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Blue Bolt- The new resident of Ponyville

posted by Dragon-88

Blue Bolt, the newest resident of Ponyville

Last story was halfway good, so this time I'm making it to where Blue Bolt's personality is fully revealed in this story. It all starts with Bolt arriving in Ponyville. He is new here, so he doesn't know much about the town hoặc the residents. He is very shy, so he was nervous to talk to anyone. He thought his way of speech would make him appear weird. So he enters the house he was promised bởi some ngựa con, ngựa, pony who had blue curled hair and wore red glasses. He doesn't know who she was, but he will learn soon!

Bolt: This is a nice house. Who was she anyways? I just hope the residents are nice...

It is daytime, and he nervously looks outside, seeing many different ponies walking around and socializing. Pinkie Pie, who wants to find someone new to play with, goes to the house that used to be empty.

Pinkie: Hello? Anypony home? Can I come in? OK!

Pinkie opens the door(which was surprisingly unlocked) and walks around. She spots several pieces of paper on the ground, followed bởi several drawing utensils. She is amazed bởi this.

Pinkie: Whoa! This guy hoặc girl must be quite the artist! Rarity wouldn't believe this!

Bolt is hiding from her, because he is shy around girls. He watched her pace back and forth, and accidentally blasts out a cá đuối, ray from his horn.

Bolt: How do they control these things?

Pinkie: Huh? Someone there? I coulda sworn I heard a discharge of magic. Maybe he hoặc she is a unicorn! Would bạn like a cupcake? You're a shy one...

Bolt: Yes...I would like one....

Pinkie: YIKES!! Who are you!?

Bolt: I'm a new resident. I'm B-Blue Bolt. Please don't hurt me.

Pinkie: ? Your'e just like Fluttershy! I'm Pinkie Pie! bạn like parties?

Bolt: I'm not into parties. People might think I'm weird.

Pinkie: bạn need to get out more. I like your name! Cool cutie mark. See bạn later, Bolt!

Pinkie leaves, leaving Bolt to make a decision. He chooses to go walk around town and see what it's like. He is still nervous about talking to anyone. He heads for Carousel Boutique to ask for help, but isn't sure how to present the question.

Rarity: Thanks, come again, darling! (notices Bolt) Hello, can I help bạn with something....Aren't bạn that shy unicorn I gave that house to? It's tiếp theo door to mine.

Bolt: Um....I suppose so. I didn't see your house, I'm new here...

Rarity: Something wrong, darling? I can hiển thị bạn around.

Bolt: (blushes) My, your beautiful....whoops!

Rarity: (blushes) Goodness, how kind of bạn to notice. bạn should go see Fluttershy. She's shy too. I'm sure she'll be great Những người bạn with you. That's what we're all about. Friendship!

Bolt walks outside, still blushing. Rarity was a beautiful pony, and he almost embarrassed himself. He just hopes he didn't look awkward in front of her! As he is walking around getting to know what's what and where, a blue pegasus with cầu vồng hair runs into him in mid-flight. It was cầu vồng Dash. Uh-oh...

Bolt: Excuse me....

Rainbow: Hey! Do bạn mind watching where your'e going? I almost broke my wing again...Huh? Are bạn that unicorn who lives in the house tiếp theo to Rarity's?

Bolt: Um....

Rainbow: What's the matter? Can't bạn talk? Your'e weird! (takes off)

Bolt: This isn't going well. She sounded like she wanted to kill me!

Bolt goes around shyly asking where Fluttershy's house is. He goes to her house, not knowing whether she was like cầu vồng Dash hoặc not.

Bolt: (rings doorbell) Here we go...

Fluttershy: (opens door) Hi....Who are you?

Bolt: Uh...I'm Blue Bolt....Sorry, I get nervous around girls.....

Fluttershy: It's fine. I'm shy too.

Bolt: No way! That's awesome! bởi the way, bạn know the ngựa con, ngựa, pony with the blonde hair and wearing a cowboy hat?

Fluttershy: Applejack?

Bolt: So that's her name...Well, I caught myself looking at her, and when she looked at me, I blushed and ran.

Fluttershy: So bạn like her?

Bolt: (blushes) Y-yes. It's my secret.

rượu làm bằng trái táo, applejack walks in, bringing in a look of surprise.

AJ: What the hay? Are bạn that unicorn who was lookin' at me? bạn ran off without sayin' anything!

Bolt: Oh no, another violent one...

AJ: What? I'm not like Dash, not one bit. Do ya like me sugarcube?

Fluttershy: Oh, my....(looks at Bolt)

Bolt: (blushes) Um...oh gosh..yes.

