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chapter five: Heavenly's POV
"What happened?" asked Jake after he got in the car and we started driving.
"uhh, no one got hurt. i'm happy, i geuss. we just talked and i don't think we'll be talking to the Cullens for a while, but i got you." he đã đưa ý kiến smiling the whole time.
i was confused. that was weird for what i had seen earlier.
"you know that really scared me Jacob." i đã đưa ý kiến almost mad that he had put me through that.
"i'm sorry babe. but um... bạn start school on the reserve tomorrow."
"oh yeah, i'm excited i geuss."
"i think your lieing" he said
"i am." i đã đưa ý kiến back.
"well i'll pick bạn up tomorrow morning and hiển thị bạn around."
"ok!" i answered to fast.
we were at my house too soon.
"well i'll see bạn tomorrow and you'll explain to me what actually happened tonight." i đã đưa ý kiến almost motherly.
"sure, sure. Heavenly,... i tình yêu you." he đã đưa ý kiến to me as if we'd been saying that normally, and it felt like we did.
"I tình yêu bạn too Jake." i đã đưa ý kiến and then ran inside, it was raining again.
i walked in and my mom had fallen asleep on the đi văng with her boyfriend
(since yesterday she had fallen in tình yêu with this bum.)
the first thing i did was change into my flannels and sit on my giường watching t.v. but all i was thinking about was Jake. all of a sudden there was a tapping on my window. i went to check it out, and of course it was Jake. i opened the window.
" what are bạn doing here?!" i excaimed in a whisper.
" i uhh... couldn't sleep, can i come in." he asked while he was holding him self up bởi the ledge on the other side of the window.
" sure" i đã đưa ý kiến and got out of the way for him.
he climbed in unphased, ofcourse. he sat on my bed.
" so,.... bạn have a.... big room. i can't fit in my room." he đã đưa ý kiến changing all subject.
" i'm surprised bạn can fit in this room." i said, climbing on the giường tiếp theo to him.
" aren't bạn tired? hoặc on patrol hoặc something?" i asked
" no embry is covering my shifts,.... i've been babysitting his sister."
we both lied there in my bed, just talking and talking.
" Are bạn tell me about this 'exclusive' highschool that i'm going to tomorrow?" i asked, curious.
" not much to tell, oh umm.... we're wrestling in PE." he smiled
" oh wow. that will be a problem."
" it's ok. i'll help you." he đã đưa ý kiến with a bigger smile. i couldn't help but blush.
this entire time, i didn't notice 'till now that he was shirtless.
" Jake, how come bạn never wear a shirt?" i asked.
" Why? does my being half naked bother you?" he asked. i blushed even harder.
" Jacob, i swear bạn just...."
" What....?" i was sooo flustered.
suddenly he was leaning over me. his warm body against mine.
" I tình yêu bạn Heavenly." he đã đưa ý kiến and then kissed me. violently almost. in about six giây my hands were in his hair and my legs around his waist while he was over me in push up position. i never wanted it to stop. his warm breath in my mouth, i was getting light headed.
he stopped then,
" bạn need sleep, i should go."
" NO!" i practically yelled. he laughed
" i'll be back tomorrow morning." he đã đưa ý kiến and then was gone.
i closed the window, and lie on my bed. i wasn't like i could actually get to sleep, i was up all night thinking about this.
' why does Jake like me of all people?'
' am i dreaming'
' is there anything to worry about at school tomorrow? all the girls there must have loved jake.'
xin chào ... This is my first fanfiction :D so if its not good just give me some constructive critism to make it better. Thanks (:
Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
My awesome 'other':
Edward bạn are delicious,
I bet you'd be nutritious,
I reckon you'd be good to eat,
Quite juicy and quite sweet.
Tastier than any Sô cô la cake,
With hunger, my belly aches,
In a totally non sexual way.
Ha ha ha ha don't take this seriously guys. I'm not weird, honest. But Edward would be good to eat. Not that I would know... Nothing rhymes with delicious, bạn know... Except nutritious... So anyways, that's my latest bout of weirdness, I hope I've met my quota for the day.
Edward bạn are delicious,
I bet you'd be nutritious,
I reckon you'd be good to eat,
Quite juicy and quite sweet.
Tastier than any Sô cô la cake,
With hunger, my belly aches,
In a totally non sexual way.
Ha ha ha ha don't take this seriously guys. I'm not weird, honest. But Edward would be good to eat. Not that I would know... Nothing rhymes with delicious, bạn know... Except nutritious... So anyways, that's my latest bout of weirdness, I hope I've met my quota for the day.
