OK so I've had good luck with my other two các bài viết and I thought I'd give out a few thêm and see if I get the same response. I tình yêu everyone who đã bình luận positively on my các bài viết u guys rock!! so dont get bored with me and here are a couple more. (I plan to write them till aug 1 so...here)
Tanya: Ah, Edward. I've missed you.
Edward and I raced across the Nữ hoàng băng giá tundra, đài nguyên of Alaska. We had a few thêm miles before we would be in Denali.
I had been changed, and I had felt the thirst. I had been hideously afraid of harming my Những người bạn so I had suggested that we go to Denali. Edward had agreed.
I could hear the other ma cà rồng now; we were getting close.
Then I saw the clan of eight hoặc so vampires.
I was a little surprised. I knew that they were like the Cullens, but I had expected them to live in teepees hoặc something. What I saw was really a couple of log cabins.
We began to slow down. A dâu, dâu tây blonde snapped her head up as she heard our approach. She ran out to meet us.
Edward took my hand firmly. "Hello, Tanya," he greeted her politely.
I gulped.
Tanya. My rival. When Edward had gone to Denali the first few weeks I had lived in Forks, Tanya had taken a great notice of him. Edward showed no preference, but still, I worried. Now that I was immortal, too, the competition wasn't so great but Tanya was still beautiful. Almost a một giây Rosalie.
"Ah, Edward," Tanya said. "I've missed you. Who's this?" she glanced at me and I swear I saw her golden eyes harden.
"This is my wife, Bella," he said.
"Wife," Tanya repeated, somewhat difficultly, I imagined. "Well then, things have changed. Why don't bạn come in, and we'll talk." She stalked away and Edward smirked at me. I smiled, relieved now, and we followed Tanya into her house.
Emmett: Oooo. Scary.
"I'm bored," Emmett annonced. Edward and I nodded.
The rest of the Cullens were gone for a hunting trip. Emmett hadn't needed to; his eyes were a light vàng when they left.
It was strange, to be ma cà rồng and yet act like normal teenagers enduring summer bordom. I had watched Emmett pin Edward and then vise versa in a wrestling match. Edward and I had gone through most of his CD's. I had watched Emmett, my new and yêu thích big brother, lift cars for fun. And now we were bored.
Inspiration hit me. "Hey Emmett," I suggested. "How about an arm-wrestling match?"
Edward flashed a wide grin. Emmett eyed me in disbelief.
"You're kidding," he finally said.
I grinned. "Nope,"
Emmett shrugged, getting off the couch. "Okay, then," he said, flexing his muscles. "Just don't be too sad when I beat you, okay?"
I flexed my muscles too. They weren't nearly as impressive as Emmett's.
"Oooo. Scary," Emmett replied.
"You're kidding," he repeated a couple phút later. Edward hooted with laughter. I was pretty pleased with myself, but I just shrugged.
I had won.
Bella: Jasper? What do ma cà rồng do for bachelor parties? bạn aren't taking him to a strip club, are you?
"Oh my gosh, the bachelorette party!" Alice realized. "What do bạn want to do?" she looked at me eagerly. I opened my mouth. "And don't tell me bạn want to stay in Washington," Alice threatened, looking menacing.
I laughed. "I'm not crazy enough to do that," I told her. "Staying in Washington, ugh!" Alice grinned. "That's the spirit. So what?"
I thought about it. "I don't know, Alice," I finally told her. "What would bạn like me to do?" Alice looked at me with disgust. "Can't even plan her own bachelorette party.." she muttered. "Okay...we're going to L.A. We'll get manicures and peticures, go shopping, get lunch at a cafe...we'll take my Porsche, of course. I don't drive it nearly enough. Hm..." she looked at me, worried that I was going to protest. "Sound okay?" she asked. "Yes," I said. Maybe it would be fun. "Wait...where is Edward going for his bachelor party?" I wondered. "I don't know," Alice said. "Jasper's planning it for him. He hasn't made a descision yet." "So...L.A," Alice decided. "Sounds perfect, don't bạn think?" "Sounds, interresting," I said. She sighed. "Jasper, come here!" she ordered.
