Gary and Sue make too much Stew
Note: I will be naming both Mary-Sues and Gary-stues as Gay-stues for the purpose of saving time, unless I am specifically naming one hoặc the other.
What is a Gary-Stu?
A character who
A. has too much power hoặc skill
B. All the answers
C. Always gets their way
D. Never loses
E. And usually bases on a Cannon-Character with added powers and looks.
F. Is TOO attractive
G. No weakness
Problems?
Each of these has something that can but not necessarily makes the characters stues.
A. POWERS?
When a character has a huge amount whatever types of powers, they can seem annoying and obnoxious. When Rping, if the characters have a power for everything, it is extremely unfair. If one character captures another in something made of fire, then all of the sudden the character has water powers and destroys it, hoặc also has ngọn lửa, chữa cháy powers, it ruins the RP.
If the character just has the power of water in the first place, that does not make them a stu, even if they are hiding it. They can have tons of POWER but they shouldn’t have tons of POWERS. It’s generally okay to have infinite amount of chaos energy, but when someone has also light, darkness, time, space, ect. It goes too far.
B. All the answers
This doesn’t happen all the time mainly, but there are times when for some reason the character knows everything about the other character, but never says why. And why is that? Because the people that are rping that character don’t have an answer and just want their character to look cool.
Having psychic powers to do something like that is alright. It can be annoying, but it’s not a bad thing.
Another way to “have all the answers” is in the following example.
Example: One character gets injured with a special “demon” poison, then no one but their own other character can heal it. If the other people’s characters try it doesn’t work, and usually some voice says something like “ha ha ha. Failures.” Which really bugs me. The characters are there for a reason. LET THEM HELP!
C. Gets their way.
Now I don’t see this all too often in heroes, and only sometimes with girl characters, but with VILLAINS, it, is, so, annoying!
Most of the time this type of thing happens is when out of the blue a ngẫu nhiên villain appears, acts SUPER VAGUE, then tries to kidnap another character. Here’s what’s wrong with what happens next.
1. THE CHARACTERS ARE NEVER ABLE TO STOP THE VILLAIN!
2. THE VILLAIN ACTS SO VAGUE STILL!
3. THE CHARACTER GETTING TAKEN USUALLY SAYS SOMETHING LIKE “I have no choice.” hoặc “I have to. It is my destiny”. There are times when that’s happened and I just make my character say “Well then good for bạn *blasts kidnapped character* I hated bạn anyway”. Again, LET THE CHARACTERS HELP!!!!
D. NEVER LOSING!
Either Villain hoặc hero, Stus never lose. Especially with attacks. Things like *Shoots energy beam at you* are okay, but I see a lot of *kills bạn with energy beam* hoặc *slices off your head and it doesn’t come back* hoặc *beats up your character* and even *your character is impressed* and other ways where they try to control your character. IT’S NOT FUN! bạn do that, and people are going to hate bạn so much. What if the character would get stronger from that energy beam? Nope, can’t happen. “I already đã đưa ý kiến it killed you. bạn can’t say it made bạn stronger”. People control how their characters react and if they get hit. Let them decide. Unless bạn are close enough to go *drills dao, con dao into stomach* then bạn can’t just say *throws dao, con dao into your stomach from a mile away* SO REALISTIC -_-
E. There’s been Dilver, there’s been Bluckles, There’s been Blonic. I wish THOSE were the characters we had. At least they’re actually funny. But no. We get people like Silver #2, who has Shadow’s powers too, but looks JUST like Silver. WHAT A TWIST! Now I’m not hating on Clones of characters. If you’re cloning Sonic, hoặc even doing a Silver #2 deal, it’s not BAD exactly, but it isn’t original. There are some characters that can pull it off like Starlight, but usually it doesn’t end well. If they have the same powers, then don’t make them LOOK like Silver hoặc Shadow hoặc Sonic. Just because you’re fast doesn’t mean the character has to be called “Sonica” hoặc “Sonia”.
F. I personally tình yêu to make attractive characters. And making beautiful girl characters, hoặc hot-dudes isn’t a bad thing when it’s a picture, but when rping it gets annoying when they say *You character blushes*. I personally have in my THIEF RP done something LIKE that.
