xin chào ppl! My last part was uh... Well I didt write it has well. So if this one is the same way just tell me becuae I'm trying to be the best writer I can! Thx for all the support and seanthehedgehog I'm sorry bout Bartholomew!!! I feel so bad :...(
"Oh hello princess!" Red rose đã đưa ý kiến has she hastily put down her head so the princess could not see her face turning red. Coffee cream put down her head and rolled her eyes "I told you, bạn can't say those things in puplic anymore!"
Rose lifted her head and have an awkward smile "uh, what I đã đưa ý kiến back their i didt really mean it. I Just uh was, well bạn know-" rose stuttered out but her stuttering was stopped bởi twilight sparkles hysterical laughing. "Didt mean it? Of course bạn meant it! He's so cute and all!" The princess gave a squeal of excitement and started to skip around the train station.
Red rose and coffee cream stood and watched the princess skip around for about five phút hoặc so until flash and tropical breeze showed up. "What's up with twilight?" Asked flash. Rose shrugged her shoulders. "She's been skipping Like this for a couple minutes. I don't know if I'm supposed to be worried hoặc not." The whole kingdom of Cantorlot must of heard that the princess was at the train station, because as twilight was skipping thêm and thêm of the Cantorlot citizens showed up.
"Don't worry guys!" đã đưa ý kiến breeze "I know how to stop her freaky skippingness!!" Breeze got her pineapple suitcase and grabbed something out: Toopie. "What do bạn need toopie for" asked coffee cream. Breeze just smiled and walked back a couple steps. "1.... 2.... 3!!!" Yelled breeze has she ran forward, at one moment during the run she threw toopie into the air.
"PLOOOOOOO!!" Toopie screamed has he was thrown across the train station, and landed on twilights back. As tropical breeze had đã đưa ý kiến it stopped her skipping, "see guys? I told bạn it would work!" Breeze looked at everyone triumphantly. Everyone started to clap, except at that momment twilight sparkle fell to the ground with toopie still sitting on her back.
Everyone was quiet. Coffee cream grabbed tropical breezes head "YOU KILLED THE PRINCESS!!!! THE KINGDOM IS LOST!" After that, as well as it can be đã đưa ý kiến everyone ran around hysterically. People where piling into trains, knocking over elderly ponies, and screaming as loud as could be. lâu đài guards were being knocked out bởi rocks and purses as well.
~~~~~~~~ three hours later~~~~~~~~~
"My first time in Cantorlot" đã đưa ý kiến rose "and I'm in jail." Red rose was knocking her head against the cell tường in a bored fashion. Coffee cream and tropical breeze were sitting on the cot and swinging their hind legs back and forth. "How was I supposed to know twilight sparkle was deathly allergic to octopus? It's a weird allergy!" Breeze đã đưa ý kiến almost crying. Coffee cream patted breezes back. "It will be ok, just wait for your uncle. He'll come help." Coffee cream was trying to lift their sprits, but obviously it wasn't working.
Red rose stopped banging her head long enough to talk to the guard That was watching their cell. "Hey! I Didt even throw the octopus! Why do I have to be in here?! It was her!" She đã đưa ý kiến pointing to tropical breeze. At this point breeze started crying. "Rose!" Cried cream, "stop being mean! Your the one who punched the palace guard for getting in your way!" The guard, arched his eyes and made a face,it might have been scary exept TAHT he had had a black eye That red rose had được trao him.
"Sorry bout That." đã đưa ý kiến red rose, "you got in my way!" The guard sneered "I was trying to save the princess of dying of octopus! How is That thêm important the getting the last coffee in equestria?" Coffee cream stepped in the conversation "I thought becoming a princess made bạn immortal hoặc something?!" The guard sighed. "You country fold..." He shook his head and got up. He trotted down the black hallway.
Tropical breeze sniffled. "I'm really sorry guys, I didt know this would happen..." Red rose grabbed tropical breezes shoulders "hey, it's ok. REmember was cream said? Your uncle will get us out. And it was a complete accident!" As rose was cheering up breeze was inspecting a cup that was in the corner of the cell. "Seriously, why do they put a cup in the middle of no where?!" This made tropical breeze actually laugh "That's not a ngẫu nhiên cup!! HAHAHAHAHA that's the BATHROOM!!" Coffee cream shrieked and threw the cup at the wall. "THAT'S SO UNSANITARY!!"
"Oh hello princess!" Red rose đã đưa ý kiến has she hastily put down her head so the princess could not see her face turning red. Coffee cream put down her head and rolled her eyes "I told you, bạn can't say those things in puplic anymore!"
Rose lifted her head and have an awkward smile "uh, what I đã đưa ý kiến back their i didt really mean it. I Just uh was, well bạn know-" rose stuttered out but her stuttering was stopped bởi twilight sparkles hysterical laughing. "Didt mean it? Of course bạn meant it! He's so cute and all!" The princess gave a squeal of excitement and started to skip around the train station.
Red rose and coffee cream stood and watched the princess skip around for about five phút hoặc so until flash and tropical breeze showed up. "What's up with twilight?" Asked flash. Rose shrugged her shoulders. "She's been skipping Like this for a couple minutes. I don't know if I'm supposed to be worried hoặc not." The whole kingdom of Cantorlot must of heard that the princess was at the train station, because as twilight was skipping thêm and thêm of the Cantorlot citizens showed up.
"Don't worry guys!" đã đưa ý kiến breeze "I know how to stop her freaky skippingness!!" Breeze got her pineapple suitcase and grabbed something out: Toopie. "What do bạn need toopie for" asked coffee cream. Breeze just smiled and walked back a couple steps. "1.... 2.... 3!!!" Yelled breeze has she ran forward, at one moment during the run she threw toopie into the air.