AJ: Well, aren't ya' sweet! (kisses Bolt)

Fluttershy is stunned.

AJ: Congrats, big boy. I'm your girlfriend. See ya later!

Fluttershy: Um, what just happened?

Bolt: tình yêu happened. She's so cute! I'm off to see more.

Bolt sees a purple unicorn being followed bởi a small purple dragon. It was Twilight and Spike.

Twilight: Spike! I told bạn to not eat the ingredients like a thousand times! We haven't even gotten trang chủ to start cooking....

Spike: Sorry, I was hungry....

Bolt: Hello....

Twilight: Hi! I've never seen bạn before. bạn new here?

Bolt: Yes, and so far only cầu vồng has me at a distance.

Spike: Hey, he wears glasses, and he's a unicorn. He can help bạn with spells.

Bolt: If I knew how to control this stuff....I almost zapped Pinkie bởi accident!

Spike: Can I try on your glasses?

Bolt: I need them to see.

Twilight goes to tell Celestia about Bolt, followed bởi Spike. Meanwhile, cầu vồng is flying and sees Bolt.

Rainbow: I hope he doesn't hate me for what happened earlier. I can be so stupid sometimes! Hey, new guy!

Bolt: Oh, it's you. Are bạn going to yell at me again?

Rainbow: It was just an accident, I get carried away sometimes. I'm cầu vồng Dash, the fastest flyer in Equestria! What's your name? I see bạn have quite a unique cutie mark. bạn fast?

Bolt: I'm Blue Bolt. I'm one of the fastest among unicorns, probably. The thing I'm truly good at is drawing. Gaming is just one of my activities. Drawing is my main hobby.

Rainbow: Cool! We should hang out sometime, Bolt. bạn got yourself a friend.

Bolt: một giây friend. Fluttershy's my first friend.

Rainbow: No problem. I'm ok with it.

Bolt is now becoming thêm confident after taking a walk around Ponyville. He met the mane six (he met Pinkie at his house), and had a good idea what was where. He is still shy, but is also confident. He is in tình yêu with Applejack, who loves him back. His personality is shy, cool, and admires girls, not to mention secretly competitive. Maybe at some point he'll have ground races with cầu vồng Dash! This is about Bolt learning about Ponyville, what everyone is like, ad where everything is. I tried making it sound like Ponyville didn't revolve around him.

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NocturnalMirage Hmm, it was much better. It felt more "real" than last time. Yeah, I just realized I'm speaking of reality in the world of technicolor pastel ponies... haha! Anyways, nice job! :) Just one thing: it felt to me like you've rewritten the story in a way to show what I had in mind. It is always a good thing to try to fulfill the desires of your readers, but it is also important to keep your own writing style at the same time. But most importantly: enjoy yourself while writing something. Oh that reminds me. Do you consider a sequel? Cos now that you've established your character, the possibilities are limitless. :)

Dragon-88 Good idea! I'l make a sequel! I just don't know how to fulfill the desires of those who read my articles. Do they want the sequel to be more awesome? More Rainbow Dash/Pinkie Pie? Princess Celesia spending time with Blue Bolt? What more ideas could they want? Maybe in the sequel, Applejack and Blue Bolt will take their relationship to the next level! Or Pinkie will show him how to party!

NocturnalMirage Two things... 1. write what you wish to write, the ideas you said above can all be the foot-stone of your story. 2. I can understand it is hard to know what your readers think when most of the people don't reflect to the story. Only a few people here take the time to make a comment. But that doesn't have to be a reason to become discouraged. I don't know about you, but for me, writing is a hobby... gratification. It's a good way to enter the magical world of ponies and get away from the complexities and ugliness of life for a while. If people like your work, that's a good extra. One pretty basic tip I always find useful. One of my teachers said in Creative Writing class: "Don't tell the reader, show it to them!" It means you manage to create a certain atmosphere to the story. There are different writing styles and each writer has to find their own way to convey their thoughts to the reader. In your case, the dialogues move the plot forward. You've done a pretty good job on that already, so I'm looking forward to read form you in the future. Oh and if you need any help, you can almost always find me here on fanpop. :)

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Hedgehog In Ponyville One Last Time part 3

posted by Seanthehedgehog

bởi the time me & cầu vồng Dash got back in Equestria we saw that all of it was frozen.

Sean: Oh jeez.
Rainbow Dash: How did this happen?
Sean: I'm not sure, but I have a plan. Chaos Control!

Eight hours earlier

King Sombra: I only need a few thêm things to get my time machine working again.
Sean: *pulls out gun*
Rainbow Dash: He's still working on it.
Sean: He's screwed. *kills King Sombra* Chaos control

Eight hours later

Rainbow Dash: What?! It's still frozen!
Sean: But how? I killed King Sombra before he could time travel to get all those pricks, and it's still frozen.
Robotnik: That's because...