“If your character is a guy, this would mainly be surprising, seeing how Kenfi is actually quite pretty, and rather non-thief-looking.” Notice I didn’t put “Your character blushes”. I could have, and in this case it wouldn’t be SO bad, but it’s still annoying. The point of this line I used was to emphasize that the surprise of someone finding out that the person trying to kill them turns out to be this beautiful ngẫu nhiên girl. I know what bạn might say. “But bạn đã đưa ý kiến that she’s beautiful. Some people might think she isn’t.” And bạn could say that, but I have actually been told that Kenfi is VERY attractive-looking bởi people, which helped me wager what I would do with this. So in short, bạn can make their eyes sparkle, bạn can make their hair shine, bạn can make their muscles huge, but let the people your rping with decide if they want to blush hoặc not.
G. Characters without weakness
Oh, My, Flagnob. Characters without weaknesses. Picture your character is trying to run away from an evil character. The evil character stu-ports your character to them, so your character tries to attack, but no matter what bạn use the STU just goes “HA HA HA! Pathetic! That can’t hurt me! I’m immortal”, which is really annoying. Also people go “*head grows back*” and such, then says “I’m immortal”. Here’s something bạn might want to know. IF YOU’RE IMMORTAL bạn SHOULDN’T BE ABLE TO GET HURT IN THE FIRST PLACE! I hate immortal characters. I have characters that are like that where they can’t be physically harmed, but even then bạn can make a weakness.
Example: Dimension 4 is a mobian core, so he cannot be physically harmed. He CAN however be drowned, hoặc die in không gian to an extent because he still needs air. Make your characters have a weakness that isn’t just some ngẫu nhiên song only one character knows about and only one character can use (No offense, Sara).
Now there’s one last thing I’d like to mention here. Demon characters. I know I’ve đã đưa ý kiến it before, but SERIOUSLY guys, WHY SO MANY OF THEM!?!?
1. Demons are evil! THEY AREN’T GOOD! THEY CAN’T TURN GOOD! THEY’RE thiên thần TURNED TO THE DEVIL FOR PETE’S SAKE! STOP MAKING THEM GOOD-GUYS UNLESS THEY STOP BEING DEMONS!
2. THERE ARE SO MANY! Now even if I wasn’t upset about demons in general, it would still annoy me that people use so many of them. We’ve got Demon-hybrids, demon-based-species, demon-demons, demon-forms, DEMON SONIC WAS A FAN-BASED SUPER FORM! IT’S NOT REAL! Is that what started all this? Because if it did, that just fits. Use other things. I almost NEVER… I’VE NEVER SEEN AN Angel CHARACTER YET! WHY DO WE HATE PURITY ALL OF THE SUDDEN!?
So that’s my danh sách of stuness. I know a lot of people are going to hate on this and disagree, but I think bạn can at least agree with some of it.
In short, just try to think of things that would make the rping fun, not ways to make your characters cool. Make weak characters once in a while. It’s really fun to be honest. I’ve got normal mobian characters that have NO powers whatsoever, and no special skills, and they have SUPER large rolls in my fan-fics.
Eat Pie and Prosper
Note: I will be naming both Mary-Sues and Gary-stues as Gay-stues for the purpose of saving time, unless I am specifically naming one hoặc the other.
What is a Gary-Stu?
A character who
A. has too much power hoặc skill
B. All the answers
C. Always gets their way
D. Never loses
E. And usually bases on a Cannon-Character with added powers and looks.
F. Is TOO attractive
G. No weakness
Problems?
Each of these has something that can but not necessarily makes the characters stues.
A. POWERS?
When a character has a huge amount whatever types of powers, they can seem annoying and obnoxious. When Rping, if the characters have a power for everything, it is extremely unfair. If one character captures another in something made of fire, then all of the sudden the character has water powers and destroys it, hoặc also has ngọn lửa, chữa cháy powers, it ruins the RP.
If the character just has the power of water in the first place, that does not make them a stu, even if they are hiding it. They can have tons of POWER but they shouldn’t have tons of POWERS. It’s generally okay to have infinite amount of chaos energy, but when someone has also light, darkness, time, space, ect. It goes too far.
