Think my plots good?

Okay so Puleaveh is just a land in a different world. dwarves bạn know of and elves too. Dondurs are like leprechauns only they arent like how most media portrays them now. They all hate each other because of a series of things, but they dont want to destroy their world so they signed a treaty to have no wars. Men were very reckless and had many wars. Eventually dwarves and elves drove them out and they left Puleaveh. The men found refuge in a few isles off to the northwest. Now their land was invaded bởi the Tenebris, its just pure all bad emotions. It takes a host sometimes, but when it dosent it appears as a black mist. Some men escaped and came to Puleaveh, while others were tortured to madness. Now thats pretty much when Milgas goes on his quest

As bạn might have noticed, Tolkien was my inspiration. My bad guy isnt a guy at all. Its emotion. bạn see there was a creature before all creatures. On that could create life, rise mountains and such, They were created to make the physical features of Puleaveh. One tried to create a thing that would destroy all evils. Instead it turned into evil itself. It took control of this creature and made him have a war with the others. Eventually they beat the evil and sent it to somwhere unknown. And the host was turned to stone once it left him. For all of his good emotions were driven out bởi the evil. Now when it dosent have a host its just a black mist. Now the henchmen are kinda like orcs i guess, i dont know maybe i should change it.

Oh I see, yeah that's a bit thêm original. bạn could have some evil orcs, maybe most of them could be evil, what I just meant was that there are a lot of people who write stories like that and the entire race is evil, which often ends up making the story rather cliched. That's just my view though-if it's written well and the characters are identifyable, that's probably all that really matters. :)

since they were once men, and were mutated into the creatures ( I call them Foeda) maybe some were Công chúa tóc xù and kept a piece of their old self left deep inside. And when the time came, they made their choice. :)