Okay, I have never done anything like this before, so please do not laugh, but constructive criticism is welcome. Thanks <3
This is my version of Bella's cliff diving experience in New Moon:
Plummeting through the air at a million miles an hour. I was soaring, cutting my path through the low hanging clouds. I was on hàng đầu, đầu trang of the world, I was queen. I could see nothing but blue. Suddenly, the air was gone. I was covered in liquid, submerged in a pool of terror. I would have swum to the surface, I could see it, but my legs were failing me. I was going to die if I just stayed here, frozen. I started having hallucinations, seeing myself break the trance and save myself from certain death. I saw myself rip to the surface and take a deep, satisfying breath. The hallucination was making my throat burn for air, I could see myself alive, breathing in the salty sea air from above in my mind, but I could also see the bottom of the ocean from where I was in reality. I was frozen, locked in place I sank away into the deep depths of the unknown. My vision was hazed and my lungs were on fire. Out of habit I opened my mouth and took what was to be my last breath, in that chẻ, phân chia, split một giây what seemed like all the water in the ocean filled my lungs. I was coughing and spluttering, frantically trying, and failing to displace the water weighing me down. It was no use; I faded into the pitch-black background of existence. All I could think of was him, I was dying and my mind was crammed with memories of our time together. I internally cursed myself for still being unable to think of his name, even in my dying moments I could not forgive him for leaving me. I knew this would kill him, but it was not his fault, he should not be punished for my selfishness. Then it clicked, I had to live, if not for me, then for Edward. There I đã đưa ý kiến it, Edward Cullen! In the chẻ, phân chia, split một giây it took me to realise what I was doing was wrong, I also realised it was too late. I was no longer breathing, I could no longer see anything and I could feel that I was no longer attached to the body I was clinging to. I was dead.
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This is my version of Bella's cliff diving experience in New Moon:
Plummeting through the air at a million miles an hour. I was soaring, cutting my path through the low hanging clouds. I was on hàng đầu, đầu trang of the world, I was queen. I could see nothing but blue. Suddenly, the air was gone. I was covered in liquid, submerged in a pool of terror. I would have swum to the surface, I could see it, but my legs were failing me. I was going to die if I just stayed here, frozen. I started having hallucinations, seeing myself break the trance and save myself from certain death. I saw myself rip to the surface and take a deep, satisfying breath. The hallucination was making my throat burn for air, I could see myself alive, breathing in the salty sea air from above in my mind, but I could also see the bottom of the ocean from where I was in reality. I was frozen, locked in place I sank away into the deep depths of the unknown. My vision was hazed and my lungs were on fire. Out of habit I opened my mouth and took what was to be my last breath, in that chẻ, phân chia, split một giây what seemed like all the water in the ocean filled my lungs. I was coughing and spluttering, frantically trying, and failing to displace the water weighing me down. It was no use; I faded into the pitch-black background of existence. All I could think of was him, I was dying and my mind was crammed with memories of our time together. I internally cursed myself for still being unable to think of his name, even in my dying moments I could not forgive him for leaving me. I knew this would kill him, but it was not his fault, he should not be punished for my selfishness. Then it clicked, I had to live, if not for me, then for Edward. There I đã đưa ý kiến it, Edward Cullen! In the chẻ, phân chia, split một giây it took me to realise what I was doing was wrong, I also realised it was too late. I was no longer breathing, I could no longer see anything and I could feel that I was no longer attached to the body I was clinging to. I was dead.
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Ok guys i correct all my writings i hope bạn can understand them better!! please comment!!!
I didn't know how my life will be as vampire, how things should work with Charlie and Mom, keeping my self away from them is torturing my self.
I felt like I’m trapped without an exit
the only thing that keeps me strong is my family
Edward and Rennesme, now that they are not in thêm danger I feel thêm in peace.
But what will I should tell Charlie when the time to di chuyển arrives?
How will he react to this, He will have too many các câu hỏi and how I suppose to explain it to him? I think that he already knows what we really are, but he is too scared to say it hoặc just think about it.
But what I really know right now is that we are an toàn, két an toàn and will start our Happy Ever After no matter what happen hoặc what people think about us.
I think
I didn't know how my life will be as vampire, how things should work with Charlie and Mom, keeping my self away from them is torturing my self.
I felt like I’m trapped without an exit
the only thing that keeps me strong is my family
Edward and Rennesme, now that they are not in thêm danger I feel thêm in peace.
But what will I should tell Charlie when the time to di chuyển arrives?
How will he react to this, He will have too many các câu hỏi and how I suppose to explain it to him? I think that he already knows what we really are, but he is too scared to say it hoặc just think about it.
But what I really know right now is that we are an toàn, két an toàn and will start our Happy Ever After no matter what happen hoặc what people think about us.
I think
While I was trying to sleep I couldn't help feel excited about Breaking Dawn and remember the theories I read throughout the day. Then, I remembered the thing about dear Alice having Mất tích all memory of being human. This led me to believe (since her lover was a vamp. right? hoặc something like that.) that maybe Alice actualy wanted to become a vampire.
As a penalty hoặc something, she forgot her memory....
So, maybe this will happen to Bella.... But, I doubt it.
It was just a ngẫu nhiên (and possibly a WAY off) theory, but I just wanted to share it with all of you.
^___^'
As a penalty hoặc something, she forgot her memory....
So, maybe this will happen to Bella.... But, I doubt it.
It was just a ngẫu nhiên (and possibly a WAY off) theory, but I just wanted to share it with all of you.
^___^'