B. All the answers
This doesn’t happen all the time mainly, but there are times when for some reason the character knows everything about the other character, but never says why. And why is that? Because the people that are rping that character don’t have an answer and just want their character to look cool.
Having psychic powers to do something like that is alright. It can be annoying, but it’s not a bad thing.
Another way to “have all the answers” is in the following example.
Example: One character gets injured with a special “demon” poison, then no one but their own other character can heal it. If the other people’s characters try it doesn’t work, and usually some voice says something like “ha ha ha. Failures.” Which really bugs me. The characters are there for a reason. LET THEM HELP!
C. Gets their way.
Now I don’t see this all too often in heroes, and only sometimes with girl characters, but with VILLAINS, it, is, so, annoying!
Most of the time this type of thing happens is when out of the blue a ngẫu nhiên villain appears, acts SUPER VAGUE, then tries to kidnap another character. Here’s what’s wrong with what happens next.
1. THE CHARACTERS ARE NEVER ABLE TO STOP THE VILLAIN!
2. THE VILLAIN ACTS SO VAGUE STILL!
3. THE CHARACTER GETTING TAKEN USUALLY SAYS SOMETHING LIKE “I have no choice.” hoặc “I have to. It is my destiny”. There are times when that’s happened and I just make my character say “Well then good for bạn *blasts kidnapped character* I hated bạn anyway”. Again, LET THE CHARACTERS HELP!!!!
D. NEVER LOSING!
Either Villain hoặc hero, Stus never lose. Especially with attacks. Things like *Shoots energy beam at you* are okay, but I see a lot of *kills bạn with energy beam* hoặc *slices off your head and it doesn’t come back* hoặc *beats up your character* and even *your character is impressed* and other ways where they try to control your character. IT’S NOT FUN! bạn do that, and people are going to hate bạn so much. What if the character would get stronger from that energy beam? Nope, can’t happen. “I already đã đưa ý kiến it killed you. bạn can’t say it made bạn stronger”. People control how their characters react and if they get hit. Let them decide. Unless bạn are close enough to go *drills dao, con dao into stomach* then bạn can’t just say *throws dao, con dao into your stomach from a mile away* SO REALISTIC -_-
E. There’s been Dilver, there’s been Bluckles, There’s been Blonic. I wish THOSE were the characters we had. At least they’re actually funny. But no. We get people like Silver #2, who has Shadow’s powers too, but looks JUST like Silver. WHAT A TWIST! Now I’m not hating on Clones of characters. If you’re cloning Sonic, hoặc even doing a Silver #2 deal, it’s not BAD exactly, but it isn’t original. There are some characters that can pull it off like Starlight, but usually it doesn’t end well. If they have the same powers, then don’t make them LOOK like Silver hoặc Shadow hoặc Sonic. Just because you’re fast doesn’t mean the character has to be called “Sonica” hoặc “Sonia”.
F. I personally tình yêu to make attractive characters. And making beautiful girl characters, hoặc hot-dudes isn’t a bad thing when it’s a picture, but when rping it gets annoying when they say *You character blushes*. I personally have in my THIEF RP done something LIKE that.
“If your character is a guy, this would mainly be surprising, seeing how Kenfi is actually quite pretty, and rather non-thief-looking.” Notice I didn’t put “Your character blushes”. I could have, and in this case it wouldn’t be SO bad, but it’s still annoying. The point of this line I used was to emphasize that the surprise of someone finding out that the person trying to kill them turns out to be this beautiful ngẫu nhiên girl. I know what bạn might say. “But bạn đã đưa ý kiến that she’s beautiful. Some people might think she isn’t.” And bạn could say that, but I have actually been told that Kenfi is VERY attractive-looking bởi people, which helped me wager what I would do with this. So in short, bạn can make their eyes sparkle, bạn can make their hair shine, bạn can make their muscles huge, but let the people your rping with decide if they want to blush hoặc not.
