Sorry if the chapters come a little slow. Right now I'm traveling so... well bạn know how things are. haha
I have gotten a suggestion to make the story have thêm emotion and action so I am going to try and add some of that. Hope it's good!
Disclamer: I....... do not............. own.......... Twilight......... hoặc any of its characters. Stephanie meyer does.
(I wish I did though) :(
One night it got bad so Zach invited me to go hunting with him. I was trying not to think of him So I distracted myself bởi focusing on my prey. A fully grown mountain lion. I lunged for it and drained it.I hadn't even noticed the hiker watching me untill it was to late. I had let our secret slip to a human! How could I have been so careless?
I quickly killed him but knew deep down that there would be a punishment for breaking the most important rule even though the human no longer lives.
Bella POV
I didn't want to kill the poor human and the một giây I snapped his neck I felt a pang of guilt.
"I know it's hard Bella. That's one of the reasons that bạn are a vegetarian, but if bạn hadn't done it then Aro would have and then he would have suffered a thêm painful death."
đã đưa ý kiến Zach, seeming to have seen the extra emptiness in my eyes. I looked at him and forced a smile.
"That's true. I suppose it was for the better but I still feel guilty. If I had been paying attention-"
Zach interupted me, "No! If we had been paying attention, then this wouldn't have happened. I am just as much of fault. I didn't notice him either."
Sigh.....
"Oh and I suggest we get out of here." he continued, "The volturi will be coming soon and I personally don't feel like dying today if that's what I even do."
"'kay let's go." I said.
Personally I don't care if the volturi find me. I'd rather be dead anyway. But I do have to protect Zach. He won't leave without me. He cares to much.
I feel a little bad. I have been with him now for about a tháng and a half and I can tell he likes me but I can't give him what he wants. My tim, trái tim is already taken.
We ran for about 2 hours but then had to stop and hunt. We didn't get to finish what we started because of our little run in with the human.
So after about three deer and a chịu, gấu I was ready to go. I walked back to were I told Zach we would meet up after hunting but he wasn't there.
About an giờ passed and still no Zach. I decided to go out and look for him. I soon came across his scent and followed it."AHHHH!"
ZACH! It was Zach's scream. I started running and about a một phút later I saw him. He was lying on the ground, dead. tiếp theo to his corps were three men. Correction, three vampires. I froze in shock. My best friend!
"Who are you? Why did bạn kill him?" I shouted at them.
The one on the right with long, blond hair answered, "You have broken a rule so bạn must be punished. We are members of the volturi coven," he pointed to himself and the girl in the middle. "My name is Alec and this is Jane. Our leader here is Aro." He pointed to the tall man with black hair on the end.
"I've heard of you." I said.
"Oh well then, I guess we don't need to explain why we are here hoặc what our powers are." đã đưa ý kiến Aro
"Let's just get this over with!" đã đưa ý kiến the girl who is named Jane.
"One moment. I would like to know a little about her first." Aro đã đưa ý kiến as he grabbed my hand.
Zach had told me about Aro's power to read minds and see into your past so I just let him look.
Good luck trying to see anything. I have my shield up and there's no way bạn are breaking it down!
There is no need to let anyone see into my past at my hurt. "hm... interesting," he mumbled. "I cannot read your thoughts. How is that possible. bạn seem to be immune to my gift.......................... I wonder, Jane dear. Shal we see if she is immune to your power as well."
Jane stepped forward, "we shal," she đã đưa ý kiến then looked into my eyes. Suddenly I felt a sharp stabbing pain trying to penitrate my shield. Jane took another step phía trước, chuyển tiếp as she tried to push her power even harder. "It won't work," I said.
"Why is that? Alec?" asked Aro
"I'll try..." đã đưa ý kiến Alec and I felt another sharp pain in my shield.
"Ahahahaha PERFECT!" Exclaimed Aro.
"Just get my punishment over already! Kill me!" I finally said. I can't take this anymore! Just kill me!
Aro spoke again, "My dear-"
I interupted him again. "Bella" he abviously didn't know my name.
"Bella," he repeated, "You broke the most important law of our kind but I am willing to oversee that if bạn are willing to tham gia us."
"But she must be killed! bạn know what she did!" yelled Alec and Jane together.
