Is this a good poem and do bạn think thêm could be added?

Please be honest

We had such fun
Trying anything to talk to eachother
We'd find away
But then it stopped
We hardly spoke hoặc saw one another
We were a couple
And a really cute one to
Afraid of my reaction
bạn had a friend deal with the brake up
They wrote a note
And I thought it was a joke
One from a friend
A secret admirer
hoặc your brother
Hearing from my sister
It was no joke
bạn đã đưa ý kiến it was akward
And that bạn still tình yêu me
But I think I pushed bạn too far
What did I do
To make bạn push me away
It may sound strange but
I still want bạn in my life
Even if as a a friend
I'll b e here for bạn even if
The rest of the world leaves you
I won't
I'll stay
But if bạn want me back
Prove bạn won't hurt me again
Never again bạn will bạn hurt me
The same way twice
Cause boy
bạn fucked up