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Pinkie's Duel part 4

posted by Seanthehedgehog

D: Why is this happening?!

After evading the big rig once again Pinkie had to stop a railroad crossing, and watched as the train passed her.

Trucker: *pushes Pinkie Pie's car*
Pinkie Pie: What the? *looks behind her* xin chào STOP!!
Trucker: *doesn't stop*
Pinkie Pie: *puts car in reverse*

The big rig kept pushing Pinkie Pie's car closer to the crossing until the end of the train arrived. Pinkie then drove off the road letting the truck pass.

After nearly getting killed again Pinkie Pie decided to drive slow, and avoid the truck, but that didn't work out. She saw the truck in front of her, and decided to stop at a gas station....

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Beyond the Trees of the Everfree ch. 3 prt. 2 Scootaloo's decision

posted by Dragon4322

Scootaloo leaves theater

While the war was going on, Ponyville was informing its citizens bởi making a video in the theater. The Cutie Mark Crusaders weren't interested in the war going on. Except for Scootaloo, she went to the theater bởi herself and saw the video.

The video interested Scootaloo & at the end the video đã đưa ý kiến "and with the Ponyville Military putting all the effort into creating their own flying war machines, Green Flame asks for YOUR help" and once the video ended Scootaloo decided to go to the base herself.

As she was walking out of the theater with the new idea to sign up for the military she forgot...

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The Inglourious Hedgehog In Ponyville part 8

posted by Seanthehedgehog

The train is halfway across the bridge, and Griffons are trying to kill Celestia and other ponies at the engine, but back at Equestria

Luna: Where is my sister?
Pinkie Pie: I don't know! griffons kidnapped her!
Fluttershy: They took other ponies as well.
Luna: Well then lets get them back *turns Pinkie and Fluttershy into Griffons*
Fluttershy: We look exactly like griffons.
Luna: that's the idea.
Pinkie Pie: Now that were a different animal we must speak another language.
Luna: No bạn shouldn't.
Pinkie Pie: *spots Applejack* Ich werde rượu làm bằng trái táo, applejack tauschen.
Applejack: Griffons!
Pinkie Pie: Hallo, Ich...

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bạn people can be really funny sometimes...

posted by xDark_Angelx

If anyone knows me, I am a brony. I've been with the hiển thị for the summer and have loved every moment of it. The fandom is great, and the hiển thị continues to be great. It has flaws, but that doesn't stop me from loving it.

That said, the fandom has flaws, too. And these tường posts greatly represent them.

People are making a bigger deal out of this Twilight Alicorn thing than necessary. Everyone's butthurt is almost funny to me, yet at the same time, I just don't get it. Why is this as if it's the end of the world?

And people quitting the fandom because of it? Give. Me. A. Break. I like to be nice--my...

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The Inglourious Hedgehog In Ponyville part 2

posted by Seanthehedgehog

We drove to Canterlot lâu đài where we were told to meet up with Celestia. The front of the lâu đài was gaurded bởi jeeps with machine súng on them. Soon we went in the castle, and saw Celestia standing with Twilight, and other ponies. "Hi guys." Twilight đã đưa ý kiến when she saw us, "Hey." I đã đưa ý kiến simoultaneously with cầu vồng Dash. Celestia then begun to speak, "As you're all aware, griffons have bombed Ponyville, and other places in Equestria. We need your help to stop them. I sent my army into Baltimare to defend it from the griffons, and that's where they'll be waiting for you, the inglourious hedgehog."...

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My little ngựa con, ngựa, ngựa con, ngựa, pony talk 2!

posted by mlpfim1222

xin chào every pony! Today we will be talking about the Keep calm and Flutter on episode and the My little ngựa con, ngựa, pony sweepstakes! First off, I absolutely loved the new episode. I liked how Discord came back but also learned to use his magic nicely! Some people got upset that Discord is nice now but I think that it was really cool how Fluttershy did that for him. This episode was totally worth the wait! Do bạn like Discord mean hoặc nice? I don't think Angel was ever seen in a episode that many times so I think that is good he got to stand out for once! Oh yeah, it was cool to see the ponies use the elements of harmony again! I always tình yêu to see them use them!
On to the My little ngựa con, ngựa, pony sweepstakes! Soooo excited! I hope I win but, there is like a 100,000% chance i won't! Maybe if I don't even win my parents could take me to Los Angeles! I wonder what the my little ngựa con, ngựa, pony buổi hòa nhạc would be like. Well see ya'll later thanks for reading!

