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“Ella you’re amazing.” Renesmee shouted as me and my horse Faith crossed our final jump and stopped in front of her. I dismounted patting Faith’s nose and Nessie hugged her. “You’re going to thrash everyone in your competition in two weeks time.” “Thanks.” I murmured thinking about the trip up I made on the first jump. If I want to qualify I can’t be doing that anymore. Nessie’s phone started hát her favourite song startling Flo.
“Whoa easy.” I đã đưa ý kiến taking firmer hold of the reins and sliding my hand down her silky neck.
“Sorry Ella.” Nessie apologised flipping open her phone, looking at the caller ID before holding it to her ear. “Yes dad?”
I heard voices and Renesmee kept nodding her head. Finally she smiled, almost laughing to herself. “Ok I’ll be trang chủ in twenty minutes.......ok ten.” She đã đưa ý kiến hanging up. I raised an eyebrow at her removing my boots to let my feet have some fresh air.
“Do bạn want to come over tomorrow? Mum and Dad feel guilty because I’m always here and you’re rarely ever at ours.” Rarely was the wrong word to use. I had never been to Renesmee’s. She always made excuses about it but as long as we were together I didn’t mind. We have been best Những người bạn for five years now. Everyone rejected Renesmee because they thought she was weird and prettier than them. I didn’t mind that. So she had stuck with me.
“Yeah sure, but I have to come back and feed Faith first I can’t let her starve.” Nessie laughed linking her arm through mine. “Do bạn have to leave now?” I asked as we started to make our way back to my house. I untacked and locked Faith in her paddock, before turning back to Renesmee, waiting for her answer. “Yeah. But you’ll come round after school tomorrow right?” I nodded and a smile spread across her abnormally pale face. Of course I was use to her paleness bởi now, I wondered if the rest of her family were like it. “Ok so I’ll see bạn tomorrow.” She đã đưa ý kiến hugging me and turning away. “Bye.” I called after her.
“Oh yeah Ella?” Nessie asked.
“Yeah?”
“What do bạn want for your birthday tiếp theo week?” I thought for a second.
“I don’t really know.” Even though she was quite far away from me I could see her rolling her eyes at me.
“WELL THAT’S NOT VERY HELPFUL.” She called laughing.
I sighed turning back around. Renesmee always went overboard on my birthday presents, especially last năm for my fifteenth. She had bought us both these really expensive buổi hòa nhạc tickets followed bởi hiring out the cinema on the release ngày of our favourite movie. I can’t even begin to imagine how much it must of cost.
I trudged home, slipping into my dressing áo choàng and slippers and began to cook tea.
“Hey sweet heart.” Mum called out peeking her head around the door.
“Hey Mum.” I called back.
“What are bạn cooking?” She asked. I thought for a second.
“Is chicken ok?”
“That would be great.” Sometimes I felt like I bought up myself, and bought up my parents too.
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“Ella you’re amazing.” Renesmee shouted as me and my horse Faith crossed our final jump and stopped in front of her. I dismounted patting Faith’s nose and Nessie hugged her. “You’re going to thrash everyone in your competition in two weeks time.” “Thanks.” I murmured thinking about the trip up I made on the first jump. If I want to qualify I can’t be doing that anymore. Nessie’s phone started hát her favourite song startling Flo.
“Whoa easy.” I đã đưa ý kiến taking firmer hold of the reins and sliding my hand down her silky neck.
“Sorry Ella.” Nessie apologised flipping open her phone, looking at the caller ID before holding it to her ear. “Yes dad?”
I heard voices and Renesmee kept nodding her head. Finally she smiled, almost laughing to herself. “Ok I’ll be trang chủ in twenty minutes.......ok ten.” She đã đưa ý kiến hanging up. I raised an eyebrow at her removing my boots to let my feet have some fresh air.
“Do bạn want to come over tomorrow? Mum and Dad feel guilty because I’m always here and you’re rarely ever at ours.” Rarely was the wrong word to use. I had never been to Renesmee’s. She always made excuses about it but as long as we were together I didn’t mind. We have been best Những người bạn for five years now. Everyone rejected Renesmee because they thought she was weird and prettier than them. I didn’t mind that. So she had stuck with me.
“Yeah sure, but I have to come back and feed Faith first I can’t let her starve.” Nessie laughed linking her arm through mine. “Do bạn have to leave now?” I asked as we started to make our way back to my house. I untacked and locked Faith in her paddock, before turning back to Renesmee, waiting for her answer. “Yeah. But you’ll come round after school tomorrow right?” I nodded and a smile spread across her abnormally pale face. Of course I was use to her paleness bởi now, I wondered if the rest of her family were like it. “Ok so I’ll see bạn tomorrow.” She đã đưa ý kiến hugging me and turning away. “Bye.” I called after her.
