Twilight

Disclaimer: These are my views, please don't be offended

I don't know about everyone, but TOO many people type using net-speak and horrid spelling, grammar, and capitalization. Typos are perfectly fine, but when someone types something that looks like this:

i lyk ttly luv edward he is so s3xy jacob is a hawttie 2

It completely irritates me.

Those few lines have many things wrong with it:

1) Lack of capitalization and punctuation.

Without proper capitalization, the sentences look very amateur. We don't know when a new sentence starts, and it shows lack of respect (excuse me for sounding cheesy) towards...

this is the sequel to our story, Maximum Twilight. I like it, and i think u will too:)





Maximum Twilight: Part Two
By: Fast Farms

Fang woke up to a bright blue sky, and something hard hitting his head. Ow, he thought rubbing the spot where a small pinecone had hit him. He looked around. Gazzy was grinning and when he spotted Fang's gaze on him, he quickly looked away. Fang sighed and jumped down from the huge cây he had perched on for the night. The rest of the flock was up and eating a loaf of French bánh mỳ, bánh mì that they had stolen the trước đó night. They were in France, and had been for a few weeks...