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thêm then One Hedgehog In Ponyville part 7

posted by Seanthehedgehog

We ended up at 30th đường phố, street station in Philladalphia. Catie lấy trộm, đánh cắp a train while I lấy trộm, đánh cắp another train. Both of us used chaos control, and ended up in Equestria heading down the train tracks towards Canterlot. Catie fired at me while I was getting close to her. I used my gun to shoot Catie's gun out of her hands, doesn't this remind bạn of a similar chase? Anyway we were heading towards Canterlot when a russian tank was trying to blow up my train. It wasn't going to work though, because cầu vồng Dash flew towards that tank, and kicked it, but it didn't go anywhere. 'I'm gonna have to di chuyển it'...

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thêm then one Hedgehog In Ponyville part 3

posted by Seanthehedgehog

"That's why Catie might win this time." I told cầu vồng Dash. She was impressed in Tail's work on the train I stole, and could bạn blame her? "We need rocket launchers on our trains here." "Yeah, and with the hearts on them people would misjudge us." I said. Then the both of us just sat on a rock, and relaxed. Meanwhile, back at sugarcube Catie was still with Pinkie. "I don't know why Sean left when bạn came here." Then Catie put a spell on Pinkie, "Now bạn will do as I say. I want bạn to get everyone in Equestria to destroy Sean The Hedgehog, and anyone that stands in our path." Pinkie copied...

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rarity and her Mất tích brush

posted by fefe2002

rarity woke up and wanted to brush her hair but
rarity:oh my gosh where is my brush!?i have to find it!
then rarity called all of the main 6 to help her find it
rarity:i Mất tích my brush! i need it!
twilight:it is okay we will help you
rarity's friends:a ha!
rarity:okay!okay! are bạn crazy! i can not keep my hair like this!
then rarity went mad
rarity:omg!i feel horrible! girl's quick find it i can't stand a second!
cầu vồng dash:twi i think rarity went a little bit too worried
táo, apple jack: i don't think she is okay bạn all
pinkie pie:i think she just need to party!
flutter shy:i think we have to find it quick rarity is crying
then twilight found the brush on the make up place and gave rarity it then rarity went to normal and then
rarity:thanks bạn all are the best now have fun in your trang chủ i have to brush my hair bye!
then they took a group hug and went to there houses

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Rise of Nature's Wrath: Rumble, Tumble, Fall; Part 2

posted by NaomiWinx

It was just a regular ngày in Ponyvile......

Celestia was just quietly sitting in her ngôi vua, ngai vàng room. She was nghề viết văn a letter of the big party she was having today. It was to celebrate the birth of Equestria, but something wasn't sitting right with Celestia...she knew this party..the whole annual festivities. She did not actually create Equestria with her sister like everyone thought. But she didn't let it bother her and decided to have some fun. Nothing could go wrong. She sent her letters to all of Equestria and went back to her royal duties.

"Howdy ponies! Sure is a purty day" đã đưa ý kiến Nikki as...

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Discord is back part 11........WE DID IT!!!!!!

posted by applejackrocks

Azura and Cotton Swirls stood beside each other. CS started playing the guitar. Meanwhile Nikki, Score, and Stormy rolled their eyes.

Azura: *singing* Did bạn Forget, that we were even alive?
CS: *singing* Did bạn forget, everything that we had?
Azura: *singing* Did bạn forget? Did bạn forget 'bout us?
CS: *singing* did bạn regret ever standing bởi my side....
Azura: *singing* did bạn forget, we were feeling inside...
CS: *singing* Now were left, to forget 'bout us......
Azura: *singing* But Somewhere we went wrong
CS: *singing* We were once so strong..
Azura; *singing* Our Friendship is like a song.....

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The Mất tích Memories - Part 4

posted by Quillabex

I pushed my way through the pegasi to get to my mom.
"I-I, what-?" I cried.
"Eclipse, sweetie, thou shall be strong." She đã đưa ý kiến as she hugged me.
"What happened, what's going on?"
"Mmm, I believe this conversation should be taken, privately." She đã đưa ý kiến as she walked out the door. I followed her. "RainbowDash, I would like bạn to take charge of the meeting."
"Yes Ma'am!" She saluted. The doors closed behind us. We walked down the hallway upstairs.
"Tell me, how are thou be throughout of what has happened." I told her how I had the mysterious dream, and I told her about how I woke up in a testing lab....

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My Fellow Bronies

posted by triq267

My Fellow Bronies,
I'd never really wondered what friendship could be,
My Fellow Bronies,
Until bạn all shared its magic with me;
Big adventures, tons of fun,
Your beautiful hearts, faithful and strong,
You shared your kindness, not always an easy feat,
And Friendship is Magic made it all complete,
Yeah,
My Fellow Bronies,
Y'know you're some of my very best friends...

