Seriously what do bạn think of this as a story?? (No, y ma cà rồng dont sparkle in the sunlight)

Mary Beech is a 10 yr old girl and she is a Gemmer, Gemmers are people with Gems on their left palms, like a birthmark. They can be a ruby, topaz, ngọc lục bảo hoặc sapphire. And a circle, heart, teardrop hoặc square-cut. Mary is special because she's the first Star, the first person to have the ngôi sao sign on their palm, of which consits of a half-heart, half-teardrop-cut Gem, which in Mary's case is a ruby.
On her 11th bday, the dream she has is of a hot boy biting her neck, tiếp theo ngày she wakes up a type two vampire, which is a vampire who has humanity within them, and drinks animal blood because human blood is poison to them. But she is a SPECIAL vampire too, (not saying!)
When she goes to the Gemmer school, she finds that a fayrie, an enemy of vampires, is hiding. But this fayrie is being whispered to from evil voices beyond the grave. And they are twlling her to kill all the ma cà rồng in the school, MAry first because of her special thing.

But what's depressing is, that only 12 people other than herself know both her secrets:
One: she's Mary Beech;
Two: she's a type two vampire.

Those people are: three vampires: Mark (boy in dream) Valerie and Tarry (two other type twos); 6 humans, Keziah, Xerin, Breena (frends) Sapphire (second cousin) Tandy Meltibar (headmistress) and Devein (ex-best frend from primary skool) and two fayries: evil one and her sister and her Guardian.

Guardians are like personal maps, dead ma cà rồng and Gemmers. They lead the alive vampire to their destiny, and decide when to depart.
There is a Guardian Leader, Selene, hoặc Vampire Goddess, and the Vampire God, Zagreus.

ONe ngày a week, a Thursday in Mary's case, type two ma cà rồng are 1/2 human so they can grow until 18, unless bitten of the age of over 18. Type twos can also be born vampires.

There is way more! Feel free to question!
But dont say anything like it's cr*p, just say bạn dont like it if yu dont!
Its gonna be the 1st of 5 of the ngôi sao of Blood series, and its gonna be called