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posted by TakTheFox
Yeah here’s another one of those articles. So before I start this, I wanted to say that I’m sorry to CyberEchidna for upsetting him with the “Accidental Kiss rp Problem”. It was not my intention to upset him. However I still stand bởi what I đã đưa ý kiến in the article, and if bạn cannot accept that I’m sorry. I’m saying this here, mainly because I wanted to resolve that, but also because this bài viết may name/reference some people in the past that I have had issues with when doing cross-overs, and otherwise.

So before this gets started, to anyone I reference, I’m sorry if this offends you, and I don’t mean to make bạn feel bad, but these are problems I’d like to have fixed. It is not in any way me trying to reflect badly on you.

Anyway…

So I’ve done at least… TEN different cross-overs in one fan-fic hoặc another, and sadly it hasn’t been a very good track-record so far. Usually what happens is that me hoặc someone else will suggest a cross-over, we’ll agree, then the person will write the article, hoặc I will.

Here’s a danh sách of the problems that happen during this.

WHEN THEY WRITE IT
1.    Usually when I have a character in a fan-fiction, they ask for some personality, and such, but mostly just the name and pic. From there they will just write what they want/or THINK my characters are like, then post it and tell me when it’s finished.
Problem: Just about every time I’ve seen this happen it ends up with them not using my characters in the right way at all. There have been times when Rin, who is extremely chipper and random, acts hot-headed and oblivious, and has đã đưa ý kiến things like “Dear” hoặc referencing people bởi their last name. And that’s just a nit-pick. The worse thing is that they’ll be DOING things that defy their character. Such as Rynk randomly flying away on a magic carpet (or something along those lines). Let me tell ya now, Rynk might be Persian, but she doesn’t fly off on ngẫu nhiên magic carpets. Another example was when Rin was asked a câu hỏi of where a certain medicine might be found, and denying someone the information. I did not have imput in that decision.
2.    This does not happen anymore (and I am so thankful for that), but there was a time when I was not even asked if I wanted my characters in the cross-over. I would find out maybe even weeks after the bài viết was posted, and in short it was not very true to the character.
Problem: Let me answer this with an example, (and once again I am not trying to pick on the person who did this, but I am sorry that bạn might see this and be offended.) Once I sent a ngẫu nhiên E-mail to a friend asking “Hey what are bạn planning to happen in your tiếp theo fan-fiction?”, and he answered with that he was planning to have my character be tricked into thinking that he had to kill my friend’s character after just meeting the people who “tricked” him. I ended up having to take quite a while to convince my friend NOT to do that, hoặc do something related, and in the end completely I ended up nghề viết văn the fan-fic cross-over myself, which to tell the truth I enjoyed, and got no complains about, but if I had not asked about it then, a cross-over where my character gets tricked into doing something bad would be online, and people would see it.
Now I’d like to point out once again that this problem does not happen with this person anymore, and we’ve been past this type of issue for a long time now. The point though is that this not happen with other people in the future.

WHEN I WRITE IT
1.    Not enough info. When I write a cross-over personally (and I can only recall three off the hàng đầu, đầu trang of my head that I’ve actually done successfully, including the one stated in the trước đó paragraph), the person I’m trying to get the information from is usually going “You can do whatever with it”, so that’s what I do. And well it doesn’t go well. NOW, there HAVE been times where I’ve been được trao the info and utterly destroyed the Fan-fic (*coughConflictsArcanecough*) terribly, so I’m not saying I’ve been that great at it myself, but it makes it really hard for me to make characters act like they normally would accurately without information.

CO-OP-WRITING
1.    HARD. Literally the only bad thing about co-op-writing. When I try to do a co-op it almost always ends badly, with the thing not even getting written. (And I wish I was lying, but it really isn’t because I’M not trying. I know that that sounds prideful, but I seriously can’t remember the last time I didn’t do my part.) Whether it be because of being offline for too long, forgetting to check messages, lack of interest, lack of information to give, lack of ideas (good hoặc bad) to use, etc. almost every time it does get written.

So how can this be fixed?

Well MY suggestions… (and note these are just MINE. Others may have better ideas. I don’t know.)