“Oh yeah Ella?” Nessie asked.
“Yeah?”
“What do bạn want for your birthday tiếp theo week?” I thought for a second.
“I don’t really know.” Even though she was quite far away from me I could see her rolling her eyes at me.
“WELL THAT’S NOT VERY HELPFUL.” She called laughing.
I sighed turning back around. Renesmee always went overboard on my birthday presents, especially last năm for my fifteenth. She had bought us both these really expensive buổi hòa nhạc tickets followed bởi hiring out the cinema on the release ngày of our favourite movie. I can’t even begin to imagine how much it must of cost.
I trudged home, slipping into my dressing áo choàng and slippers and began to cook tea.
“Hey sweet heart.” Mum called out peeking her head around the door.
“Hey Mum.” I called back.
“What are bạn cooking?” She asked. I thought for a second.
“Is chicken ok?”
“That would be great.” Sometimes I felt like I bought up myself, and bought up my parents too.
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ok so i am going to come out with this as i think it i tình yêu twilight it is brill but i hate edward i think he is to controling over bella and he doesn't want her to go and see jacob because jacob is way better looking than he is and he is afrad that he will get better and another thing is why do people think that he is good looking i think he is really ugly i can't see why people really fancy him i luv taylor launter and i am 100% a team jacob because at the end of the ngày jacob is just way better than edward and that is the end of it!
how i finished the beginning of this sentance:
jacob black:
sucks
has rabies
is mental
is on steroids
tried to steal bella
failed at stealing bella
hates edward
is stupid
is retarded
couldn't be a human
is a dog
is sooooooooooooooooo-ooooooooooo-oooooooo-ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
retarded i can't even say how stupid he is and he should never ngày renesmee and is a big fat lozer who wont ever ngày a cool girl and to prove it he forced bella to Kiss him. wat a lozer...:)
i hate jacob
team edward... <3
jacob black:
sucks
has rabies
is mental
is on steroids
tried to steal bella
failed at stealing bella
hates edward
is stupid
is retarded
couldn't be a human
is a dog
is sooooooooooooooooo-ooooooooooo-oooooooo-ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
retarded i can't even say how stupid he is and he should never ngày renesmee and is a big fat lozer who wont ever ngày a cool girl and to prove it he forced bella to Kiss him. wat a lozer...:)
i hate jacob
team edward... <3
10 Ways to Annoy Carlisle Cullen
10. Tell him only to address bạn in a cute English accent.
9. Call him Carlisle, but be sure to pronounce the “s”. When he corrects you, give him a weird look and tell him the “q” is silent.
8. Ask if blondes really do have thêm fun.
7. Inquire as to what he actually does on his night shift on the hospital, with all the pretty nurses in the ER.
6. Instead of telling him to “get lost” in an argument, tell him to swim to France.
5. When he annoys you, respond with “times have changed, old man”.
4. Ask what type of superhuman power compassion is – what does he do in a fight? tình yêu thy enemy to death?
3. Leap out from behind the bàn in his study when he isn’t expecting it and spray him with Holy Water.
2. Call him McSteamy hoặc McDreamy.
And the Number One way to annoy Carlisle Cullen?
1. Run around the Emergency Room screaming “I’ve been bitten! I’ve been bitten!”
10. Tell him only to address bạn in a cute English accent.
9. Call him Carlisle, but be sure to pronounce the “s”. When he corrects you, give him a weird look and tell him the “q” is silent.
8. Ask if blondes really do have thêm fun.
7. Inquire as to what he actually does on his night shift on the hospital, with all the pretty nurses in the ER.
6. Instead of telling him to “get lost” in an argument, tell him to swim to France.
5. When he annoys you, respond with “times have changed, old man”.
4. Ask what type of superhuman power compassion is – what does he do in a fight? tình yêu thy enemy to death?
3. Leap out from behind the bàn in his study when he isn’t expecting it and spray him with Holy Water.
2. Call him McSteamy hoặc McDreamy.
And the Number One way to annoy Carlisle Cullen?
1. Run around the Emergency Room screaming “I’ve been bitten! I’ve been bitten!”
Grade: A+
The “Twilight” sourpuss looked much less awkward than usual in a stunning strapless midnight blue Monique Lhuillier gown. Kristen topped off her look with a classy diamond bracelet bởi H. Stern.
Anna Kendrick
Grade: B+
The Best Supporting Actress nominee originally selected a blue dress for her Oscars debut, but had a change of tim, trái tim and opted to wear an Elie Saab Couture off-the-shoulder blush áo choàng instead. tình yêu the dress, but we’re not too sure about the chunky shoes!
Taylor Lautner
Grade: A-
The “Twilight” heartthrob popped his signature lopsided pose in a Dolce & Gabbana ensemble.