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I'm nghề viết văn a fanfic called "Almost Alice" about Alice, Jacob, Jasper, and Bella, and I'd really like it if you'd review. If bạn like it, I can put up a link to the story (which is much farther along than the first chapter, I can tell bạn that). And if you're gonna be mean about it, don't bother commenting. Thanks!
-Alice <3

Almost Alice
Chapter One: Smoke


“I win,” Alice đã đưa ý kiến smugly, holding out her hand towards Edward. “Again.”

Edward rolled his eyes as he searches his backpack for Alice’s “prize.” I smiled. She was getting to be exactly like Jasper, always betting on something....

Mysterious love

-chapter one-



It was my first ngày of 11th grade.My alarm clock went off I stayed in giường for a little while I didnt want too get up.But after a miniute hoặc two I just got up.I went too my closet and pick out some clothes really it was just what I seen first.After I dressed my self I went down stairs too see my father in the phòng bếp, nhà bếp makeing coffee.Soon he would be on his way too work, just like every day.My father is a lawyer for the town of Bartonville,Arkansas. Every body liked him thoughs who didnt did not know him very well,but he is very queit kinda like me.Him and my mother...

bella's pov

edward took my hand and we walk toward my parents

when my mother look at me her eyes got wider and my dad look surprized
edward was still holding my hand i was getting thêm nervous with each step a took foward

"Hello mother , father" my mother nodded and also my father
after a một phút of silence
then my father look at edward
"Are bạn carlisle younger brother Edward??" my dad ask and look at me when he đã đưa ý kiến his name

probably remembering when i interrupt him and đã đưa ý kiến edwards name i look at edward and he was repressing a smile probably someone was thinking something funny
my edward was...

bella's pov

edward sigh heavily took my hands between his and started to talk

"it all started one ngày at the hospital a couple months ago.." he đã đưa ý kiến slowly he look at my face my face was curious and interest in hearing thêm
he touch my cheek and continue thêm quickly
"so i lied at the party when i told bạn i didn't knew bạn "

" I was workin in the hospital as a helper of my brother i was organizing some papers when i heard that all of the young male thoughts turn excited and extreamly happy"

wait the thoughts he heard????
but i didn't đã đưa ý kiến anything i thought that maybe if i interrupted he wouldn't...

The car is warm and as we drive off the reservation, my mind can only think of my dreams. They were so real so life like. They felt like the were really happening . My future couldn't already be set bởi my nightmares, could it?

"What are bạn thinking about?" Jacob ask's me, never removing his eyes from the road. He is so good at setting the mood.

"Life, in general." I answer, not wanting him to worry. His face looks emotionless.

"I'm a good listener." he turns to me and smiles. "Really whats up?" He ask stoping the car.

"I'm just worried thats all."

"Do bạn want to go se Carlisle?" His expression...

I watched my Aunt pack my bag. She barley told me that I was going to stay there a whole year. " Do bạn want to take this Ipod" she asked. I didn't say anything. " bạn know this silence treament won't do bạn any good" She said. "Ok grab your backpack and let's go" she whispered. I followed her to the car. We arrived at the airport and she hugged me and cried." Be good and listen. The sonner bạn start to talk the sonner bạn get to come home. I didn't want to come trang chủ and pass bởi the empty lot that once held my home. "Bye. tình yêu you. bạn better leave the plane to Arizona is about to leave" she...

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In days gone by, there once was a land where the moss and vines grew thick, and the trees hid the forest floor from the sunlight. This was a place where gray-billowed clouds covered the sky, sucking the shadows from the Earth and spewing them back as fog and rain.

It was the perfect...

Chapter 7

*Edward’s pov*

I heard a knock from the door.
“Can I come in?” Alice asked.
I took a deep breath.
“Sure. “ I said.
Alice opened the door. Her face was expressionless. She sat beside me.
“How are you?” she asked.
“Not so good, “I whispered.
“I’m sorry.” She said, sadly.
“I told you, bạn don’t have to blame yourself. It’s not your fault.” I told her.
“It’s not yours, either.” She said
“Yes. it is.” I muttered.
“So are bạn going to tell me what happened? hoặc I’m going to guess?” she asked.
“Do bạn know Ashley Walker?” I asked her.
“Nope.”
“Well,...

hope bạn like it if it is looking to much like twilight sorry a twist is coming promise

his car wasnt that fancy like the cars i was used to seeing hoặc driving but it was clean and new.and he look great driving it...i ask one of the các câu hỏi to distract me
"so do bạn have any family how old bạn really are do bạn have any powers why did bạn chose to live in here?" ok i ask thêm than one question
he smile at me "calmly i will answer all your câu hỏi "he smile and started
"i am 25 years live old but my growing stop i think bạn could say 18 hoặc 19 years old never a way to be sure right?" he look at...