Boo. I've come back from the grave to write thêm ngẫu nhiên things. Seriously, this time. I believe I've improved as a writer, after several stories a few dozen poems and about ten nghề viết văn classes. So, let's see how this goes.
A slender but sturdy trái cam, màu da cam mare bucked her hind legs, her hooves thumping into a tree. Apples fell like rain, overflowing the buckets and coaxing a smile. A few feet away, a canary-coated mare flinched, letting out a squeak. "It- it's very l-loud..." She mumbled, cheeks pink. The trái cam, màu da cam mate laughed. "Of course it is, Fluttershy. All hard work produces noise." The mare's voice carried hints of the south, an accent that was both soothing and exciting to the Pegasus mare. Flicking her straw-colored mane to the side, the southern-sounding female sighed. "Who-ee. I'm ready for a drink. Ya want anythin', Sugarcube?"
The other ngựa con, ngựa, pony started. "O-oh, um, yes. I-I mean, if it's not a bother, and if there's enough. B-but bạn can--" the other mare's chuckling cut over her. "Sugar, I've told bạn time and time again, ya need to stop thinking you're a burden. Ah like your company, darlin'." The paler of the two blushed. "T-thank bạn táo, apple Jack."
AJ hummed leading the way to the house. "Oh, and Sugarcube?"
"Y-yeah?"
The earth ngựa con, ngựa, pony broke into a fond smile. "You're sweet as cider."
Gomennasai, it's short. But, I think that that's all I needed to write for them. Short sweet and to the point, like AJ. If it's good, please let me know. Writers tình yêu tình yêu tình yêu praise. Thank you!
-Petals
A slender but sturdy trái cam, màu da cam mare bucked her hind legs, her hooves thumping into a tree. Apples fell like rain, overflowing the buckets and coaxing a smile. A few feet away, a canary-coated mare flinched, letting out a squeak. "It- it's very l-loud..." She mumbled, cheeks pink. The trái cam, màu da cam mate laughed. "Of course it is, Fluttershy. All hard work produces noise." The mare's voice carried hints of the south, an accent that was both soothing and exciting to the Pegasus mare. Flicking her straw-colored mane to the side, the southern-sounding female sighed. "Who-ee. I'm ready for a drink. Ya want anythin', Sugarcube?"
The other ngựa con, ngựa, pony started. "O-oh, um, yes. I-I mean, if it's not a bother, and if there's enough. B-but bạn can--" the other mare's chuckling cut over her. "Sugar, I've told bạn time and time again, ya need to stop thinking you're a burden. Ah like your company, darlin'." The paler of the two blushed. "T-thank bạn táo, apple Jack."
AJ hummed leading the way to the house. "Oh, and Sugarcube?"
"Y-yeah?"
The earth ngựa con, ngựa, pony broke into a fond smile. "You're sweet as cider."
Gomennasai, it's short. But, I think that that's all I needed to write for them. Short sweet and to the point, like AJ. If it's good, please let me know. Writers tình yêu tình yêu tình yêu praise. Thank you!
-Petals