1.    GET LOTS OF INFO. Doesn’t matter how much it is, hoặc how long it’ll take, bạn want to make a cross-over the point is making it a GOOD one. Have the people fill out the following form.
Name:
Age:
Appearance (AND image):
Location:
Other Location Information:
Allies:
Close Friends:
Enemies:
Abilities:
Skills (do not confuse with abilities):
Interests/Hobbies:
Likes/Dislikes:
Lines the character would say (if any):
Accent:
Nationality:
Personality:

And probably thêm after that. THEN if bạn want thêm detail, then once bạn come to a part bạn aren’t sure how they’d react to, send them a message asking how they would want their character to act.
2.    Roleplay write. This is basically where bạn make the plot out of a roleplay bạn do. bạn start off with the main introduction, then introduce the characters, then roleplay a while, go to the tiếp theo scene, thảo luận on what to chỉnh sửa and what to keep, then turn it into an article. bạn can do this bởi doing the normal roleplay format…
A: I like Dancing *hit bởi train*
B: *stops Train* Doctor Octoganopus! BLAA! *shoots train*
hoặc the writer’s style roleplay…
“I like Dancing” A đã đưa ý kiến before struck bởi a train.
B stopped the train bởi yelling “Doctor Octoganopus! BLAA!” and blasting it with a laser from his mouth.
Personally I find the Writer’s Style roleplay to be a better choice as it helps bạn make the little hints like “Little did he know” that you’d not be able to in a normal roleplay (Mangre, bạn are missed.). Also I personally find it to be thêm fun, and quicker, as bạn don’t have to change the story from roleplay to bài viết (and on that note, to those who use the roleplay format to make articles, I have to say I REALLY don’t like that format. Not that I’m calling bạn bad writers because of it, but it’s much harder to read for me at least.).
3.    Base it on a roleplay bạn already did. Take a roleplay bạn had with some person, and write the bài viết based on that, with whatever tweaks you’d have made here and there. And of course GET PERMISSION. This is the easiest approach, as bạn neither have to go back and forth with the person, hoặc ask them for various info (for the most part at least), with the only downside being turning the roleplay into an article. But even then that CAN help with the “Little did he know” effect.
4.    And as always, when you’ve finished the article, check with the person to see if it’s okay with them. My suggestion would be to do this after each chapter is finished for short stories, and each scene for long stories. That way if they want something changed near the beginning bạn do not have to change the whole plot because of it (or at least the nghề viết văn part).

An example I’ll danh sách is what I’d consider the best cross-over series I’ve ever been a part of so far, and it is of course MOBIUS ACADEMY.
The method used in this series involves me and Gracethefox typing up the story’s plot-summary, then (usually) me nghề viết văn it, and sending it to her for approval, before posting it. Now lately however we have been doing it so Grace does the nghề viết văn too (which she’s great at if I might add). And when he run into scenes where the paths of nghề viết văn intertwine, we take the roleplay approach, and write in Writer’s Style roleplaying. We mark the scenes we’ll be using, and mark the parts where they are in the story, then put them together, check it, and finally post it. Thankfully we have not had to make edits to the story because of oversights yet, and I doubt we will with how well it is going. If bạn plan on making a cross-over series I suggest this approach. It has yet to fail me hoặc Grace (or as far as I know).

Now there is one exception in a way to this, which is of course the “In Another World” series. Why? The IAW is based on three things that change all character’s personalities and lifestyles
1.    They’re humans in this, and therefore do not have certain attributes like large ears hoặc tails that can affect their personality.
2.    They do not have powers, which can affect their personality.
3.    They do not live the same way, hoặc even with the same people with some.
The point of IAW is to make scenarios completely chalk-full of WHAT-IF’s, so it cancels out and/or changes…
Accent:
Nationality:
Name:
Age:
Appearance (AND image):
Location:
Other Location Information:
Allies:
Close Friends:
Enemies:
Abilities:
And maybe some other attributes. If bạn are planning to do a cross-over series like this, then most of these will not affect bạn (MOST, not all). That does not mean bạn don’t ask for permission. And if bạn do try this type, bạn should probably add stuff to the thông tin các nhân chart like
What would bạn like them to act like?
How old?
What skills?
What nationality?
What friends?
Etc.

