My first Niall poem, "Love Divided" - Tell me what bạn think maybe? :3

Going somewhere,
Ending nowhere,
Where am I to go?
Wanting solitude,
Finding opposite,
Am I to walk alone?
You, there,
Across the field,
Of fantaisie and fame.
Where did bạn come from?
How do I get to you,
Without crossing the flame?
bạn appeared out of nowhere,
A ngôi sao suddenly born,
And I am drawn to your light.
But bạn can't see mine,
Its too dim to shine,
Never seen in the night.
bạn go on in life,
With it displayed to the world,
And mine displayed elsewhere.
bạn go on without knowing,
That I am here, waiting for you,
That I am always there.
And wait I do,
For bạn to see,
The imaginary girl who is always bởi your side.
The one with the smile,
The one with the voice,
That you'll never seem to recognize.
So bạn go on,
ngày after day,
With your lively life.
While I am stuck here,
Never near,
The one who seems to be my light.
Yes, that's right, bạn are my light,
And shine bright, bạn do.
Edges illuminated,
Flames engulfed,
For the one bạn never knew.
When I am down,
And I listen to your soft melodic words,
Of carefully chosen wisdom.
I know that someday,
Deep in my heart,
My ngày will surely come.
bạn bring me to my senses,
But bạn drive me insane,
You, the boy who's on the edge.
But I am on the verge,
And bạn bring me back from it,
Saving me from darkness.
bạn make me feel free,
Like I am surely alive,
Like bạn tình yêu me with a burning passion.
But I am still a nobody,
Blending with the sea,
And I should just push past it.
But something about you,
Something I've never seen before,
Draws me to you.
And I smile in delight,
But frown in fright,
From how much I've fallen for you.
Though, why am I still nowhere?
Why am I alone?
Without you, I am lost.
Without you, I am unknown.

Sorry its so long and sorry if there's a typo. Please let me know what bạn think of it :)