Critical Analysis of Twilight

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I've been thinking...

I am currently an English-Creative nghề viết văn major in college, and I've been turning over an idea in my head for a while now. I want to practice on my own first 'novel.' I'm aware of copyright infringement and all that (I'm going to put a disclaimer XD), but I was thinking of rewriting Twilight. In my own way. Not as a parody, but with developed characters and a good storyline and plot. I think that Twilight had some potential in the hands of a capable author, and from what I've heard, I'm a pretty good writer.

I was going to write it as a fanfic on fanfiction.net. What do bạn think? I'm still on the edge of deciding whether I'll do it hoặc not. If bạn like hoặc dislike the idea say so, but just be polite please. And if bạn have ideas for it FANTASTIC! :D My email address is ladyvampresslilith@yahoo.com; please send me your ideas. It could be about anything to do with Twilight to make it better.

Please tell me what bạn think! Thank you!

LadyLilith (aka LadyCat aka Shelby) ♥
 LadyLilith posted hơn một năm qua
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Twilight_Dream said:
well, thinking that its a bad story is YOUR opinion. not fact. so please dont make it like it is. and what do bạn mean in the hands of a good d author? twilight was Stephenie Meyer's idea. no one els's. otherwise it wouldn't BE twilight. and rewriting it saying that YOU'LL make it better like your some accomplished tác giả makes it seem like your really full of yourself. so i would say no. im sorry if i haven't been polite but its just i got really ticked off seeing this question.
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I apologize that it made bạn angry, I was simply asking a question. No, I am not full of myself; I am actually the exact opposite. It took many other people saying that I was a good writer to consider this, and I still don't wholly believe them. I am no accomplished author; I never đã đưa ý kiến it once. It's a fanfic, so I can write it if I decide to do so; I will put the disclaimer on it saying that it is Stephenie Meyer's work. It would simply be an experiment of my abilities as an author. I personally think Ms. Meyer is not a good author, and I think that she could have made Twilight into a way better, thêm well written series than what it is. I am curious as to what my version would be like.
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but how could that offend someone so much? it seems childish.
Twilight_Dream posted hơn một năm qua
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can bạn please take one một giây to stop being rude and sarcastic?
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friendsfan101 said:
Well, I'd tình yêu to see a story!
Even though I'm a người hâm mộ of Twilight, I don't think that SM is the best writer, now that I look back on Twilight, it kind of...sucks. (No offense, Twilight_Dream, I know bạn tình yêu Twilight!) I think that it'd be cool to read a re-write of it. I don't think that it would be too bad, because there are a large numbers of Lọ lem re-writes and nothing bad's happened. I'm all for it!
Of course, you'd have to write that bạn don't own Twilight if bạn put it up online, and I'm guessing that bạn would have to tweak some of the names and some aspects of the plot if bạn ever đăng lên it, but I'd tình yêu to read a story! I hope bạn write it, and please, tell me when bạn do! I'd enjoy đọc it. =)
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^-^ Thank bạn for your support! I'm thinking I may; once I've written some of it, I will post up a link. :)
LadyLilith posted hơn một năm qua
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Cool! I can't wait to read it. =)
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Queenoftard said:
Personally, I think it's a brilliant idea. I've been toying with the idea myself.
I don't really have any specific ideas yet, as I'm pretty occupied with other projects, but I would tình yêu to read your version.
Will bạn tell me if bạn do decide to write it? hoặc maybe bạn could just give me your tên người dùng on fanfiction.net?
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My tên người dùng on fanfiction.net is AikaOokami, and I might post a link to the first chapter up on the spot as well, if Dearheart doesn't see an issue with it. If bạn come up with any ideas for character hoặc story development, please email me hoặc message me and let me know and we can discuss it. People have đã đưa ý kiến that I'm a decent writer, but any help I can get is much appreciated. :)
LadyLilith posted hơn một năm qua
Dearheart said:
It's very true and very tragic...Twilight had a LOT of potential, but it was squelched and turned into a teeny-bopper drool fest. In the right hands, it could've turned out to be a genuinely great series.

If bạn want to rewrite Twilight "LadyCat style", then bởi all means, go ahead. As long as bạn don't try to đăng lên hoặc sell it, I don't think you'll run into any trouble. And I think it could be a fun and interesting way for bạn to exercise your nghề viết văn skills. However, I think it only fair to warn that link has already been done. So make sure your version stands out from the others people have done.

