc Grace (or as far as I know).

Now there is one exception in a way to this, which is of course the “In Another World” series. Why? The IAW is based on three things that change all character’s personalities and lifestyles
1.    They’re humans in this, and therefore do not have certain attributes like large ears hoặc tails that can affect their personality.
2.    They do not have powers, which can affect their personality.
3.    They do not live the same way, hoặc even with the same people with some.
The point of IAW is to make scenarios completely chalk-full of WHAT-IF’s, so it cancels out and/or changes…
Accent:
Nationality:
Name:
Age:
Appearance (AND image):
Location:
Other Location Information:
Allies:
Close Friends:
Enemies:
Abilities:
And maybe some other attributes. If bạn are planning to do a cross-over series like this, then most of these will not affect bạn (MOST, not all). That does not mean bạn don’t ask for permission. And if bạn do try this type, bạn should probably add stuff to the thông tin các nhân chart like
What would bạn like them to act like?
How old?
What skills?
What nationality?
What friends?
Etc.

I guess this is thêm of a suggestion bài viết than a standards-article, but I do mean “standards” when it’s in the title. If anyone wants to write a story that has my characters I want to be told WHAT they will be doing, HOW they will be acting, WHEN they will appear, and be sent những thông tin cập nhập on it to make sure it’s okay.

So in the end of this, really quick, while bạn should want it done right, don’t try to push it too far. The people that make the các bài viết DO try, and I doubt they’re trying to upset you. This doesn’t mean bạn should shrug off any mess-ups, but try to be nice about it, and if/when bạn have to make fixes, ask to do it yourself so they don’t have to do thêm work for you.

Thank bạn for your time
EAT PIE AND PROSPER
It's been hours... days... weeks, since I left the Triple S... I haven't found a single trace of Emile-kun... I think I've been going the wrong way this whole time... I don't think I'll ever find him... I'll probably die of hunger within the tiếp theo hour...
"Back to the real world, Mary. Back to the real world."
It's been about an giờ since Mary ACTUALLY left the Triple S. She stopped walking and closed her eyes.
"... Dang it. I have been going the wrong way! Stupid fanisizing." She turned around and started walking back.
Mary walked for another 15 phút before resting under a tree. "I freakin'...
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posted by silverstream101
Well...basicly i got bored and i desided 2 make something 4 Riley! its just going 2 b why i made him and stuff
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Riley is from the Sol Dimention like Ember and her oldest sister Nova. When Ember and Riley were little they played togather all the time. So when Ember "died" he didnt belive it and has been looking for her sence. He got word that a red cat has been seen in the Mobius Dimention and found a way to get there. He STILL hasnt found her but refuses to stop looking. So now hes somewhere in Mobius looking for Ember.
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Small? yes...but i was feeling lazy...so i WILL make a story version soon
posted by Giz_4ever
Jojo's theme song:

(Scratching)

Walked away

Could've been a little bit wiser
Should've been a millionaire
Could have held bạn a whole lot tighter
Acted like I did not care

I want to feel like I'm somewhere
In the middle of this
I want to feel like I'm not just slipping away

(Chorus)
So I walked away, walked away
Because I heard bạn say that it'll never be the same
I shoulda walked away, walked away
The voice inside me shouts out loud
The silence feels thêm silent now

Walked away
Walked away

Tried to step a little bit calmer
Can't shock the passerbys
These tingles within her vision
A pushing child will never cry
My cái gối, gối lies right inside this rushing ferris wheel
I want to step up instead of spinning in place

(Chorus)

I often wonder what's the truth
Where not to go, what not to do
So many days inside this carnival wheel
So many ways bạn can move
Still you're standing still

(Chorus x2)

Walked away
(To end)
 Gizbin
Gizbin
Gizbin the hedgehog:

Name: Gizbin

Surname: Gazor

Eye colour: A beautiful, shining gold.

lông, lông thú colour: A lovely silver

mô tả on looks: Three quills, medium sized ears and a tuft of silver fluff as a fringe.

Clothes: Quite heavy chain mail armour on the hàng đầu, đầu trang half of his body, brown trouses cover the bottom half.

Accessories: He carries a sword around which protects him. There is a chain around his waist like a belt. He has no shoes on. He has two piercings in his left ear.