"True.... Well let's go back trang chủ and we will talk about it. Here is not the right place." Aro replyed calmly.
Alec and Jane started running and Aro encouraged me to follow. "Let me say goodbye." I said. With that I bent down and kneeled tiếp theo to Zach.
"Zach," I started, not even caring that Aro was listening, "I am so sorry I let this happen to you. bạn never should have befriended me. bạn took me in when I was broken and helped me learn to use my powers. But most importantly, bạn gave me a friend. bạn were the only one I could trust. Everyone else has abandoned me. I tình yêu you, like a brother. Goodbye." On the outside I probably looked like my empty lifeless self but on the inside I was breaking.
"Ok I'm ready." I đã đưa ý kiến and started running in the direction that Alec and Jane had ran. I caught their scent and ran up to them. They were easy to catch with the speed I was able to run at. Aro was still far behind me.
I ran up beside Jane and she looked at me and slowed a little in surprise, I shot right past her but then started to slow back down to her pase, fore I do not know where I was suppose to go.
Ok this was short but I had to go. I promis that I will try to make the tiếp theo chapter longer. các bình luận always help!
Rate and Review please!
;)
I have gotten a suggestion to make the story have thêm emotion and action so I am going to try and add some of that. Hope it's good!
Disclamer: I....... do not............. own.......... Twilight......... hoặc any of its characters. Stephanie meyer does.
(I wish I did though) :(
One night it got bad so Zach invited me to go hunting with him. I was trying not to think of him So I distracted myself bởi focusing on my prey. A fully grown mountain lion. I lunged for it and drained it.I hadn't even noticed the hiker watching me untill it was to late. I had let our secret slip to a human! How could I have been so careless?
I quickly killed him but knew deep down that there would be a punishment for breaking the most important rule even though the human no longer lives.
Bella POV
I didn't want to kill the poor human and the một giây I snapped his neck I felt a pang of guilt.
"I know it's hard Bella. That's one of the reasons that bạn are a vegetarian, but if bạn hadn't done it then Aro would have and then he would have suffered a thêm painful death."
đã đưa ý kiến Zach, seeming to have seen the extra emptiness in my eyes. I looked at him and forced a smile.
"That's true. I suppose it was for the better but I still feel guilty. If I had been paying attention-"
Zach interupted me, "No! If we had been paying attention, then this wouldn't have happened. I am just as much of fault. I didn't notice him either."
Sigh.....
"Oh and I suggest we get out of here." he continued, "The volturi will be coming soon and I personally don't feel like dying today if that's what I even do."
"'kay let's go." I said.
Personally I don't care if the volturi find me. I'd rather be dead anyway. But I do have to protect Zach. He won't leave without me. He cares to much.
I feel a little bad. I have been with him now for about a tháng and a half and I can tell he likes me but I can't give him what he wants. My tim, trái tim is already taken.
We ran for about 2 hours but then had to stop and hunt. We didn't get to finish what we started because of our little run in with the human.
So after about three deer and a chịu, gấu I was ready to go. I walked back to were I told Zach we would meet up after hunting but he wasn't there.
About an giờ passed and still no Zach. I decided to go out and look for him. I soon came across his scent and followed it."AHHHH!"
ZACH! It was Zach's scream. I started running and about a một phút later I saw him. He was lying on the ground, dead. tiếp theo to his corps were three men. Correction, three vampires. I froze in shock. My best friend!
"Who are you? Why did bạn kill him?" I shouted at them.
The one on the right with long, blond hair answered, "You have broken a rule so bạn must be punished. We are members of the volturi coven," he pointed to himself and the girl in the middle. "My name is Alec and this is Jane. Our leader here is Aro." He pointed to the tall man with black hair on the end.
"I've heard of you." I said.
"Oh well then, I guess we don't need to explain why we are here hoặc what our powers are." đã đưa ý kiến Aro
"Let's just get this over with!" đã đưa ý kiến the girl who is named Jane.
"One moment. I would like to know a little about her first." Aro đã đưa ý kiến as he grabbed my hand.
Zach had told me about Aro's power to read minds and see into your past so I just let him look.
Good luck trying to see anything. I have my shield up and there's no way bạn are breaking it down!