I guess this is thêm of a suggestion bài viết than a standards-article, but I do mean “standards” when it’s in the title. If anyone wants to write a story that has my characters I want to be told WHAT they will be doing, HOW they will be acting, WHEN they will appear, and be sent những thông tin cập nhập on it to make sure it’s okay.

So in the end of this, really quick, while bạn should want it done right, don’t try to push it too far. The people that make the các bài viết DO try, and I doubt they’re trying to upset you. This doesn’t mean bạn should shrug off any mess-ups, but try to be nice about it, and if/when bạn have to make fixes, ask to do it yourself so they don’t have to do thêm work for you.

Thank bạn for your time
EAT PIE AND PROSPER
posted by Scorch-Werehog
    As we followed Earthquake, we noticed some things in the trees that we had never seen before. “I think these are called Chaos Spears,” đã đưa ý kiến Alymere.
    “Well, how would we know that?” asked Blaster.
    Please just shut up! I thought. I walked faster trying to see what was ahead of us. Then, a Chaos Spear past my head, just missing my ear. “What the...”
    In the distance, we heard yelling.
    “What is going on over there?” I asked.
    “You’re about...
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posted by Scorch-Werehog
“Where did Silver go?” asked Blaster.
    “I’m right in front of you.”
    “No, you’re not.”
    Then we say his form come out of nowhere. “Now do bạn believe me?”
    “Well, yes, but I didn’t think bạn could turn invisible.”
    He laughed. “He can’t. But I can.” His form changed from a hedgehog to a chameleon. His tail was long, he had a single horn in the middle of his face, his scales were green, and his eyes were a sapphire blue.
    “And you...
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posted by Scorch-Werehog
    “What the hell?!” I whispered. bởi the looks on Earthquake and Blasters’ face, they were thinking the same this.
    “Hey, we at least know it isn’t us, right?” Blaster asked.
    “He’s right, bạn know.”
    “I know, I know. I just don’t like when he’s right, Earthquake.”
    Then, the one that Blight called Gun washed his lông, lông thú off as well. It instantly became a vibrant purple, a scare over his right eye, and sharp teeth.
    “That looks really scary,”...
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posted by SaraTheDog
Name:Jenny
Age:18
Gender:Female
Animal:Hedghog

Favs
Song:Get On The Floor
Color:Hot pink
Flavor:Strawberries

Adictions
Drugs?:Always.
Smokeing?:Yup.
Other:Yup.

Hates:
People who tell her what to do.
Books.
The smell of failure on herself

Fav sayings:
Treat others the way bạn DON'T want to be treated.

Talents
Picking locks.
Escapeing from jail without anyone knowing for months.
Singing.

What to do for free time:
-.- Get drunk.
Sleep.
Insult books.
Insult people.
Hangout with friends...Or ngẫu nhiên people she dosn't know.

Other:She is just about always drunk.Also bạn can never really stop getting in trouble.
posted by Scorch-Werehog
It was a cool ngày in October when a hedgehog bởi the name of Scorch was born. He has the power of fire, and some strength. But once a echidna bởi the name of Lycantic found out about Scorch, he wanted to kill him. So, when Scorch was about a tháng old, Lycantic went to go and kill him. But his brother Frost wasn't too happy about what he was about to do. So when Lycantic went to go kill Scorch, Frost followed him. Frost knew that Lycantic would use a death spell on Scorch so he put a spell on Lycantic so he would do a completely different spell on him. The spell that he did instead made Scorch...
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posted by -Wednesday-
Character Chart
Character's full name: Hamano Suiyoubi Nevermore
Reason hoặc meaning of name: none
Character's nickname: God hoặc Nevermore.
Reason for nickname: She is a god and Nevermore is her adoptive mother’s last name.
Birth date: October 16th
Gender: Female
Theme: Don’t Stop - InnerPartySystem

