Well.
now that I'm getting requests. And so glad that my raging reviews aren't going into death ears (I mean on fanfiction. There enjoyed on Fanpop).
anyways.
I tend to review old well known.
But eventually I'll probably start reviewing well known fanpop stories as well.
anyway.
I have been asked to review Young tình yêu bởi Kyuubi99/Kitsune32.
This marks the forth time I reviewed something bởi a friend of mine. The others are Bravobravo (blood of the south), Alexthelonewolf (Lilly's opposite side/?Humphrey loses it), Dragonsoul (K300).
Unfortantly, I'm still yet to see the sequels, and see it's about those cubs that are introduced in the một giây movie.
Speaking of witch.
i probably used this joke before.
But what the hell kinda name is RUNT hoặc STINKY!?
I mean.
Come on LionGate. bạn guys could do better then that. I mean that sounds like something you'd call a chuột that was stealing all your cheese, hoặc a baby brother bạn were tricked into babysitting, and he won't leave bạn the fuck alone all afternoon. If it were me I would call him Lucas hoặc better yet some badass, like Killer, blood tooth, hoặc even Hunter (like in the story BLOOD OF THE SOUTH).
But hey. What the hell do I know, I'm an Irish Canadian, who never even SEEN a wolf, hoặc even Jasper.
but I DID close. I been to Banff several times. Shit. bạn should see those mountains. Who knew giant rocks can be so... Beautiful.
Uhhhh.. Anyway.
onto the story.
not sure what to say.
I got kinda lazy and skinned though much of it.
But. Hey.
No sex.. As far as I could tell.
I'm getting tired of having to read though all these stupid over the hàng đầu, đầu trang sex scenes. It's bad enough Sparatcus dose it.
but hey. I would STILL be the one recommending Sparatcus. It's focused directly on giving over the hàng đầu, đầu trang battle sequences, while ripping off 300 styles of fighting. The black messager who Leonardis dramatically kicks down the well after saying the know world famish quote, has one of the best roles of Sparatucus.
But still. What wracked out time zone back then. Blood and murder was something of great enjoyment and practically legal, nudity is found everywhere bạn go (in one episode a nude woman is used as a bàn for food). And slavery is all the rage.
Game of Thrones is much the same. Murder comes easy back then, bạn feel little regret towards your actions, because it's all people did back then. Kinda like the purge. Only, it's EVERY FUCKIN DAY! And not just the one occasion. But hey. Why would bạn 'want' to kill. Shit! I would just steal flat screens, and hijack sports cars. The gun won't even be loaded, it'll just be for intimidating porposes, like in Kick đít, mông, ass 2.
No wonder people only lived up to their 30's hoặc something.
But back to the story.
what can I say.
its a 'feel good' story for the most part.
Classic tình yêu story.
Those are usually enjoyable in terms of Alpha and Omega fanfics.
Not sure if I have anything worse mentioning about the story. I will probably reread it at some point.
But all in all.
Thumbs up to the writer.
well. Till tiếp theo time.
ConnorNoiles/Canada24
now that I'm getting requests. And so glad that my raging reviews aren't going into death ears (I mean on fanfiction. There enjoyed on Fanpop).
anyways.
I tend to review old well known.
But eventually I'll probably start reviewing well known fanpop stories as well.
anyway.
I have been asked to review Young tình yêu bởi Kyuubi99/Kitsune32.
This marks the forth time I reviewed something bởi a friend of mine. The others are Bravobravo (blood of the south), Alexthelonewolf (Lilly's opposite side/?Humphrey loses it), Dragonsoul (K300).
Unfortantly, I'm still yet to see the sequels, and see it's about those cubs that are introduced in the một giây movie.
Speaking of witch.
i probably used this joke before.
But what the hell kinda name is RUNT hoặc STINKY!?
I mean.
Come on LionGate. bạn guys could do better then that. I mean that sounds like something you'd call a chuột that was stealing all your cheese, hoặc a baby brother bạn were tricked into babysitting, and he won't leave bạn the fuck alone all afternoon. If it were me I would call him Lucas hoặc better yet some badass, like Killer, blood tooth, hoặc even Hunter (like in the story BLOOD OF THE SOUTH).
But hey. What the hell do I know, I'm an Irish Canadian, who never even SEEN a wolf, hoặc even Jasper.
but I DID close. I been to Banff several times. Shit. bạn should see those mountains. Who knew giant rocks can be so... Beautiful.
Uhhhh.. Anyway.
onto the story.
not sure what to say.
I got kinda lazy and skinned though much of it.
But. Hey.