And hey, if bạn get creative enough with the plot and the characters, maybe bạn could change their names and đăng lên it as an original work someday! ^__^
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Ah ha, LadyCat style. I like that. :) Thank you. As I said, if bạn got any ideas for character changes/flaws hoặc ideas for the storyline, please contact me and discuss it with me. Any help I can get I will gladly take. :)
LadyLilith posted hơn một năm qua
mandapanda said:
Hmm. I'm actually very interested in đọc your version. I know Stephenie Meyer has some *cough*many*cough* grammatical errors in the books, however, maybe it was because of her lack of nghề viết văn experience? We can't really be sure. I've heard The Host is pretty well written. LOL – Liên minh huyền thoại sorry. I'm getting off topic :)

As bạn know, I'm a huge Twilight fan, and I'm very curious as to how bạn will write your Twilight story. Will bạn be changing the main storyline? And will bạn add thêm time and developement to characters bạn feel had been cheated? And will bạn be nghề viết văn New Moon and the other sách if your story does well? Mainly, I really want Breaking Dawn to be REDONE! LOL – Liên minh huyền thoại I've found some rewrites, but not the way I wanted it haha

I tình yêu Twilight because it is personal. Dearheart had đã đưa ý kiến above that making your character a blank is not something bạn want as an author... however, I tình yêu that. There are alot of stories that have characters who are relatable and have relatable traits, but being able to become the character and how the story is told through the vessel (Bella), it further engulfs bạn and encaptures you. It's one thing to be captured and completely wrapped up in a book, but it's a whole different feeling when bạn feel like bạn are the character and bạn are in the story... My apologies if I sounded really corny there. LOL – Liên minh huyền thoại

And, I will be honest. Some of the points that bạn had đã đưa ý kiến in your introduction irked me a little, just because I think Twilight has a good storyline and plot, but I KNOW that it wasn't your intentions :) Anyways, yes! I'm interested in đọc what bạn would have liked Twilight to be :) Hopefully bạn don't get chopped for this question. I already see some opposing and defensive answers. But I tình yêu bạn and bạn have my support :)
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X3 I tình yêu bạn too, mandapanda! Thank bạn so much for your support. Ha, Breaking Dawn sounds like a great challenge. If I do well with Twilight, I would tình yêu to rewrite Breaking Dawn. I'm sorry that what I đã đưa ý kiến offended you, just my opinion as an English major. :) I definitely want to refine and develop the characters. The thảo luận in my mind is what should stay and what should go as far as the story of whole goes. I want it to remain true to the original storyline, but there are some things I would like to alter as well. Anyways, thank bạn so much again. If bạn have any ideas at all about changes in the storyline hoặc in the characters, please let me know. :)
LadyLilith posted hơn một năm qua
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Oh and about Stephenie Meyer, I think that she may be a good author. All I have read of hers is the Twilight series, and in my opinion she rushed through it and got it published without properly going back on it and editing it to improve her basic ideals. I believe that all writers should do that before presenting a finalized piece of work, and I just don't think she did.
LadyLilith posted hơn một năm qua
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No need to apologize! Opinions are great! LOL – Liên minh huyền thoại and yes. Breaking Dawn will be a hefty challenge! haha I will input on Breaking Dawn if bạn decide to re-write it! haha I have been told a few times that I have a future as a writer (LOL, i don't think so), and I was thinking about nghề viết văn Breaking Dawn the way I wanted it, but I think it'd be too much! And I would constantly chỉnh sửa my work. Haha I always do that! But good luck with your story! I look phía trước, chuyển tiếp to seeing how it differs from the original!
mandapanda posted hơn một năm qua
this-is-my-name said:
Sounds like an interesting idea... I'd tình yêu to read your version if bạn decide to write it.

Just please, for the tình yêu of god, fix Bella!
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Oh, that's DEFINITELY happening.
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violetbabe said:
Yes! bạn should definitely do it. I know that if a capable tác giả rewrote Twilight, it would be excellent. :)
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Yes, I believe so too. :) Not saying I'm that author, but I'd like to see what I can do with it.
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snoznoodle said:
It is a great idea! I used to like the book and if it wasn't for this spot and the twi-hards I probably still would. If it was written bởi someone who knows what they're doing I think it would solve my issues with it :)

Get to work! :D
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XD Yes ma'am! *Salute* And I'm touched that bạn have so much faith in me! I'll try not to let bạn down!
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MadamOcta13 said:
I think that's an amazing idea! I would so read it if someone else redid it! I'd tình yêu a good vampire tình yêu story (not a bad Meyerpire lust story)! bạn should make Bella have so much thêm depth and personality...I'm actually thinking about this now...I'm tempted to do the same (but I probably won't).
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Well any ideas bạn got, bạn can throw at me. :) I might make a diễn đàn on here where people can give me ideas and we can all discuss it together. Bella is definitely something I plan on working on.
LadyLilith posted hơn một năm qua
hpfreak14 said:
bạn rewriting it reminds me of something that happened today.

In english my teacher đã đưa ý kiến "I have to read Twilight for my descriptive nghề viết văn class. (yes teachers go to school to learn how to teach)The first few pages were descriptive. If it was written with less pages bởi a better tác giả i think i would enjoy it more"

basically every twilight người hâm mộ was really annoyed. Not many students in my class like him now but others adore and respect him.

