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its my first story post and no ones read it yet im desperate please
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Work in progress. Constructive criticism and suggestions welcome. This is the story of Zero, a humanoid bio-weapon who escaped from what would have become a life of slavery, and joined normal society.
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if bạn want me to continue bình luận saying so if not then also bình luận if bạn want to know thesong there.
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It's a story I wrote, and I need constructive critism.
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fictional.this is a story told bởi shinigami.she's main lead in my manga Geetto.if bạn don't like don't rant about it.just give helpful criticism.
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đã đệ trình
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r260897
hơn một năm qua
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link xin chào guys, I wrote this for a contest & I would tình yêu your opinion on it! I do suggest đọc it from the link (above); because it's thêm properly presented :)
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