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Dose anyone have a tile sugestion and is this any good?

Have bạn ever been hurt bởi the one bạn love
Have bạn ever wanteed to change
Who bạn were, who bạn are, who bạn will be
Feeling as though your life is all laid out
Wondering why bạn have the life bạn have
bạn have it for a reason
Figure it out!

Have youo ever been hurt bởi the one one bạn love
Have bạn ever felt so betrayed
That bạn wanted to die
Don't give up
Things will change...for the best

Have yoou ever tired to change the world
With just a song
Try to change a tim, trái tim just bởi saying "hello"

Have bạn ever though bạn had true love
Then found it in a total stranger
Have bạn ever had so much hate
Then saved a soul that was dying alone

All of us have in one way hoặc another
Live life your way
The futures always changing








 MattxAliceNine posted hơn một năm qua
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BittenGirl said:
wooow!that is amazing!you should write thêm poems because bạn are really good!
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irena83 said:
It's a nice poem, emotional, partly dark but filled with a hope.
Suggestions for the tittle could be:
- Eternal struggle
- Pieces of living hope
- Wondering mind
;)
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