The thought of bạn rewriting it brought that up in my mind.

I would read it also if bạn did
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Well I'm glad the whole world's not going to hell. No offense intended towards Twilight hoặc Stephenie Meyer. XD Thank you!
LadyLilith posted hơn một năm qua
sleazy_weasley said:
@Twilight_Dream: bạn were incredibly rude to Lady Lilith; she đã đăng a perfectly good question, and bạn just accused her of being up herself, which she was not. She was merely stating her opinion on Twilight, and how she would like to recreate it.

In my own opinion, I think it is a brilliant idea! It would be interesting to read Twilight in a well-written form with developed characters - seeing as Meyer failed to do so.

Can't wait to read it on Fanfiction! :D Good luck! xox

P.S. When bạn finish it, send us all a link!
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X3 Thank bạn very much, sleazy_weasley. I will definitely let bạn know when the first chapter's out.
LadyLilith posted hơn một năm qua
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see, this is what happens any time i try to post MY opinion. i get jumped on like a pack of dogs.
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i didnt mean it literally. and bạn know that.
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italiangirl976 said:
I think it is a bad idea. It was Stephenie Meyer's idea. Not yours.
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Understandable.
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bookworm12345 said:
Twilght hAs no potinetial I wouldn't bother trying make ur own I'd rather read ur orignial ideas
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Hmmm, I don't agree with the first part (even as anti Twilight as I am). But I'm pleased that you're interested in my other works. :) I have đã đăng a lot of thi ca on my deviantart account in the link here if bạn would like to read it: link
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rachaelwsz said:
I'm actually kinda curious how your version will turn out... so I say: Do it. =)



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Oh and I forgot to mention... Breaking Dawn! I think that's a challenge... So a rewrite should be interesting... =)
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Ohhh yeah. *Cracks knuckles* Breaking Dawn should be something. LOL – Liên minh huyền thoại
LadyLilith posted hơn một năm qua
MrazBell10 said:
Well....I think... it's a good idea...
I want to see how it turns out...
I'm a little offended because...you see...I'm a Twilight fanatic...and...I read the Twilight Saga over and over again...
but I want to see it with other's point of view...
As a bookworm...
PLEASE!!! IF bạn FINISH THE WHOLE TWILIGHT SAGA PLS. E-MAIL IT AT MY ACCOUNT IN YAHOO: mraz_bell10@yahoo.com

Thanks...
♥ ya'...

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Hey, bạn know what? It's perfectly understandable that you're a bit offended, and that's just fine. I think it's really, really great that you're a Twilight fanatic, but that you're civil to the people who don't like it. That's thêm than I can say for other Twi-fans I've run into. So keep it up! You're awesome! (Bookworms FTW!) =)
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katiecain said:
DO IT AND DON'T MURDER JACOB'S CHARACTER LIKE STEPHENIE DID, LADYCAT. KTHX? :) ♥
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XDDD That's one of the things that will change. As GrintCat đã đưa ý kiến somewhere else...he won't be humping Renesmee's leg bởi the end of it. hoặc something like that, it was funny. XD
LadyLilith posted hơn một năm qua
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ya atleast make him imprint on a human please.i am begging u
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'he won't be humping Renesmee's leg bởi the end of it' HA HA HA HA HA.
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Matsy23 said:
cool!!!!! thats a pretty good idea!!!!! ^^
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Book_freak said:
It could work, just try to do it better than the origonal. Not that it could be worse :P lol
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snusnu13 said:
OMG when are bạn going to write it? it sounds fantastic. I was considering re-writing it for my enjoyment. I would like to see Bella with some convincing flaws and Edward with some flaws, any flaws!

I think it wouldn't be that difficult to re-write the bad book series, maybe do a alternate version where it is scientifically correct so Renesmee cant possibly exist, that would be cool.

I think it would be way awesome and please leave a bình luận on my response when it's up on fanfiction.net.

And for all people who think S.Meyer is a great writer, please reconsider because personally, I think she should recieve some critism and not be so uptight about it.

JK Rowling and HP 4 Eva!
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OMG when are bạn going to write it? it sounds fantastic. I was considering re-writing it for my enjoyment. I would like to see Bella with some convincing flaws and Edward with some flaws, any flaws! I think it wouldn't be that difficult to re-write the bad book series, maybe do a alternate version where it is scientifically correct so Renesmee cant possibly exist, that would be cool. I think it would be way awesome and please leave a bình luận on my response when it's up on fanfiction.net. And for all people who think S.Meyer is a great writer, please reconsider because personally, I think she should recieve some critism and not be so uptight about it. JK Rowling and HP 4 Eva!
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XDDDD Omg. I'm majoring in English, so 'unpossible' cracked me up. I feel like such a dork lol. But yes, I will certainly let bạn know. ^-^
LadyLilith posted hơn một năm qua
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thanks, i really hope bạn do it
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