Jasper was suddenly beside me. "Have bạn decided on Edward yet?" she demanded. Jasper chuckled. "Impatient. No, not yet." "When?" Alice wailed. "Why do bạn need to know so soon?" Jasper wondered. "I want this whole thing to be perfect," Alice told him. "You need to get back in a three ngày minimum so we can go get tuxes for bạn guys." Jasper kissed her. A wave of calm washed over me, though I wasn't the one stressed out. "Don't worry," he said. "I'll keep thinking."
"Jasper?" I asked warily. "What do ma cà rồng do for bachelor parties? bạn aren't taking him to a strip club, are you?"
Jasper laughed. "No, definetly not. bởi the way, it's just like a human bachelor party. We'll go look at some cars."
"No!" Alice screeched.
He laughed. "Kidding. I'll get back to you." he kissed her again before fleeing.
Rosalie: Over my pile of ashes.
"Do bạn want to see your car?" Edward asked eagerly as we stepped out of his Volvo. We had just taken my 'before' car back to the car shop.
I took a deep breath. "Sure."
Edward took my hand and loped gracefully toward the nhà để xe and skidded to a stop in front of the sheet.
I tried to swollow. "Um...Edward?"
"Yes?"
"It's not too fancy is it?"
He laughed. "No. I think you'll like it, actually..." He ripped off the sheet. "Ta-da!!"
I gawked at the familiar looking vehicle.
"My truck!!!" I screeched. I ran and stroked the side of it.
Edward seemed pleased bởi my response. "Yes," he said. "I had Rosalie put in a new engine, so it should go at least one-hundred-and-twently miles an hour." He sighed. "Some things bạn can't fix completely."
Rosalie was tuning Jasper's motorcycle in the other garage. "Over my pile of ashes I didn't!" we heard her snap.
Edward chuckled. "She did, actually. I would have done it myself, but only Rosalie could make it worth something."
"Thanks, Rosalie!" I called. No answer.
"Alice: No one will dare to call bạn plain when I'm through with you.
Bella: Only because they're afraid you'll suck their blood.
It was finally happening. I was getting married. Today.
I was in Alice's bathroom surrounded bởi creams and powders and other types of makeup. There were also four hairdryers and various brushes. Alice's entire jewelry collection was spilled out, too. Whatever Alice was going to do to me, I was sure it would be horrible.
She started bởi washing my hair in the sink and putting it in curlers to dry. Then she applied some expensive powder to my face.
"Alice," I sighed after she had put on mascara, eyeliner, eyeshadow, and even a little lipstick. "Stop. I'm too plain. This is just a waste of time."
Alice glared at me. "What's the problem? No one will dare to call bạn plain when I'm through with you."
"Only because they're afraid you'll suck their blood!" I shot back.
"What's the problem?" she repeated, gently.
The problem? I was getting married in four inch high heels in a few hours to my true tình yêu without my best man. I would be wearing a very long dress that I would likely trip over. Plus I was overly anxious to become a vampire. I felt so ugly in their presense.
"Nervous," I answered her. And it wasn't a lie. My stomach was doing little flips at the thought of walking down the deadly wide aisle...
Three thêm hours.
Tanya: Ah, Edward. I've missed you.
Edward and I raced across the Nữ hoàng băng giá tundra, đài nguyên of Alaska. We had a few thêm miles before we would be in Denali.
I had been changed, and I had felt the thirst. I had been hideously afraid of harming my Những người bạn so I had suggested that we go to Denali. Edward had agreed.
I could hear the other ma cà rồng now; we were getting close.
Then I saw the clan of eight hoặc so vampires.
I was a little surprised. I knew that they were like the Cullens, but I had expected them to live in teepees hoặc something. What I saw was really a couple of log cabins.
We began to slow down. A dâu, dâu tây blonde snapped her head up as she heard our approach. She ran out to meet us.
Edward took my hand firmly. "Hello, Tanya," he greeted her politely.
I gulped.
Tanya. My rival. When Edward had gone to Denali the first few weeks I had lived in Forks, Tanya had taken a great notice of him. Edward showed no preference, but still, I worried. Now that I was immortal, too, the competition wasn't so great but Tanya was still beautiful. Almost a một giây Rosalie.
"Ah, Edward," Tanya said. "I've missed you. Who's this?" she glanced at me and I swear I saw her golden eyes harden.
"This is my wife, Bella," he said.
