Story Idea.

I got an idea for a story but I don't know whether it would be any good. It's about a little girl (6 years old), her brother (15, and their nextdoor neighbor (10). They're all on their way to the pool when..(pause for dramatic effect)..they get kidnaped. They have to get back to their family but they get sent to another state (they live in Illinios they get sent to Minnesota). So whatdoya think??? BE HONEST!