"PLOOOOOOO!!" Toopie screamed has he was thrown across the train station, and landed on twilights back. As tropical breeze had đã đưa ý kiến it stopped her skipping, "see guys? I told bạn it would work!" Breeze looked at everyone triumphantly. Everyone started to clap, except at that momment twilight sparkle fell to the ground with toopie still sitting on her back.
Everyone was quiet. Coffee cream grabbed tropical breezes head "YOU KILLED THE PRINCESS!!!! THE KINGDOM IS LOST!" After that, as well as it can be đã đưa ý kiến everyone ran around hysterically. People where piling into trains, knocking over elderly ponies, and screaming as loud as could be. lâu đài guards were being knocked out bởi rocks and purses as well.
~~~~~~~~ three hours later~~~~~~~~~
"My first time in Cantorlot" đã đưa ý kiến rose "and I'm in jail." Red rose was knocking her head against the cell tường in a bored fashion. Coffee cream and tropical breeze were sitting on the cot and swinging their hind legs back and forth. "How was I supposed to know twilight sparkle was deathly allergic to octopus? It's a weird allergy!" Breeze đã đưa ý kiến almost crying. Coffee cream patted breezes back. "It will be ok, just wait for your uncle. He'll come help." Coffee cream was trying to lift their sprits, but obviously it wasn't working.
Red rose stopped banging her head long enough to talk to the guard That was watching their cell. "Hey! I Didt even throw the octopus! Why do I have to be in here?! It was her!" She đã đưa ý kiến pointing to tropical breeze. At this point breeze started crying. "Rose!" Cried cream, "stop being mean! Your the one who punched the palace guard for getting in your way!" The guard, arched his eyes and made a face,it might have been scary exept TAHT he had had a black eye That red rose had được trao him.
"Sorry bout That." đã đưa ý kiến red rose, "you got in my way!" The guard sneered "I was trying to save the princess of dying of octopus! How is That thêm important the getting the last coffee in equestria?" Coffee cream stepped in the conversation "I thought becoming a princess made bạn immortal hoặc something?!" The guard sighed. "You country fold..." He shook his head and got up. He trotted down the black hallway.
Tropical breeze sniffled. "I'm really sorry guys, I didt know this would happen..." Red rose grabbed tropical breezes shoulders "hey, it's ok. REmember was cream said? Your uncle will get us out. And it was a complete accident!" As rose was cheering up breeze was inspecting a cup that was in the corner of the cell. "Seriously, why do they put a cup in the middle of no where?!" This made tropical breeze actually laugh "That's not a ngẫu nhiên cup!! HAHAHAHAHA that's the BATHROOM!!" Coffee cream shrieked and threw the cup at the wall. "THAT'S SO UNSANITARY!!"
Blazin' is happy with his day, until he notices that a drawing of a pony he mysteriously finds on the ground doesn't go into making an actual character.
one of the most infamous and hated episodes of the show.... and for good reason, too.
where to even start with this thing? it gets EVERYTHING wrong! literally everything! from the lame premise, to the horrible execution, the brutal butchering of the characters, the pathetic "comedy", the Student 6 being pushed to the sidelines, the mean-spirited tone.... i literally can't think of anything they got right in this episode.
people say this one would've been better if it happened during the earlier seasons (like from S1-S3), but for me personally: i think it would've been better if Non-Compete Clause NEVER happened at all. like seriously, bạn could xóa the episode from the tổng thể canon, and nothing would change. no value would be lost.
this episode is nothing thêm than a waste of time and space.
where to even start with this thing? it gets EVERYTHING wrong! literally everything! from the lame premise, to the horrible execution, the brutal butchering of the characters, the pathetic "comedy", the Student 6 being pushed to the sidelines, the mean-spirited tone.... i literally can't think of anything they got right in this episode.
people say this one would've been better if it happened during the earlier seasons (like from S1-S3), but for me personally: i think it would've been better if Non-Compete Clause NEVER happened at all. like seriously, bạn could xóa the episode from the tổng thể canon, and nothing would change. no value would be lost.
this episode is nothing thêm than a waste of time and space.
THE tiếp theo DAY:
CRYSYAL EMPIRE:
Saten: Me?
Twilight: Yes.. Starlight really seems to like you, so bạn can be the one to help Starlight find her old friend, Sunburst.
Saten: ... Can I bring Derpy?
Twilight: (giggles) of coarse bạn can.. But Spike is going two, I don't have any jobs for him.
Saten: Fine, fine.
Twilight: Then it's settled! Shining Armor and I will head straight to the castle, and bạn two can head straight to Sunburst's!
Spike: Aye-aye, Princess!
Starlight: [nervously] Uh-huh.
Twilight: (to Shining) Alright, big brother, let's go see this amazing baby pony!
Shining Armor: [snoring] Ahhh... the baby...
CRYSYAL EMPIRE:
Saten: Me?
Twilight: Yes.. Starlight really seems to like you, so bạn can be the one to help Starlight find her old friend, Sunburst.
Saten: ... Can I bring Derpy?
Twilight: (giggles) of coarse bạn can.. But Spike is going two, I don't have any jobs for him.
Saten: Fine, fine.
Twilight: Then it's settled! Shining Armor and I will head straight to the castle, and bạn two can head straight to Sunburst's!
Spike: Aye-aye, Princess!
Starlight: [nervously] Uh-huh.
Twilight: (to Shining) Alright, big brother, let's go see this amazing baby pony!
Shining Armor: [snoring] Ahhh... the baby...