G. Characters without weakness
Oh, My, Flagnob. Characters without weaknesses. Picture your character is trying to run away from an evil character. The evil character stu-ports your character to them, so your character tries to attack, but no matter what bạn use the STU just goes “HA HA HA! Pathetic! That can’t hurt me! I’m immortal”, which is really annoying. Also people go “*head grows back*” and such, then says “I’m immortal”. Here’s something bạn might want to know. IF YOU’RE IMMORTAL bạn SHOULDN’T BE ABLE TO GET HURT IN THE FIRST PLACE! I hate immortal characters. I have characters that are like that where they can’t be physically harmed, but even then bạn can make a weakness.
Example: Dimension 4 is a mobian core, so he cannot be physically harmed. He CAN however be drowned, hoặc die in không gian to an extent because he still needs air. Make your characters have a weakness that isn’t just some ngẫu nhiên song only one character knows about and only one character can use (No offense, Sara).
Now there’s one last thing I’d like to mention here. Demon characters. I know I’ve đã đưa ý kiến it before, but SERIOUSLY guys, WHY SO MANY OF THEM!?!?
1. Demons are evil! THEY AREN’T GOOD! THEY CAN’T TURN GOOD! THEY’RE thiên thần TURNED TO THE DEVIL FOR PETE’S SAKE! STOP MAKING THEM GOOD-GUYS UNLESS THEY STOP BEING DEMONS!
2. THERE ARE SO MANY! Now even if I wasn’t upset about demons in general, it would still annoy me that people use so many of them. We’ve got Demon-hybrids, demon-based-species, demon-demons, demon-forms, DEMON SONIC WAS A FAN-BASED SUPER FORM! IT’S NOT REAL! Is that what started all this? Because if it did, that just fits. Use other things. I almost NEVER… I’VE NEVER SEEN AN Angel CHARACTER YET! WHY DO WE HATE PURITY ALL OF THE SUDDEN!?
So that’s my danh sách of stuness. I know a lot of people are going to hate on this and disagree, but I think bạn can at least agree with some of it.
In short, just try to think of things that would make the rping fun, not ways to make your characters cool. Make weak characters once in a while. It’s really fun to be honest. I’ve got normal mobian characters that have NO powers whatsoever, and no special skills, and they have SUPER large rolls in my fan-fics.
Eat Pie and Prosper
Fly on the wings of love
Fly baby fly
Reaching the stars above
Touching the sky
In the summer night
When the moon shines bright
Feeling tình yêu forever
And the heat is on
When the daylight is gone
Still - happy together
There is just one thêm thing I would like to add
She is the greatest tình yêu I've ever had
Fly on the wings of love
Fly baby fly
Reaching the stars above
Touching the sky
And as time goes by
There is a lot to try
And I'm feeling lucky ooo yea
In the softest sand
Smiling hand in hand
tình yêu is all around me
There's just one thêm thing I would like to add
She is the greatest tình yêu I've ever had
Fly on the wings of love
Fly baby fly
Reaching the stars above
Touching the sky.
Fly baby fly
Reaching the stars above
Touching the sky
In the summer night
When the moon shines bright
Feeling tình yêu forever
And the heat is on
When the daylight is gone
Still - happy together
There is just one thêm thing I would like to add
She is the greatest tình yêu I've ever had
Fly on the wings of love
Fly baby fly
Reaching the stars above
Touching the sky
And as time goes by
There is a lot to try
And I'm feeling lucky ooo yea
In the softest sand
Smiling hand in hand
tình yêu is all around me
There's just one thêm thing I would like to add
She is the greatest tình yêu I've ever had
Fly on the wings of love
Fly baby fly
Reaching the stars above
Touching the sky.
Frostbite and Scarlet lived their normal lives when one night, a man named Grey experimented on a body swap potion gone wrong. The blast hit Scarlet and Frostbite in their sleep, causing them to switch bodies. After making a conclusion in the morning, they tried to continue with each other's lives until they found a cure. Frostbite did just fine, but Scarlet was having trouble with Frostbite's relationship. Will Scarlet be able to push through, hoặc will Frostbite's relationship with Aqua come to an end?
Blood's Past
Chapter Five
West Returns trang chủ
A Week Later...