No sex.. As far as I could tell.
I'm getting tired of having to read though all these stupid over the hàng đầu, đầu trang sex scenes. It's bad enough Sparatcus dose it.
but hey. I would STILL be the one recommending Sparatcus. It's focused directly on giving over the hàng đầu, đầu trang battle sequences, while ripping off 300 styles of fighting. The black messager who Leonardis dramatically kicks down the well after saying the know world famish quote, has one of the best roles of Sparatucus.
But still. What wracked out time zone back then. Blood and murder was something of great enjoyment and practically legal, nudity is found everywhere bạn go (in one episode a nude woman is used as a bàn for food). And slavery is all the rage.
Game of Thrones is much the same. Murder comes easy back then, bạn feel little regret towards your actions, because it's all people did back then. Kinda like the purge. Only, it's EVERY FUCKIN DAY! And not just the one occasion. But hey. Why would bạn 'want' to kill. Shit! I would just steal flat screens, and hijack sports cars. The gun won't even be loaded, it'll just be for intimidating porposes, like in Kick đít, mông, ass 2.
No wonder people only lived up to their 30's hoặc something.
But back to the story.
what can I say.
its a 'feel good' story for the most part.
Classic tình yêu story.
Those are usually enjoyable in terms of Alpha and Omega fanfics.
Not sure if I have anything worse mentioning about the story. I will probably reread it at some point.
But all in all.
Thumbs up to the writer.
well. Till tiếp theo time.
ConnorNoiles/Canada24
xin chào this is the first of i hope to be many chapters which i would like to post 1 a ngày and maybe 2 on weekends
one ngày on thursday in the middle of april i was walking along minding my own stuff when suddenly a car came flying out of no were and nearly hit me but bearly missing me i stood there speechless and then about 3 cop cars came out of the same spot the other car did and trampled me crushing every bone in my body blacking out i had died
unknown time later
i woke up feeling like 3 cars trampled me (which they did)bearly able to di chuyển i just lay there till i felt something lift me up onto its back and carry me off somewhere to weak to fight back i just stayed still and let what ever it was carry me to where ever it was going
one ngày on thursday in the middle of april i was walking along minding my own stuff when suddenly a car came flying out of no were and nearly hit me but bearly missing me i stood there speechless and then about 3 cop cars came out of the same spot the other car did and trampled me crushing every bone in my body blacking out i had died
unknown time later
i woke up feeling like 3 cars trampled me (which they did)bearly able to di chuyển i just lay there till i felt something lift me up onto its back and carry me off somewhere to weak to fight back i just stayed still and let what ever it was carry me to where ever it was going
verse 1:
i realised
i missed a day
electirc shock turned my head away
i then thought "is there something wrong"
with my burnin face
why the heck cant i feel the pace
bridge:
dont want to find out
just want to get out!
chorus:
tesla shock
tesla shocked
ive really been tesla shocked
ooooo tesla shocked
ow! shock me!
verse 2:
the lightning bolt
the shocked my mind
so sad i was to leave it behind
but my eyes had turned black as coal
im now Mất tích in a deep shock hole
bridge:
dont want to find out
just want to get out!
chorus:
tesla shock
tesla shocked
ive really been tesla shocked
ooooo tesla shocked
ow! shock me!
bridge 2:
circuitry
along configuration
shocking this
territory
knocks everybody out
tesla shock
the power is what its all about!
Solo
chorus:
tesla shock
tesla shocked
ive really been tesla shocked
ooooo tesla shocked
ow! shock me!
i realised
i missed a day
electirc shock turned my head away
i then thought "is there something wrong"
with my burnin face
why the heck cant i feel the pace
bridge:
dont want to find out
just want to get out!
chorus:
tesla shock
tesla shocked
ive really been tesla shocked
ooooo tesla shocked
ow! shock me!
verse 2:
the lightning bolt
the shocked my mind
so sad i was to leave it behind
but my eyes had turned black as coal
im now Mất tích in a deep shock hole
bridge:
dont want to find out
just want to get out!
chorus:
tesla shock
tesla shocked
ive really been tesla shocked
ooooo tesla shocked
ow! shock me!
bridge 2:
circuitry
along configuration
shocking this
territory
knocks everybody out
tesla shock
the power is what its all about!
Solo
chorus:
tesla shock
tesla shocked
ive really been tesla shocked
ooooo tesla shocked
ow! shock me!
The third howl. Humphrey got up and ran faster than he ever had before to the alpha station.
"Whats the matter is someone hurt?!" Humphrey đã đưa ý kiến painting.
He looked at the other alphas but did not see Kate. The others looked in shock.