Physical appearance
Age: Unknown
How old does he/she appear: 20
Weight: 28 lbs.
Height: 4”8
Body build: Slim, but large thighs and large breasts.
Shape of face: n/a.
Eye colour: Brown.
Glasses hoặc contacts: Amber colored contacts.
Skin tone: Pale.
Distinguishing marks: Horns, Mũi tên xanh pointed vượt qua, cross tattoo, cat like...
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posted by ShadowChaos
"Great. This is just great. I'm stuck with two people that I'm not impressed with." I said. Silver and Twilight looked over at me as if I were a nuclear bomb. "You know, Shadow, that isn't nice to say about people." Silver explained to me. Do I care? I asked myself. "Why don't we find out who took my memories now?" Twilight asked me. "Twilight, it's not that simple. We have to go on a journey to learn about bạn first. Plus, the person who took your memories had a reason to take them." I told him. "But my Những người bạn told me someone took your memories once. So bạn kind of know how I feel..." Twilight...
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Classical đàn piano âm nhạc flew bởi Ellowyn's ears. She turned around, and saw another girl walking her way, hát some sort of tune to herself. Ellowyn tugged at her big daddy's hand and pointed at her.

"Look, Mister Bubbles! Look at her!"

Bouncer refused and nudged Ellowyn phía trước, chuyển tiếp slightly towards a corpse on the ground.

"Not now, Mister B! Look!"

'Song of songs.. tình yêu is calling, daughter wake up from your sleep..~' The other girl began singing.

CRASH

Ellowyn jumped into the air, her eyes went wide as her underwater wonderland became what she dreaded most once again.

Old signs hung bởi a thread. Blood...
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posted by Ciara-the-Gecko
Chapter 2: Queen of my Heart

*THIS CHAPTER CONTAINS KISSING*

Lyssa woke up, her body ached all over and she felt cold. She pulled the blanket over her properly and looked around, the walls were a bland cream colour, the carpet…the carpet was an ugly grey and it looked terribly worn. There was a faint smell of burnt bánh mì nướng in the air, too.
"Where am I?" she asked to the silence
"You're in my house, Lyssa," Aria replied, leaning on the door "it's good to see you're awake, do bạn feel ok?" Lyssa nodded; surprised that Aria had been living in such conditions. She looked at Aria who had changed into...
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SPIKE AWOKE. He then realized he was alone, and he heard the Tornado2 start up.
"WAIT FOR ME!" Spike yelled.
Spike threw the covers off of him and ran outside. He looked past the door to see that Tails was just testing the Tornado2. Windy could be seen, tapping her foot in impacience. Spike let out a sigh of releif.
Windy saw Spike looking out the doorway.
"YO SPIKE WAZZUP?" She yelled speaking over the racket the Tornado2 made.
Tails put on his gogles.
"WE SHOULD GET GOING!"
"NOW?"
"YES NOW!"
Spike and Windy shrugged as they walked up to the machine.
Windy climbed in. That's when spike noticed the...
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A RED ONE TAILED cáo, fox made his way through the brush. He had a horn-like spike on his forehed, one in each ear, one on his chest pelt, one on each elbow, and one on the back of each hand. He ran as fast as his legs could carry him, which wasn't very fast.
"Stupid legs! If I had thêm than a 9th grade education I would make bạn go faster!" he said.
"Spike get back here!" he heard his parents shout behind him.
Spike hid behind a tree. Above him, he heard rustling, then a hedgehog with green supersonic hair and black tips on her quills. It wore a purple dress and and appeared to be a female. She...
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posted by Evolia-Wulf
 What Penku looks like....
What Penku looks like....
Oasis- CH1 Part 2/5
“Speraitin’ kids from deir guardians…dat’s somethin’ ya don’t mention ta me!”

((The tiếp theo Chapter 1 piece to Oasis. For a trước đó update follow the link below.))
link

Flesh parted under the keen blade gliding with nhanh, swift steadiness across an alarming red wound. A hiss rattled from the chest inches from her hand. The clink of a metal scalpel tapping a wooden bowl mixed in din of soft voices touching cool halls.
“Hrrgg…” The voice rose from its hiss, a growl now, choked with pain, “Vaccine…that…that hurts…!”
Soft màu hồng, hồng eyes fell over the agonized...
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It's short but it should give some ideas:

After all of the fighting, struggles, sadness and misery; they're all but torn apart...They tried to make everything right and make everyone happy...But it ended so badly...They never thought it would end like this...The dream's all but a faint, non-existant memory...~

I hope it gives bạn a thought on how it'll be. I'm going to try my best to make it worth your time to read it. Oh and may I ask if the tiêu đề sounded good? Once again; any questions, các bình luận hoặc concerns?
AN: NOT A COUPLE STORY. This story is about the rogue man who finally got caught... Then meets one of the female guards. They become fast friends... 

