lâu đài [xy xx] Runaway while bạn can

I decided to make my first người hâm mộ fiction about lâu đài and Beckett so constructive criticism is appreciated. Please comment.




"It's getting late, we should sleep on it." lâu đài đã đưa ý kiến looking at his watch.
Beckett looked up from the papers she was reading.
"Separately!" lâu đài stammered quickly.
Beckett lowered her eyes to the floor.
"Katherine Beckett, I never..." lâu đài whispered as he headed for the door.
"Well, why not, Castle? Am I not attractive enough for you?"
"No." lâu đài đã đưa ý kiến turning around.
Beckett got up from her chair and walked over to Castle. "Then what is it? Don't bạn sleep with...