So, today is the final ngày of 2012. But it also marks one năm of me being a brony. One năm cách đây today, while killing time until the new year, and after numerous suggestions from people whose opinions I trust, and massive amounts of research,...

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A Changeling Hearth's Warming Eve Part 5

posted by The_Exorcist

Cotton Swirls explained to them about Queen Chrysalis. "UGH! I can't believe she did that!"said Score Heights. "We must go defeat her,now."said Cotton Swirls. They all đã đưa ý kiến okay and went out the door.

"SURPRISE!"said Applejack. They all đã đưa ý kiến oh no and Score Heights told her,"Applejack,you lied to us the whole time! Just get out of Ponyville!" rượu làm bằng trái táo, applejack told her,"Ha,like I am going to do that! I mean,isn't it just wonderful? Seeing all the ponies in great scare,chaos,and no Christmas? I tình yêu it!"! "Come on,let's put them on!"said Azura Alor. They all put on their elements,and then defeated Applejack....

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December 2012- Score Heights Birthday (sample for năm long fanfic article)

posted by Quillabex

The snow fell calmly from the nightly sky as Score Heights was asleep in her bed. The full moon's light broke the shadows of her room and lit it up with the warmth of Luna's magic. The light eventually shifted to Score's face as she rolled over, disturbed bởi light. For a moment, she paused, hoping to go back to sleep when she remembered that it was her birthday today, December 4th. She rolled over again to look at her clock. "12:00 AM," she muttered under her breath, then yawned and rolled back over to go back to sleep.

She then popped up screaming; "IT'S MY BIRTHDAY!" She jumped up and down...

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Discord is back part 1 .......A picnic

posted by applejackrocks

It was a beautiful, sunny ngày in Ponyville, and Nikki had decided to invite all her Những người bạn to a picnic. She called up her friend Azura, to invite her.........

Azura: Hello, this is Azura Alor speaking.
Nikki: Howdy Azura, it's me Nikki.
Azura: Oh, xin chào Nikki.
Nikki: So ah was wondering, would bạn like to go-
Azura: To the Everfree forest?!?!
Nikki: No
Azura: go climb up a big mountain?!?!?
Nikki: no
Azura: To go on a adventure?!?!?
Nikki: uhhhh no...to go on a picnic
Azura: oh....ummm okay.
Nikki: Great then! See bạn at 12:00!

And so Nikki called all her friends, Stormy sky, Cotton Swirls and Score Height....

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Hedgehog In Ponyville With A Vengeance pt8

posted by Seanthehedgehog

When cầu vồng Dash returned I started talking to her. "Ok, what did bạn find out?" "Discord got to Stalliongrad. They have at least 400 Nazi's and badniks guarding that city." cầu vồng Dash said. "How's our army doing in there?" I ask. "Not bad. Half of our squad survived, including your Những người bạn from Mobius." She meant Sonic, Tails, and Knuckles. I was glad they survived, but there was still a chance they would be dead bởi the time we got there. "We'll take my car." I said. "You can, I'm going to fly." Dash said. Before we left rượu làm bằng trái táo, applejack showed up, "Where ya'll goin?" She asked. "Stalliongrad....

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Rarest of Them All: Chapter 2- The Cardsharks

posted by MinervaHoot

Roulette awoke with a start. The unicorn looked around nervously. As she tugged her limbs, it dawned on her that she was chained to a mannequin.
"Ah, what a pleasant surprise! I thought you'd never wake up."
Roulette searched for the nguồn of the voice, which was difficult to do, được trao the position she was in.
Just as the unicorn brightened her horn to release herself, an object levitated out of the darkness and swiped at her horn. The hacks, however, weren't at random. They seemed to be aimed at strategic places. Roulette looked around nervously, and was surprised to see a pale figure step...

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Hedgehog in Ponyville AGAIN! part 3

posted by Seanthehedgehog

We were in our disguises, and got out of the apartment. We had a plan to sneak into Canterlot, take over the train station, and get back to Ponyville. From there we would drop off Applebloom and her Những người bạn at sugarcube corner. Rarity and Fluttershy would watch them, while the rest of us would sneak into the enemy base, find info on any attacks, and báo cáo it to Princess Celestia once we got it. "Ok everyone on the car." I ordered. Soon Our team was on the car, with me and cầu vồng Dash in it, Spike somehow got in the trunk. "You know what you're doing?" Fluttershy asked. I đã đưa ý kiến yes and used...