"Emily, Emily. Wake up!"Sonic đã đưa ý kiến to Emily."What is it Sonic?" Emily said."I just want it to tell bạn that it's x-mist!"Sonic đã đưa ý kiến leaving. "Ok and?"Emily said."The presents are here bạn stupid bíćh!"Sonic đã đưa ý kiến leaving."Ok ok but tiếp theo time don't yell at me bạn @$$hole!"Emily đã đưa ý kiến to Sonic who who was leaving."Ok but bạn should open your present." Sonic đã đưa ý kiến leaving only for Shane to come in."Emily,get out of your room."Shane đã đưa ý kiến in a sweet voice."Why should I!?" Emily said."Because your diễn xuất like your sister Jisseca." Shane đã đưa ý kiến in a much thêm sweeter voice(if bạn know what I mean)"You know the thêm bạn talk sweet to me, the thêm I get thêm meaner!"Emily đã đưa ý kiến in a hush voice."I know that." Shane đã đưa ý kiến in a sweet sweet voice."SHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP!"Emily đã đưa ý kiến a really really mad voice."You know if bạn want it me to go bạn should it have told me ."Shane đã đưa ý kiến in a nice voice."Shane I'am sorry." Emily đã đưa ý kiến in a almost whispering voice."It's ok Emily, it's bạn that I'm sorry about you."Shane đã đưa ý kiến in ummm in a sad voice."Ok, but I mean about you, the girl that bạn loved."Emily đã đưa ý kiến in a sad voice."Emily let's not get in to my life, what about your mother & sister?"Shane said."I left them to die , and now my sister hates me!"Emily đã đưa ý kiến in a sad voice."Dose it matter?" Shane said."My sister wants to KILL me now!"Emily đã đưa ý kiến in a sad & mad voice."Emily I have to go now."Shan said."Ok Shane, goodbye." Emily đã đưa ý kiến only to find out the he was gone. Will thats all folks! Tell me how it was ok!
So why am I remaking it? Well the series was the first fanfiction series I made and when I did it wasn’t really well written, plotholes galore, so I wanted to remake it completely. But at the same time I didn’t want to redo it because of all the ideas I had.
So what I’m doing is rewriting the story, and keeping it as it was, but making some changes along the way. This way the original story will be there but it will be written better. I’ll add some other parts into it, but rest assured it’s not a reboot, just an edited version.
So what I’m doing is rewriting the story, and keeping it as it was, but making some changes along the way. This way the original story will be there but it will be written better. I’ll add some other parts into it, but rest assured it’s not a reboot, just an edited version.
I was breathing deeply at the time from my running " Stop following me Marcos", i screamed at him. "But your the princess i must protect you",Marcos replied."protect this fool" i started to run but that stupid dress i tripped on it."still don't need to be protected", he reached out i his hand."fine, bạn can co...". He covered my mouth with his hand. "Shh i hear something".he pulled out his sword and held it back. The five gurads came out holding some bluue long haired guy. He came down and circled Marcos and me. Blue guy said"This calls for one thing... Celebaration."Well, aparrently his name was jess,prince jess aqua."so your from the capitial"he asked."yes, i left because it was boring and i didnt belong there." Marcos rapidly đã đưa ý kiến "but we're going back tomorrow". I turned my head fast "What, no i'm not"'.