"Where's Kate?!"
"Humphrey, Kate didn't make it, a hunter snuck up on them and killed her." Winston said.
Humphrey froze, he felt like a statue of glass that had been broken into a million pieces.
"No." Was all Humphrey could say.
Winston nodded.
Humphrey looked at thw only alpha that looked like it could speak.
"What happened?" Humphrey đã đưa ý kiến with his eyes still huge from the suprise.
"Kate was shot bởi a hunter in cỏ behind her, we chased the hunter off but it was too late. She told me to tell bạn to give all of your tình yêu that bạn gave to her to someone else. AKA, find someone else."
"Whats the matter is someone hurt?!" Humphrey đã đưa ý kiến painting.
He looked at the other alphas but did not see Kate. The others looked in shock.
"Where's Kate?!"
"Humphrey, Kate didn't make it, a hunter snuck up on them and killed her." Winston said.
Humphrey froze, he felt like a statue of glass that had been broken into a million pieces.
"No." Was all Humphrey could say.
Winston nodded.
Humphrey looked at thw only alpha that looked like it could speak.
"What happened?" Humphrey đã đưa ý kiến with his eyes still huge from the suprise.
"Kate was shot bởi a hunter in cỏ behind her, we chased the hunter off but it was too late. She told me to tell bạn to give all of your tình yêu that bạn gave to her to someone else. AKA, find someone else."
To help get into the giáng sinh spirit. There will be thêm after this.
Kate: Deck the halls with boughs of holly,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Tis the season to be jolly,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Kate: Don we now our gay apparel,
Fa la la, la la la, la la la.
Troll the ancient Yule tide carol,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Kate: See the blazing Yule before us,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Strike the harp and tham gia the chorus.
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Kate: Follow me in merry measure,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
While I tell of Yule tide treasure,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Kate: Fast away the old năm passes,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Hail the new, ye lads and lasses,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Kate: Sing we joyous, all together,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Heedless of the wind and weather,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
What'd bạn Người sói think?
Kate: Deck the halls with boughs of holly,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Tis the season to be jolly,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Kate: Don we now our gay apparel,
Fa la la, la la la, la la la.
Troll the ancient Yule tide carol,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Kate: See the blazing Yule before us,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Strike the harp and tham gia the chorus.
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Kate: Follow me in merry measure,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
While I tell of Yule tide treasure,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Kate: Fast away the old năm passes,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Hail the new, ye lads and lasses,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Kate: Sing we joyous, all together,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Heedless of the wind and weather,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
What'd bạn Người sói think?
Note: This is not made up, and I Am NOT FUCKING with bạn people!
Lilly: located In Boston Massachusetts on 12/4/11
How she was located:
Yesterday when I was in Boston, Massachussetts I was in a huge building with like a hundred different resterants all smushed togeather. It was soo crowded... then I saw a dog. IT was... it looked to be... Lilly in real life! I was about to pet her but a sample man hollered to me to try a sample so i glanced at him, then back at Lilly and she was faaarrrr away! Damm I should have taken a pic of her.
She was found only on that ngày bởi my knowledge
Lilly: located In Boston Massachusetts on 12/4/11
How she was located:
Yesterday when I was in Boston, Massachussetts I was in a huge building with like a hundred different resterants all smushed togeather. It was soo crowded... then I saw a dog. IT was... it looked to be... Lilly in real life! I was about to pet her but a sample man hollered to me to try a sample so i glanced at him, then back at Lilly and she was faaarrrr away! Damm I should have taken a pic of her.
She was found only on that ngày bởi my knowledge
tác giả note: this is how Jakob gets in the story. Its written from his point of veiw. Zmanz is jakob in the story. thats not his name and he isn't gay, just so bạn know. This will be a very short chapter.
I was still on the stupid bus. Now that Dillon got off the asshole (Tony) was bugging the shit out of me! Finally after the one millionth mom, joke, and calling me gay, i got off the buss, and he chased after me! Shitt, Tony is too fast! I doged trees and ran into the forest, and he trapped me in a cave! He was about to tackle me and kill me when i fell in a tiny ditch, and it was bottomless! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Thud! he hit ground and passed out.
I was still on the stupid bus. Now that Dillon got off the asshole (Tony) was bugging the shit out of me! Finally after the one millionth mom, joke, and calling me gay, i got off the buss, and he chased after me! Shitt, Tony is too fast! I doged trees and ran into the forest, and he trapped me in a cave! He was about to tackle me and kill me when i fell in a tiny ditch, and it was bottomless! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Thud! he hit ground and passed out.