"Wife," Tanya repeated, somewhat difficultly, I imagined. "Well then, things have changed. Why don't bạn come in, and we'll talk." She stalked away and Edward smirked at me. I smiled, relieved now, and we followed Tanya into her house.
Emmett: Oooo. Scary.
"I'm bored," Emmett annonced. Edward and I nodded.
The rest of the Cullens were gone for a hunting trip. Emmett hadn't needed to; his eyes were a light vàng when they left.
It was strange, to be ma cà rồng and yet act like normal teenagers enduring summer bordom. I had watched Emmett pin Edward and then vise versa in a wrestling match. Edward and I had gone through most of his CD's. I had watched Emmett, my new and yêu thích big brother, lift cars for fun. And now we were bored.
Inspiration hit me. "Hey Emmett," I suggested. "How about an arm-wrestling match?"
Edward flashed a wide grin. Emmett eyed me in disbelief.
"You're kidding," he finally said.
I grinned. "Nope,"
Emmett shrugged, getting off the couch. "Okay, then," he said, flexing his muscles. "Just don't be too sad when I beat you, okay?"
I flexed my muscles too. They weren't nearly as impressive as Emmett's.
"Oooo. Scary," Emmett replied.
"You're kidding," he repeated a couple phút later. Edward hooted with laughter. I was pretty pleased with myself, but I just shrugged.
I had won.
Bella: Jasper? What do ma cà rồng do for bachelor parties? bạn aren't taking him to a strip club, are you?
"Oh my gosh, the bachelorette party!" Alice realized. "What do bạn want to do?" she looked at me eagerly. I opened my mouth. "And don't tell me bạn want to stay in Washington," Alice threatened, looking menacing.
I laughed. "I'm not crazy enough to do that," I told her. "Staying in Washington, ugh!" Alice grinned. "That's the spirit. So what?"
I thought about it. "I don't know, Alice," I finally told her. "What would bạn like me to do?" Alice looked at me with disgust. "Can't even plan her own bachelorette party.." she muttered. "Okay...we're going to L.A. We'll get manicures and peticures, go shopping, get lunch at a cafe...we'll take my Porsche, of course. I don't drive it nearly enough. Hm..." she looked at me, worried that I was going to protest. "Sound okay?" she asked. "Yes," I said. Maybe it would be fun. "Wait...where is Edward going for his bachelor party?" I wondered. "I don't know," Alice said. "Jasper's planning it for him. He hasn't made a descision yet." "So...L.A," Alice decided. "Sounds perfect, don't bạn think?" "Sounds, interresting," I said. She sighed. "Jasper, come here!" she ordered.
Jasper was suddenly beside me. "Have bạn decided on Edward yet?" she demanded. Jasper chuckled. "Impatient. No, not yet." "When?" Alice wailed. "Why do bạn need to know so soon?" Jasper wondered. "I want this whole thing to be perfect," Alice told him. "You need to get back in a three ngày minimum so we can go get tuxes for bạn guys." Jasper kissed her. A wave of calm washed over me, though I wasn't the one stressed out. "Don't worry," he said. "I'll keep thinking."
"Jasper?" I asked warily. "What do ma cà rồng do for bachelor parties? bạn aren't taking him to a strip club, are you?"
Jasper laughed. "No, definetly not. bởi the way, it's just like a human bachelor party. We'll go look at some cars."
"No!" Alice screeched.
He laughed. "Kidding. I'll get back to you." he kissed her again before fleeing.
Rosalie: Over my pile of ashes.
"Do bạn want to see your car?" Edward asked eagerly as we stepped out of his Volvo. We had just taken my 'before' car back to the car shop.
I took a deep breath. "Sure."
Edward took my hand and loped gracefully toward the nhà để xe and skidded to a stop in front of the sheet.
I tried to swollow. "Um...Edward?"
"Yes?"
"It's not too fancy is it?"
He laughed. "No. I think you'll like it, actually..." He ripped off the sheet. "Ta-da!!"
I gawked at the familiar looking vehicle.
"My truck!!!" I screeched. I ran and stroked the side of it.
Edward seemed pleased bởi my response. "Yes," he said. "I had Rosalie put in a new engine, so it should go at least one-hundred-and-twently miles an hour." He sighed. "Some things bạn can't fix completely."
Rosalie was tuning Jasper's motorcycle in the other garage. "Over my pile of ashes I didn't!" we heard her snap.