 The black chó sói, sói was very, very pissed off. He allowed himself to be captured bởi the cops. He then realized how smart they had gotten. He couldn't snap the handcuff like he normally could. 'Well... That's new,' he thought to himself. He tried to struggle his way out of the cuffs, yet nothing happened. He was sitting in a cold metal chair, alone in the interrogation room. He groaned. 
 The door opened slowly, revealing the man in white. He was...
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Chapter Ten: Visions
Location: Umbrage Ave, secret base, Triff City
Date: Wednesday, December 13th, 4337
Time: 5:31 P.M.

Lizzy turned to see where she was. When she turned to her left, she saw seven figures. Each of them were aligned, like a hallway, and in the middle was the two figures *she saw in her dream. *Chapter three*

“Chells, I know this place! Chells?” Lizzy turned to where Chells was standing, but he wasn’t there. “Chells!! Where are you?!” Lizzy looked around the area, but couldn’t see the blind cáo, fox anywhere. She eventually gave up, and began walking towards the figures....
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It was very gloomy and cold outside. I would have figured that it would have at least warmed up a little bit, but I thought wrong. It was snowing outside, so I decided I'd do things with it. I flew out of my tree.

About an giờ later I had constructed a humongous snow-hedgehog. It was no particular hedgehog, just a mobian hedgehog. Not too soon later, a chó sói, sói walked over.
She had long red hair(literally red), camoflauged pants,a gray shirt, and a black jacket.
"Nice snow-thingy. Unfortunately, it's nothing compared to this." She said.
She pulled out two rocket launchers made of snow.
She aimed them...
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posted by Akiko_the_Cagon
The fall air was quickly turning into frost bitten, I had not long before my clan mates would start passing from diseases from the white season. The wind chill made it seem like -60 degrees, but I had to help. I just had to. My body ached to be sandwhiched between two deer furs and near an open fire. I heard a gun shot ring through the snow. Dragon hunters. I had to get back before they found me, hoặc either way, somebody'd die.
Too late. A couple of dragon hunters armed with almost every gun, vượt qua, cross bow and sword weapon imaginable. I tried flying off with my ice blue wings, but I failed, a hunter shot at my left wing with a midnight black vượt qua, cross bow. I started to fall, but I started running as soon as I hit the snow, carrying a cá between my fangs. How the clan leader would be so unpleased frightened me, but not as much as the hunters.
posted by Ex-Smeralda
Slow and steady breaths echoed through the white and màu tím coloured evening, a set of boots walked alone, scrunching up the fresh snow. The boots belong to a light brown monkey with Sô cô la brown air, sky blue orbs for eyes, the only thing that kept the petit figure warm was a scarlet red jumper...which seemed highly suspicious as it had a face on the front and at the back of the mui xe moving about, but the boy didn't even seem to be in fear of this. He just slowly kept walking, wanting the snow to freeze him to death...His eyes were filled with indescribable pain, he suddenly stopped and...
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The chaos emeralds slowly floated up and started glowing. Shadow and Sonic put their hands into fists and they closed their eyes. The emeralds started sping in a circle. Sonic and Shadow were suddenly warped to outer space. They were in their super forms. They saw Chris punching and kicking Madjin. Madjin was struggling to get away, but Chris would not give in. Chris kicked Madjin very hard in the spot 'where it counts'. "And I said, NO thêm KIDS FOR YOU!" Chris shouted. "We have to stop him! He's beating that guy up!" Sonic said. "But wait, he's the good-" Shadow tried to finish his sentence,...
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posted by shadowknuxgirl
Melody, Emily, Zouge, Cece and Shion had all arrived at around the same time, Melody đã đưa ý kiến "what are bạn guys doing here?" Cece smiled at the sight of her Những người bạn "looks like were all invited!" Cece and Melody started a bit of a conversation. Zouge looked to Emily and đã đưa ý kiến "You don't think Silhouette's up to something, do you?" Emily smiled and đã đưa ý kiến "don't worry! Silhouette wouldn't hurt her friends!" Zouge and Emily started a bit of a conversation too. Shion stood there a bit awkwardly, being the only boy. Impatient to get inside, he stared at his watch "5:58" it was almost time to get inside....
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