Role: He is the lord of the land and has a massive number of powers, he has dragon, metal, earth, ice, lightning and power. He gave his ngọn lửa, chữa cháy power to his son.
posted by ShadowWolf337
Welcome Everybody to my Chatroom, for those who are just finding this im making a Video of me playing Slender with Commentary. Okay let me Explain all the other details. im going to be talking to bạn all before the "Action" and that will be at 12:00 A.M. Central Time.I will be recording a my best friend's house so bạn will be hearing him in the background. So untill i make the Video hoặc video (it depends on my nerves after the first video) Please don't freak me out because if i get scared i will scream, and im guessing thats what bạn want(XD) OH I almost forgot to mention this if bạn want to thank someone for (in a way) starting this Thank TakTheFox, when he made the Slender RP he encouraged me to watch video of other people playing the acursed game which led to this whole thing!
Oh here is my Youtube account name so bạn can know where to go: Uberko2424
anyways feel free to talk to me and to each other.
posted by TakTheFox
Chapter four
(Sept 19th Friday)

It was two thêm days until the rain had finally stopped. Because of this a fair amount of the school got soaked when one student, whose name was Chad, opened the door to the inside courtyard, and allowed all the built-up water to not only rush into him and soak his clothes, but also a bit of the inside-hallways.

Grace had walked bởi and found herself surprised not at all to find Rynk sliding in it without a care in the world, hoặc dimension in this case. The janitor’s blue lông, lông thú changed red that day, and it wasn’t going to go back any time soon.

Thankfully it was...
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Chapter three
(Sept 15th Monday)

A particularly rainy ngày at the school, The Inner-School courtyard was almost pool-like with how much water it contained. Its lack of drainage-ways caused the intake to be at least three-inches and slowly climbing. It started like this a ngày prior, and hadn’t shown any sign of stopping.

Most of the students had decided to stay in bed, pretending to be under the weather, as they did not want to attend the few classes available. However around thirty-percent of the rest of the students were huddled in the thư viện that was not attached to the main school, and was...
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posted by silverstream101
 Ember the Cat Now (16)
Ember the Cat Now (16)
*sigh* im just gonna try it like a story again...so its going 2 b VERY long....once again im doing 1st person
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I have had enough of this...not the spy work and stuff like that but the things that people DO....right now im on my way to seperate a father and daughter...sorces have showed that the father, RIder, has been abusive to both his daughter, whos name is unknown, and to other innocents. I find it really sad on how some people r...

I stop running looking around at the barren area and i sigh. I keep moving. After awhile i spot a single building in the distance. this...
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posted by dragongirlkatie
Name : Cynder the night fury.
age : 9
birthday : 10 of july
eye colour: in between blue mint and purple.

her past: Cynder is the last of her kind, her family were killed bởi The Blacknightmare, and soon wiped out, but Cynder somehow escaped the Blacknightmare and longs to seek revenge. Her best friend Tristin the phoenix was her only friend when she was yonger, they got caught bởi the Blacknightmare when they exscaped they got chẻ, phân chia, split up bởi a storm...now Cynder has found Tristin again and Tristin had made Những người bạn with Kate bởi then since then the Blacknightmare has'nt found her but is still trying....
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posted by sonicgmance221
In Mecha City

In the streets of the newly fixed town of Mecha City, was a young, perky hedgehog named Spyro. He was walking around town looking for a school to attend. " Why in the world would I need to go to a school",He đã đưa ý kiến strangely as he walked down the shallow đường phố, street passing bởi many children having the time of their lives. Spyro walked across the đường phố, street waving to the kids but then he saw a sheet the had the word School on it so he checked it out.
Spyro looked at the sheet and read the words "Mobius Academy. "This is it! Finally a school to attend" He đã đưa ý kiến proudly.
Spyro saw the sign up...
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posted by TakTheFox
The Scenario: Escape

“Where were we?”

“In a bad place?”

The Place: Room-444-X-9 of Base X.

“What happened?”

“You were captured”

The Date: January 2nd, 5500, 4th-world

“Who are you?”

“… a friend.”


Chapter two

*beep* went the intercom button.

“What is it?” The commander asked through his com-link to the Unit in the capsule-room.

“There is a green button here. Do bạn know what it does?” The Unit-girl asked in an accent that sounded Russian now.

“Yes… but bạn should not touch it.”

“*sigh* Very well. Not that it’s any of my business, but why is the… being in this...
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Mobius Academy idea

So I was thinking that since Mobius Academy (restart) has been so successful, we could make a người hâm mộ fic about it.
What would happen would be that one hoặc two people would write it, while the others supply info about the diễn đàn (this would include actually nghề viết văn about what happened in the forum, and not just starting from scratch). We would have to rewrite some things, but I think that most of it would probably be very usable.