Edward chuckled. "She did, actually. I would have done it myself, but only Rosalie could make it worth something."
"Thanks, Rosalie!" I called. No answer.
"Alice: No one will dare to call bạn plain when I'm through with you.
Bella: Only because they're afraid you'll suck their blood.
It was finally happening. I was getting married. Today.
I was in Alice's bathroom surrounded bởi creams and powders and other types of makeup. There were also four hairdryers and various brushes. Alice's entire jewelry collection was spilled out, too. Whatever Alice was going to do to me, I was sure it would be horrible.
She started bởi washing my hair in the sink and putting it in curlers to dry. Then she applied some expensive powder to my face.
"Alice," I sighed after she had put on mascara, eyeliner, eyeshadow, and even a little lipstick. "Stop. I'm too plain. This is just a waste of time."
Alice glared at me. "What's the problem? No one will dare to call bạn plain when I'm through with you."
"Only because they're afraid you'll suck their blood!" I shot back.
"What's the problem?" she repeated, gently.
The problem? I was getting married in four inch high heels in a few hours to my true tình yêu without my best man. I would be wearing a very long dress that I would likely trip over. Plus I was overly anxious to become a vampire. I felt so ugly in their presense.
"Nervous," I answered her. And it wasn't a lie. My stomach was doing little flips at the thought of walking down the deadly wide aisle...
Three thêm hours.
the one thing that i think about the most when i see my daughter's face is how lucky i am to have her as my daughter, seeing her face makes me see the sun in the sky for the first time in my whole life.
watching her grow up was the most wonderful sight that i could ever imagine, she is the gift that i've wanted ever since i was her age, her smile has a radiance that no-other child can ever replace, if some-thing happended to her i don't know what i would do with-out my daugther renesmee carlie cullen, she is the reason why i;m nghề viết văn this today
Renemee baby i tình yêu you, and bạn remember that i will always will tình yêu bạn and your father feels the same way, please read this entry and tell me what bạn think about it
tình yêu your mother
isabella marie thiên nga cullen
watching her grow up was the most wonderful sight that i could ever imagine, she is the gift that i've wanted ever since i was her age, her smile has a radiance that no-other child can ever replace, if some-thing happended to her i don't know what i would do with-out my daugther renesmee carlie cullen, she is the reason why i;m nghề viết văn this today
Renemee baby i tình yêu you, and bạn remember that i will always will tình yêu bạn and your father feels the same way, please read this entry and tell me what bạn think about it
tình yêu your mother
isabella marie thiên nga cullen
I know Edward always đã đưa ý kiến Bella was beautiful but she seems kind of boring. She always worries about other people, but she never thinks of herself. In the book [especially when she's human] she thinks all these stupid thoughts and I'm glad Edward didn't hear what she was thinking because I would be so embarrassed if I was her.
I tình yêu Alice. She is so cute and she has a great sense of style. I'm so glad she got Jasper. Even though her closet is a bit disproportional I wouldn't mind having it once in a while.(:
Rosalie is cool. I mean she was mean but after Nessie was born she got so much nicer. I can tell that she truly loves Nessie.
I've được trao bạn my opinion but what's your's?.
Please bình luận
I tình yêu Alice. She is so cute and she has a great sense of style. I'm so glad she got Jasper. Even though her closet is a bit disproportional I wouldn't mind having it once in a while.(:
Rosalie is cool. I mean she was mean but after Nessie was born she got so much nicer. I can tell that she truly loves Nessie.
I've được trao bạn my opinion but what's your's?.
Please bình luận
Breaking Dawn part 1 was so good, I loved it. The diễn xuất was great and Bella looked so beautiful at their wedding. It was action filled and also drama filled, I couldn't keep my eyes off the screen. I loved how they almost đã đưa ý kiến everything they say in the book, and I tình yêu how they hiển thị everything that happened with Jacob and Leah. They also added and action part where Sam's pack attacks Emmet, Esme, Carlisle, Alice, and Jasper while they are leaving to hunt(not that i'm saying I wanted them to die). I also loved the birth of Renessme, it showed detail and everything that happened in the book. Renessme looked just as Stephenie Meyer described her. I like how the hiển thị the transformation of Bella becoming a vampire too. The one thing I didn't like was how they ended the movie, they showed Bella opening her eyes as a vampire, which automatically made me want more.
