Percy Jackson và Olympians

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Thoughts on my made up prophecy? ^__^

My horrible attempt at a Prophecy for my fanfic. :D Be honest please... I need to know if it sounds catching and makes bạn want to read thêm about it...

Four halfbloods shall embark on a quest
to the land of the rising sun
where what they seek shall rest.
Taken bởi the one slain bởi twins
'Tis the one seeking revenge, changing skins.
Three shall be of the eldest gods
while one shall be of the goddess of thoughts.
Succeed they might, fail they may
for one shall meet the end of their days
in that lurks Death.

So...what do bạn think? Mysterious enough to keep the reader's attention? Gives away too much? FEEDBACK APPRECIATED! xx
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In the land that reeks Death* Sorry :P
cuteypuffgirl posted hơn một năm qua
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I like it but who goes on the quest?
alex31234 posted hơn một năm qua
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wats the tiêu đề of the fanfic
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Nicolicious said:
Great it's really mistifiying it's better than the one i suggested
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bạn kidding? bạn inspired me! :D
cuteypuffgirl posted hơn một năm qua
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Really I inspired someone :O
Nicolicious posted hơn một năm qua
sideshowbobbart said:
I like it although I think it reveals a bit too much as we can immediatly guess who the four halfbloods shall be and it maybe should be a bit thêm mysterious ...
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Actually Zeus's kid will not be Thalia, she'll be an OC of mine.
cuteypuffgirl posted hơn một năm qua
Nikita15 said:
It sounds awesome!!! Love, love, tình yêu it!!
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Thanks :)
cuteypuffgirl posted hơn một năm qua
silver93 said:
Um, I don't think Athena would appreciate being referred to as the Goddess of thoughts. It sounds like they're going to Japan, are bạn incorporating Japanese Gods?
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percabethandchb said:
Its perfect 4 percy jackson!
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greeksrule11 said:
soory it's good but its to obvious and the four poeple on the quest so easy its percy Thalia and nico which are the "three shall be of the eldest gods" everyone one knows that the eldest gods which are male are zeus poseidon and hades.and the last is annabeth i mean serouisly "while one shall be of the goddess of thoughts." everyone knows athena is the only smart goddess with a child.
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Technically the eldest god who would have children is Demeter.
nixiedover posted hơn một năm qua
mslone90 said:
It reveals too much information regarding what they are to do, and all letters must be capitalized in the beginning of each line.
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nixiedover said:
Most prophecies hoặc four hoặc six lines long, so there's that.
And no offense, but it wasn't that great a prophecy...
But that's just the prophecy itself, the plot and suspense of this book is just like, " What's gonna happen? tell me. TELL ME hoặc I EAT YOU."
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Minus the obviousness of who's going on the prophecy...
nixiedover posted hơn một năm qua
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And some other stuff, but that's it
nixiedover posted hơn một năm qua
ShortPerson said:
YES YES I WANT TO READ THIS! LINK?
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