There is no need to let anyone see into my past at my hurt. "hm... interesting," he mumbled. "I cannot read your thoughts. How is that possible. bạn seem to be immune to my gift.......................... I wonder, Jane dear. Shal we see if she is immune to your power as well."
Jane stepped forward, "we shal," she đã đưa ý kiến then looked into my eyes. Suddenly I felt a sharp stabbing pain trying to penitrate my shield. Jane took another step phía trước, chuyển tiếp as she tried to push her power even harder. "It won't work," I said.
"Why is that? Alec?" asked Aro
"I'll try..." đã đưa ý kiến Alec and I felt another sharp pain in my shield.
"Ahahahaha PERFECT!" Exclaimed Aro.
"Just get my punishment over already! Kill me!" I finally said. I can't take this anymore! Just kill me!
Aro spoke again, "My dear-"
I interupted him again. "Bella" he abviously didn't know my name.
"Bella," he repeated, "You broke the most important law of our kind but I am willing to oversee that if bạn are willing to tham gia us."
"But she must be killed! bạn know what she did!" yelled Alec and Jane together.
"True.... Well let's go back trang chủ and we will talk about it. Here is not the right place." Aro replyed calmly.
Alec and Jane started running and Aro encouraged me to follow. "Let me say goodbye." I said. With that I bent down and kneeled tiếp theo to Zach.
"Zach," I started, not even caring that Aro was listening, "I am so sorry I let this happen to you. bạn never should have befriended me. bạn took me in when I was broken and helped me learn to use my powers. But most importantly, bạn gave me a friend. bạn were the only one I could trust. Everyone else has abandoned me. I tình yêu you, like a brother. Goodbye." On the outside I probably looked like my empty lifeless self but on the inside I was breaking.
"Ok I'm ready." I đã đưa ý kiến and started running in the direction that Alec and Jane had ran. I caught their scent and ran up to them. They were easy to catch with the speed I was able to run at. Aro was still far behind me.
I ran up beside Jane and she looked at me and slowed a little in surprise, I shot right past her but then started to slow back down to her pase, fore I do not know where I was suppose to go.
Ok this was short but I had to go. I promis that I will try to make the tiếp theo chapter longer. các bình luận always help!
Rate and Review please!
;)
Since the link I was going to put up isnt working. I'm going to put this as an article.
The hàng đầu, đầu trang 10 Sexiest Screen Couples:
1. Ryan ngỗng con, gosling & Rachel McAdams (THE NOTEBOOK): 14%
2. Brad Pitt & Angelina Jolie (MR. & MRS. SMITH): 10%
3. Richard Gere & Julia Roberts (PRETTY WOMAN): 9%
4. Patrick Swayze & Jennifer Grey (DIRTY DANCING): 6%
5. Leonardo DiCaprio & Kate Winslet (TITANIC): 5%
6. Patrick Swayze & Demi Moore (GHOST): 4%
7. Robert Pattinson & Kristen Stewart (TWILIGHT): 4%
8. Heath Ledger & Jake Gyllenhaal (BROKEBACK MOUNTAIN): 3%
9. Brad Pitt & Geena Davis (THELMA & LOUISE): 3%
10. Johnny Depp & Juliette Binoche (CHOCOLAT): 2%
Rob and Kristen make it to number 7! I'm happy!!!
The hàng đầu, đầu trang 10 Sexiest Screen Couples:
1. Ryan ngỗng con, gosling & Rachel McAdams (THE NOTEBOOK): 14%
2. Brad Pitt & Angelina Jolie (MR. & MRS. SMITH): 10%
3. Richard Gere & Julia Roberts (PRETTY WOMAN): 9%
4. Patrick Swayze & Jennifer Grey (DIRTY DANCING): 6%
5. Leonardo DiCaprio & Kate Winslet (TITANIC): 5%
6. Patrick Swayze & Demi Moore (GHOST): 4%
7. Robert Pattinson & Kristen Stewart (TWILIGHT): 4%
8. Heath Ledger & Jake Gyllenhaal (BROKEBACK MOUNTAIN): 3%
9. Brad Pitt & Geena Davis (THELMA & LOUISE): 3%
10. Johnny Depp & Juliette Binoche (CHOCOLAT): 2%
Rob and Kristen make it to number 7! I'm happy!!!
Edward's Pov.
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? hoặc later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? hoặc later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!