Can anyone tell me if I should continue this?

I think your character has an interesting situation. The tiếp theo portion of Ashley returning would be about 1935. So if bạn do continue (as long as bạn manage to stay appropriate to the time period), it will be fine. I don't know much about that era and can't offer much about it though. It's completely up to bạn if you'd like to continue. No one should tell bạn to stop nghề viết văn something because nghề viết văn is your expression. Whether hoặc not someone likes it, shouldn't matter as long as bạn like it. It's the third time you've rewriten it? Sometimes it's best to leave something as it is and stop changing it.
Good luck!

I just read the prolouge and the first chapter,
and I think it's interesting so far. I'm curious
to learn thêm about cá chó, đánh cá, pike though. I think bạn should definatly continue writing, but it's your choice.

i've read chapter one. bạn had a great start. i think u should continue it :))