Miles and Zoey are asleep when there is a knock at the door. Erica walks to the door and opens it "West your home! "Where are the kids?"
"Asleep why"
"I need to tell bạn something about Miles"
Miles wakes up and went to get a cup of water then he heard the conversation so he started eavesdroping.
"One of the Doctors told me about Miles blood work, he has a trace of chaos power"
"As in chaos ngọc lục bảo power?"
"Yes... he has powers others can only dream of"
"Miles, our son, is a living chaos emerald"
"basically, yes i know this is a lot to take in so lets go get some sleep"
Miles hurried into his room and acted like he was sleeping. West walks to Miles room"I know your not sleeping Miles" Miles sits up in his giường "Is it true dad?"
"Yes, bạn do have special powers son but the câu hỏi is what will bạn do with them?"
Chapter Five
West Returns trang chủ
A Week Later...
Miles and Zoey are asleep when there is a knock at the door. Erica walks to the door and opens it "West your home! "Where are the kids?"
"Asleep why"
"I need to tell bạn something about Miles"
Miles wakes up and went to get a cup of water then he heard the conversation so he started eavesdroping.
"One of the Doctors told me about Miles blood work, he has a trace of chaos power"
"As in chaos ngọc lục bảo power?"
"Yes... he has powers others can only dream of"
"Miles, our son, is a living chaos emerald"
"basically, yes i know this is a lot to take in so lets go get some sleep"
Miles hurried into his room and acted like he was sleeping. West walks to Miles room"I know your not sleeping Miles" Miles sits up in his giường "Is it true dad?"
"Yes, bạn do have special powers son but the câu hỏi is what will bạn do with them?"
Conene Arulekki
Bloody Hell. Siren is late, again. Not like I'm surprised, I don't really care about the physco either. I didn't even know if it was a boy hoặc a girl.
bởi now, my phone was vibrating. It was Siren texting me. How fun.
Siren; ello lovve
Conene; bạn bloody idiot, get your đít, mông, ass over here.
Siren; I tình yêu you, too~ ♥
..... What the in the seven Hells is wrong with it.
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It was nine bởi the time Siren showed up, I was asleep bởi then. Now, why in the Hell would I give him my key? Who the Hell knows, I might have been drunk that night. Now I regret it. Oh wait, I'm in my room. I tend to always lock it when I'm sleepy. Score
Siren Orizano
I miss that little asshole, Conene~♥ I unlocked his door and shut it behind me. He wasn't anywhere down stairs. Aw man, he's upstairs. That, I don't have a key for. Ahah, Little asshole, I'll find bạn some day~ ♥
Bloody Hell. Siren is late, again. Not like I'm surprised, I don't really care about the physco either. I didn't even know if it was a boy hoặc a girl.
bởi now, my phone was vibrating. It was Siren texting me. How fun.
Siren; ello lovve
Conene; bạn bloody idiot, get your đít, mông, ass over here.
Siren; I tình yêu you, too~ ♥
..... What the in the seven Hells is wrong with it.
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It was nine bởi the time Siren showed up, I was asleep bởi then. Now, why in the Hell would I give him my key? Who the Hell knows, I might have been drunk that night. Now I regret it. Oh wait, I'm in my room. I tend to always lock it when I'm sleepy. Score
Siren Orizano
I miss that little asshole, Conene~♥ I unlocked his door and shut it behind me. He wasn't anywhere down stairs. Aw man, he's upstairs. That, I don't have a key for. Ahah, Little asshole, I'll find bạn some day~ ♥
NAME: trái cam, màu da cam the Hedgehog
GENDER: Male
POWERS: He can control fire, he can control ice, he can control electricity, he can control earth, he has super-speed, he can fly, he is super-strong and he is invincible
GIRLFRIENDS: Every girl in the series
LOOKS: An trái cam, màu da cam hedgehog with black eyes
BACKSTORY: His hometown was pwned bởi Eggman and hiz family was killed so he wantz REVENGE!!!3!!!
SUPER FORM: His super form is darker trái cam, màu da cam and he still has black eyes and ALL THE POWERS IN THE WORLD!!!OMG!!