If nominations are open, I would like to be one of the writers. I think there should be two for one reason in particular; There are multiple happenings...
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posted by blazecat713
It was a dark and scary night four little girls were in a dark dungeon where a witch had put a curse on the girls.

After the girls have been cursed they've been orphans their names were : flare,jewl,frostene,and sharmaine. They were quiet little girls and they have unique powers flare has ngọn lửa, chữa cháy power jewl has spy power frostene has ice power and sharmaine has speed power. So every ngày and night nobody would want to adopt the girls because of their curse so 10 years later the orphanage was out of business and the girls left and took care of themselves.

Flare was just walking down the đường phố, street and...
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posted by -MissRarity-
 Azealia the Rabbit
Azealia the Rabbit
Name: Azealia
Age: 16
Worst Enemy: Shadow the Hedgehog (her ex)
Powers: Super speed, martial arts
Looks: Like picture
Story: Azealia gets kidnapped bởi an unnamed creature (to be revealed) and has tests done to enhance her skills. The tests were done to turn her into a super weapon that could help the creatures win in the war. She escapes there clutches but was left with a burning scar on her left shoulder. When she escapes she meets Shadow the Hedgehog. They soon ngày but break up soon after when Shadow betrays her and gives her away to the enemies.
posted by TakTheFox
Guardian Angel

“So much has happened. Such… terrible things. First Commander St. John… betrayed the Freedom Fighters, and helped Ixis Naugus take control, AS KING! How could everyone be so gullible? Did they forget all the terrible things that Naugus had done before? I haven’t. I just came back from seeing Commander D’coolette. He’s… very hurt. I only got a glimpse, because the nurse đã đưa ý kiến that she didn’t want any thêm people crashing their heads into his bed… which was kind of weird. The time-traveling hedgehog was here a little bit ago. Silver is what I think they called him....
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[Warning: Minor gore and blood.]

Mother was supposed to be bringing trang chủ a new dress for me.
She đã đưa ý kiến it was supposed to be white and beautiful and I would look absolutely lovely.
That isn't how it happened though.
I still looked lovely, but in a different way.

I sat in my play room, surrounded bởi my many dolls. My dress was a deep purple velvet. The was a ribbon to match in my hair. All my búp bê were expensive dresses, like me. My older brother was in the room down the wall. He hasn't come out for days. The maids had to bring him his food, but he hasn't eaten it. I worry for him. The whole house...
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posted by Scorch-Werehog
    As we followed Earthquake, we noticed some things in the trees that we had never seen before. “I think these are called Chaos Spears,” đã đưa ý kiến Alymere.
    “Well, how would we know that?” asked Blaster.
    Please just shut up! I thought. I walked faster trying to see what was ahead of us. Then, a Chaos Spear past my head, just missing my ear. “What the...”
    In the distance, we heard yelling.
    “What is going on over there?” I asked.
    “You’re about...
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posted by Scorch-Werehog
“Where did Silver go?” asked Blaster.
    “I’m right in front of you.”
    “No, you’re not.”
    Then we say his form come out of nowhere. “Now do bạn believe me?”
    “Well, yes, but I didn’t think bạn could turn invisible.”
    He laughed. “He can’t. But I can.” His form changed from a hedgehog to a chameleon. His tail was long, he had a single horn in the middle of his face, his scales were green, and his eyes were a sapphire blue.
    “And you...
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posted by Scorch-Werehog
    “What the hell?!” I whispered. bởi the looks on Earthquake and Blasters’ face, they were thinking the same this.
    “Hey, we at least know it isn’t us, right?” Blaster asked.
    “He’s right, bạn know.”
    “I know, I know. I just don’t like when he’s right, Earthquake.”
    Then, the one that Blight called Gun washed his lông, lông thú off as well. It instantly became a vibrant purple, a scare over his right eye, and sharp teeth.
    “That looks really scary,”...
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posted by SaraTheDog
Name:Jenny
Age:18
Gender:Female
Animal:Hedghog

Favs
Song:Get On The Floor
Color:Hot pink
Flavor:Strawberries

Adictions
Drugs?:Always.
Smokeing?:Yup.
Other:Yup.

Hates:
People who tell her what to do.
Books.
The smell of failure on herself

Fav sayings:
Treat others the way bạn DON'T want to be treated.

Talents
Picking locks.
Escapeing from jail without anyone knowing for months.
Singing.

What to do for free time:
-.- Get drunk.
Sleep.
Insult books.
Insult people.
Hangout with friends...Or ngẫu nhiên people she dosn't know.

Other:She is just about always drunk.Also bạn can never really stop getting in trouble.