I know everybody wants they're bài viết on What's Hot on the first page hoặc on hàng đầu, đầu trang Rated. So do I. my first article, Who Is Better, was on hàng đầu, đầu trang Rated for a couple of weeks once. I was really happy. Then it got moved to What's Hot on page 7. I'm fine with that, but I kind of miss it being on hàng đầu, đầu trang Rated. I'm still trying to get it on there still though. But am I right everybody wants there bài viết to soon be on one of those pages. That is why I am nghề viết văn this article. I want everybody who reads this to go to the các bình luận area of this bài viết and put what bạn always want in a Twilight article. So not only me, but everybody else can get Lời khuyên on what to put on their tiếp theo article.
I thought I'd post this poem and try to get constructive feedback ;)
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To Know Her
She is who I see and all that I see.
Every một phút with her is a một phút to know her.
What does she like? What makes her angry?
What makes her laugh like no other?
I watch her di chuyển and learn her moods.
Her needs, I read like a book unbound.
I study her eyes as they speak to me
When words aren’t enough, when they can’t be found.
Her joy is mine, her emotions di chuyển me.
To be what she wants is no arduous task.
To protect her and know her – that’s what I do
So I find it amusing when she would ask:
“How is it that bạn know me so well?
Sometimes it seems bạn can read my mind.”
“Nah,” I smile. “I just pay attention.”
I become what she wants and needs, bởi design.
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To Know Her
She is who I see and all that I see.
Every một phút with her is a một phút to know her.
What does she like? What makes her angry?
What makes her laugh like no other?
I watch her di chuyển and learn her moods.
Her needs, I read like a book unbound.
I study her eyes as they speak to me
When words aren’t enough, when they can’t be found.
Her joy is mine, her emotions di chuyển me.
To be what she wants is no arduous task.
To protect her and know her – that’s what I do
So I find it amusing when she would ask:
“How is it that bạn know me so well?
Sometimes it seems bạn can read my mind.”
“Nah,” I smile. “I just pay attention.”
I become what she wants and needs, bởi design.