HYPER FORM: His hyper form is exactly like his Super Form except he is neon orange
DARKSPINE FORM: His super form with white stripes and no pupils
DARK FORM: The same as his Darkspine form
WEREHOG FORM: He is exactly like Sonics’ except orange
GENDER: Male
POWERS: He can control fire, he can control ice, he can control electricity, he can control earth, he has super-speed, he can fly, he is super-strong and he is invincible
GIRLFRIENDS: Every girl in the series
LOOKS: An trái cam, màu da cam hedgehog with black eyes
BACKSTORY: His hometown was pwned bởi Eggman and hiz family was killed so he wantz REVENGE!!!3!!!
SUPER FORM: His super form is darker trái cam, màu da cam and he still has black eyes and ALL THE POWERS IN THE WORLD!!!OMG!!
HYPER FORM: His hyper form is exactly like his Super Form except he is neon orange
DARKSPINE FORM: His super form with white stripes and no pupils
DARK FORM: The same as his Darkspine form
WEREHOG FORM: He is exactly like Sonics’ except orange
Name: Scorch the Werehog
Gender: Male
Powers: Strong, and fire
Likes: Hunting, fighting, video games
Dislikes: chó sói, sói vein plant, demons, too many thêm to list...
Appearance: Red with trái cam, màu da cam fur, black claws (nails), sharp teeth, and has brown eyes. His (My) shoes are green, purple, and blue.
Short Bio: When Scorch was born, he was actually born a hedgehog. But a evil echidna didn't like that Scorch even existed. So, he put a curse on Scorch that made him a werehog ngày and night. Scorch's parents weren't too thrilled about that but tried to raise him as a normal kid. (you can see how I turned out)
Gender: Male
Powers: Strong, and fire
Likes: Hunting, fighting, video games
Dislikes: chó sói, sói vein plant, demons, too many thêm to list...
Appearance: Red with trái cam, màu da cam fur, black claws (nails), sharp teeth, and has brown eyes. His (My) shoes are green, purple, and blue.
Short Bio: When Scorch was born, he was actually born a hedgehog. But a evil echidna didn't like that Scorch even existed. So, he put a curse on Scorch that made him a werehog ngày and night. Scorch's parents weren't too thrilled about that but tried to raise him as a normal kid. (you can see how I turned out)
In honour of the Horn of Gripey Justice, I propose a scenario article, in place of a scenario question. Go!
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Walking down the đường phố, street is a woman dressed in pale blue with a parasol and a purse, who smiles at the passing people.
Following closely behind is a man in a white áo choàng weilding a halberd, which glints wickedly.
Seemingly unexpectant and helpless, the woman may need help.
Though, depending on your character's alignment, he hoặc she may do something... different.
***
The roleplay will function like a real street, with many people. But, I suppose that was implied.
Have fun, and keep it PG-13.
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Walking down the đường phố, street is a woman dressed in pale blue with a parasol and a purse, who smiles at the passing people.
Following closely behind is a man in a white áo choàng weilding a halberd, which glints wickedly.
Seemingly unexpectant and helpless, the woman may need help.
Though, depending on your character's alignment, he hoặc she may do something... different.
***
The roleplay will function like a real street, with many people. But, I suppose that was implied.
Have fun, and keep it PG-13.
Yxari is a Scorpio. Somehow, I'm freaked out at the coincidences. I, in the beginning, made her birthday November the 1st--Scorpio territory-- before even đọc Homestuck. I did not know any astrological dates whatsoever, I had yet to find out what sign she was. At the time, I didn't care. So I created Ana-Lysa, giving her metal hands and such. I read Homestuck. Vriska Serket's arm is mechanical-- Ana-Lysa's hands. Vriska is sometimes ruthless and cold-- Yxari's attitude. Vriska's puffy hair-- Yxari's puffy hair. Mindfang's a bitch, so is Ana-Lysa.
What a string of coincidences, eh? I just now-- well, a few hours ago, looked up Yxari's sign. I'm freaked out, since my mother and I are litterally psychic.
What a string of coincidences, eh? I just now-- well, a few hours ago, looked up Yxari's sign. I'm freaked out, since my mother and I are litterally psychic.